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Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Tightrope
Hope you enjoyed the wedding... I hope we soon get to read the rest of "The Kiss"
Reviewer: sashainspain (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Tightrope
Hope the wedding was fun! Thank you for continueing to write an awesome story. I love it. I guess I'm a nuetral party in terms of the two 'camps' you have mentioned on this story. I think the story is meant to be written teh way you deem fit. I'm enjoying the ride.
Reviewer: shereelouise60 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Tightrope
great story can not wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Tightrope
I don't think I could have waited any longer for the kiss - but I have every confidence that there will still be some angsty moments while they work through all their baggage.
Wonderful story :) I hope you update soon... in the meantime I can have a life again now I've finished what you've written so far ;-)
Reviewer: KatieBee8 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Tightrope
Yay!! Finally :). It's now 4:38am (I seem to like sharing the time with you - it shows my love of your story, clearly) and I have, once again, spent hours reading this! Like many, many others, I just really love this story. It's raw and realistic. You don't shy away from the real emotion that each character would be going through, namely Bella. Sometimes authors make their characters get over things way too quickly, I love that you haven't done that. You've made me laugh out loud, squeal with excitement and tear up, all within the amazing 34 chapters that have had me totally captivated these past few days. Once again, a huge thank you and I look forward to the update to come. :D
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Fine
HOly shit, i was not expecting that, WOW....lol i cannot stop reading :)
Reviewer: KatieBee8 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Scarred
I actually squealed aloud during this chapter. FYI: I never squeal.
So, yeah, I loved this chapter!
Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Tightrope
I've just discovered this story and am really enjoying it. Please say there will be more?! :) x
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Tightrope
I don't believe I got to the end of this. I hope so much that you update soon. By the way, I think your pacing is great. I don't like all the angst but it is what is needed here. Isn't life one step forward, two steps back??? Thanks so much for writing
Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Crushed
oh wow!!!!! *clapping*
I love this story so much - it's totally the best fan fiction I have read to date. You write so well and this story is so well crafted. It's utterly convincing and just as well written as the original.... possibly even better (sorry Stephanie ;-))
I can't wait to see how it pans out! I hope you're still writing - I have a few chapters to go yet, I only started today and haven't got anything done and have been mostly ignoring my family LOL!
x
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Pumpkins
Very good, I love this chapter. I think this is my fav chapter, well it's a tie between this one and Emmett and Jasper in the sporting goods store. Awesome.
Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Shakespeare
I loved this chapter - I've only just found this story so will be working my way through it, but I had a leave a review for this chapter.
Bella and Edward reading Romeo and Juliet's kissing scene - inspired!! That's just so perfect :) :)
and I'm PMSL at your chapter end note!
x
Reviewer: tigerlilee84 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Tightrope
Holy. Crap.
This is by far among the best fanfic I've ever read. And yes, I know I'm a biased fangirl, but whatever. And yes, I did actually shout "about freakin time!!" to my computer when I read this chapter. ANYWAY... I have been lurking on here for a while, Edward-like, but I wanted to comment and tell you what a fantastic story this is and that I love the way you write. You capture all of the characters so well in the way that SM created them but you mold them to your story so seamlessly! Gah. Ok, I'll stop drooling now! :)
Reviewer: KatieBee8 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Monster
Oh my god! How can I go bed now?? Wow, I wasn't expecting that!! It was like Twilight & New Moon events in one chapter, what a rollercoaster. I actually teared up at one point. Wow. Just wow. It's now 4:19am, and I've read 13 chapters of your story today. I actually love it. I'm glad you wrote this chapter the way you did; it shows you know Edward's character and I think you got his reaction spot on. You've got me tad obsessed here! Hehe. Will have to read on tomorrow, thanks for entertaining me and having me gripped the whole day!! :D
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Tightrope
THE KISS deserves a gold plated popcorn basket! It comes at perfect time. Something big to hang onto while you throw us as much anguish as you think we deserve.
Reviewer: KatieBee8 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Truth
Ok, it's now 3:38am here and I promised myself I would go bed after this chapter. But I CAN't now!! I have to read the next one. I thought Leah knowing was very believeable and I think you got Bella's emotions spot on too. :D
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Uninvited
Have to go to bed now. Can't wait to finish.
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Fine
Oh I'm so glad :)
Reviewer: KatieBee8 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Sparks
I am going to admit something which never in the history of my Twilight obsession have I EVER admitted. So, you should feel very proud. Are you ready??
You actually made me prefer Jacob and up until this chapter, I actually was more for him than Edward! *hides and cries* I've always, always been Team Edward. Until you spun the story in this incredible way, and now I love both of them! And Jacob more..until I read this chapter. And now I feel I may be torn between them.
I have spent hours reading your story today. It's captivating, it really is. I love it. Thank you so much for sharing. I love the pace that you set. It's slow, but it's perfect. It doesn't feel rushed at all. I just love how Edward & Bella are falling in love! And I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it *squeals*
Can say with no doubt whatsoever, that this is one of the best Twilight fanfics I have ever read. And I've read loads. Very well done. Amazing :)
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Over
You know what I would really love to read. Edward's POV. I know this is Bella's story but I love to hear Edward. Not that I'm expecting anyting, I just wanted you to know. This is a fantastic story! Thanks
Reviewer: Rhett (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Tightrope
Dedication: Checking for an update everyday for weeks, realizing, once one has been posted, that you can no longer remember the story at all, and going back and re-reading every single chapter until you've finished said updates.
Oh yes. You've got some dedicated readers.:) Loved it, obviously.
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Sixty Seconds
GREAT CHAPTER! I only went on detention one time, in kindergarten, a misunderstanding, of course but really you are making detention and dishwashing something to look forward. YOU ARE EVIL!
Reviewer: KatieBee8 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Giddy
I loved this chapter, it was great fun to read :). I really like your writing style.
Reviewer: MarianStanwood (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Friends
I just came across this last night. I'm not usually one to read fanfic reworks of a book I enjoy, but I've gotten sucked into this and am even neglecting housework, chores and badly-needed grocery shopping to read!
Reviewer: Rufus (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Tightrope
I love your stroy, but there is one thing that doesn't make sense to me (could be that I'm just not reading it right). First you write:
“Sometime between Sunday and this morning, he—or one of his…friends—hand-delivered a letter to my mailbox.”
And then you write:
Suddenly, he stopped short. “No one’s watching the house when you’re at school. It must have happened yesterday, during the day. The smell must havde dissipated by the time I arrived.”
I don't suppose Bella goes to school on Sunday's?
Keep up the good work!
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