wow! that was so intense and incredible! worht the wait! i was so sad at the "fine" part...so depressing, it was like New Moon all over again.  But it was good, cuz you have to knwo her hurt.  And i cant believe Jake...oh man i can't wait to see Edward's reaction--even tho he's totally being the biggest d-bag EVER!

As much as I look forward to your updates, it kills me when I reach the end. I cannot wait until your next chapter comes out! Your writing is amazing! Please don't make me wait too long! ;)

Ooo well written..I wanna see the next one!!

Ahh this is so cool! I love the "I'm fine" ending! Wow I can't get over it - I need another chapter!!!

I definately did not see that coming. I hope she's hasn't damaged anything serious, though you didn't make it sound like she did.

AHH I can't wait to see Edward's reaction.

I'm DYING

Please write the next chapter quickly!!

:)  :) 

 

Wow. I really hated Jake in this chapter. And let me tell you, I love Jake! Always have loved him. Smug bastard was trying to imprint on Bella! Wow, well with the whole phase-in-front-bella-then-proceed-to-claw-off-her-back bit, I don't see Bella trusting Jake. Like ever. And even if it did pain me to see Jake as a monster (and I don't mean in wolf form only), I'm waiting with bated breath for Edward's reaction! Hopefully some Bella/Edward interaction? Please? ;) Angry Bella/ Edward interaction? Yes? You rock!

oh my, i have to say that when i finally realized what jake was trying to do with bella when looking into her eyes, it was so heartbreaking.  he genuinely thought she was his imprint.  it was so sad - and then him going CRAZY on her... ome, somebody is going to be absolutely livid.  i can't wait for the fun to begin :)  please don't make us wait forever!

P.S. This is how excited I get for this fic:

I tell EVERYONE about it. All the time.

And as soon as I got the email update, I texted my friend (who I got addicted to IVO) with "IVO UPDATED!!! YEAHHHH!!!" 

 

Haha...

 

HO. LY. CROW.

THISCHAPTERWASAMAZING.

I need to pick my jaw up off of the floor and review. Beef jerky? Hilarious. Chuck P? FTW. I love that Bella is reading him. That's genius. Your Bella owns.

Love the contrast between Jessica's emotions and Bella's. A great contrast. I also love her insinuation to Mike that being watched wasn't so creepy...rofl..again, your Bella wins. I love her dry wit and sarcasm. She is fantastic and appropriate for the situation.

YOUR JACOB IS AMAZING. I've always liked him but...his feral, scary, devilmaycare badassedness makes me remember why I was Team Switzerland (dilusiouned as I was) for a time. YES! You paint the picture so well, I can almost see and feel him. Especially the line....

"He snorted in air through flaed nostrils and practically spat it back out through his mouth."

YES! YOU NEED TO WRITE A BOOK NOW PLZ. I mean, hopefully it wouldn't conflict with you writing this story...but...sheesh. You are fantastic. Get published.

When it dawned on me that he was trying to imprint on her...oh I LOVE IT. Fantastic. I adore that you made Paul find her. That is an amazing foil, because we all know how Paul is, and to put Jacob on the flipside is so brilliant.

My anticipation for the next chapter is BREWING...BOILING. As they say on the Westside...SHITS BOUTS'TA GO DOWN. hahaha.

Oxy, brillant as always!

I loved how you gave examples of what the word "fine" really meant.  That was very good writing.

I also loved how Jacob tried desperately to imprint on Bella. My heart broke for him a little bit.

I was not expecting the ending.  I never thought Jacob would actually attack her.  He is going to hate himself and Edward is going to be furious!  I am thinking Bella is not going to like Edward's sudden reappearance in her life.  I can't wait to see how that plays out!

Lovely chapter!

No no no! Oh lord you can't stop there LOL. I'm way to involved to wait for the next update.

Wow. You know I really wished that would have happened in SMs books. That was quite interesting. Exciting really. I love your version of wolf Jake. He figured that Bella would be his imprint. Silly wolf, Bella is for Edward. ;)

Oh yeah, loved Edwards version of the last chapter!

YES!  I love that you took it THERE with Jake's transformation!  So much more believable/plausible. 

You rocked it out perfectly (as usual) and left me once again aching for more, more, and more of IVO.  Truly on-the-edge-of-my-seat for more of it.  It's that good.

 

this chapter was AMAZING. seriously each chapter just keeps getting better and better!