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Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:27 PM · On: Truth
I LOVE IT!! You did a wonderful job! I like that Leah told her that he was a vampire!
Reviewer: sweeta8585 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:24 PM · On: Truth
SOOOO good.. you say that our reviews make your day... well I just want you to know that this story makes my day! I swear my heart started fluttering when I saw you had posted! haha. This chapter was so good but you are mean mean mean for leaving us with that cliffy! Can't wait for the next part!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:21 PM · On: Truth
Excellent! I am so glad that she stood up for herself and got the truth. I really hope now, she tells Edward the truth, that she is totally in love with him!
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:20 PM · On: Truth
That was an incredible chapter (and an awful cliffhanger)! Loved the ending. Can't wait to see what happens next! I hope you update soon (perhaps this weekend? maybe? please?)
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:13 PM · On: Truth
Hey man Go for it leave a cliff hanger but update soon dont leave me hanging for to long
Reviewer: shadyrenee323 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Truth
Great chapter!!! I can't wait for more! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:57 PM · On: Truth
I think your Alice is very much in character. Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:51 PM · On: Truth
That was perfect! Alice and Leah came out perfectly in character. Alice may not have been bouncing off the walls, but she can be extremely fierce when bella's being oblivious or uncounciously about to ruin something. The Leah in your story totally works. It reminded me a lot of Bella in new moon, except that Leah was more confrontational, which even normally, she is when compared to Bella. Loved the ending. Edward's finding her is the rain was perfect. And I totally don't mind not getting responses if you're going to write another chapter instead! LOVE IT! KEEP IT COMIN'!
Reviewer: Breakinrachel (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:51 PM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
I LOVED this chapter, so much.... I have never read a fanfiction written so well thought out. You have all of the characters down to the "T"! Great job, and I cannot wait until the next time you update! Which I hope is very soon :)
Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:47 PM · On: Truth
You are killing me! I absolutely love this story and your writing style, and I'm so invested in your characters. But I'm so anxious for Bella and Edward to admit their feelings and be together! It's been 24 chapters - take pity on me! :)
Reviewer: chloe9 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:43 PM · On: Truth
I love this story, I feel like a little kid on Christmas morning every time there's an update. I love that Bella found out about the Cullens through Leah. Now I can't wait to find out Edward's reaction. Thank you so much for sharing this story!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:38 PM · On: Truth
I love your Alice. I like that she's not overly bubbly and bouncy. I think she's a very believable Alice. But more than that - I love this story! Thank you!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:30 PM · On: Truth
This is my very favorite story. I get so excited when I see an update. What a terrific chapter. I just can't wait for the next one. I love the Leah told Bella and the talk Alice had with her. Of course Edward is in denial, he wouldn't be Edward if he wasn't. Which means you have written him so very well. Update soon!
Reviewer: KissinCullens (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:21 PM · On: Truth
Another fantastic Chapter, this story has me giddy i'm enjoying it so much. I recommended it to my neices who are currently working their way through the chapters and are also completely hooked. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:12 PM · On: Truth
I hate how Bella hurt Leah, because I always felt Leah got the worst ending for all of them. She truly loved Sam after all. With regards to Edward drowning in denial, heck in Midnight Sun he had a hard time believing Bella had feelings for him, so I don't think it's impossible he couldn't believe it here. I'm just glad that Bella has finally found the truth and she's okay with it. Now, we just have Jacob in the way and Edward to come to grips also, and we can start up with the the major sexual tension, right? :-)
Reviewer: SiDEADde (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 08:59 PM · On: Truth
Very nice. Alice isn't OOC at all. Alice isn't permenantly bubbly, or a shopping addict, or a shallow side character. I really like your Alice and I wish more people made her the vampire that she logically has to be. Thanks for the read.
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 08:51 PM · On: Truth
Yay! She knows! I SO can't wait for their conversation.
Reviewer: elfarmy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 08:50 PM · On: Truth
i decided i love your story better then SM's. Is that bad? The way you build up the relationshop is great. I can't wait to read what happens nex. Please update soon.
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 08:47 PM · On: Truth
That was an absolutely amazing chapter. Very well done with the pacing. I loved the talk with Alice - I think you did an excellent job of keeping her in character. She wants to interfere and yet she doesn't - you captured that dichotomy perfectly. And WOW, the role you gave Leah. I found the scene you wrote between Leah and Bella to be quite moving. Leah would never let Bella hug her. That, too was well done. Leah just wants to curl up into a ball and die - and you wrote of her pain perfectly. I eagerly await the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: Jaja (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 08:39 PM · On: Truth
finally!!!! ahh I'm so glad that she finally found out!
Reviewer: kia (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 08:38 PM · On: Truth
Go Alice! It's funny how one can be in denial for so long. But finally! She figures out the truth. About the vampire thing anyway, I am honestly dying to read about when they finally tell each other that they're in love. It'll probably be all angsty though. Poor Leah, and Sam, because it's not his fault. Can Leah at least have a happy ending? She deserves one. And I guess it's not long before Jake turns into a werewolf. I foresee the drama.
Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 08:31 PM · On: Truth
Hooray for stubborn Bella! *does dance* I'm so glad you took her stubbornness and ran with it. Going to the reservation like she did took nine kinds of cajones, and I'm proud of her.
Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:06 AM · On: Supernatural
This story is amazing. Thanks for sharing your talent. I look forward to your updates.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll work hard to keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: shadyrenee323 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 01:56 PM · On: Supernatural
I stumbled onto this fic yesterday and couldn't stop reading it!! I absolutely LOVE it!! Please keep writing and update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! And you don't have to convince me to keep going; I am sickeningly addicted to churning this story out (I don't think I could stop even if I wanted to).
Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 06:08 PM · On: Supernatural
On the contrary, I thought this was a great chapter and, while not as action-packed, as you say, I think it will end up being an excellent intro to B's realization, E's acceptance, and J's ... I don't know what. At least he is astute enough to realize B has feelings for E, even if B won't confirm it quite yet. I do wish B would stop telling E that they are "friends" - time to man up, for one of them at least! Thanks for a wonderful chapter, can't wait to see the next one.
Author's Response: I agree that it's time for one of them to "man up." The self-denial can only exist for so long until it turns into clinical insanity. Thanks for reviewing!
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