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Reviewer: COLDASICEx3 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Relentless
I forgot what number review I'm on. Sorry, Oxy. I failed you :(
But GREAT chapter!
Reviewer: wants_an_edward86 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Relentless
UGH! Oxy, what are you doing to me!!! That was by far so unbelievably sexy and painful all wrapped up in one! Poor Bella, she's so hurt by Edward and she's just fighting his instanticy (if that's even a word, haha) that he's sorry and now belongs to her. I agree the angst is just getting too much. But i'm glad he heard her say she loves him in her sleep. Because she did that unconsciously and he knows she really meant it, and she knows because it was her dreams but somehow she needs to stop and give in, even if its not trusting him fully, but taking baby steps and maybe a kiss could help her ;) Really love this and will totally be voting for you :)
Reviewer: SuburbanSun (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Relentless
Oh sweet, torturous, delicious angst. This was fantastic. I really do love this story more with each passing chapter. And don't worry about the melodrama-- if I were a girl in love with a wayward vampire and with an unpredictable Teen Wolf for an ex, my life would be pretty melodramatic too.
Two (three, really) bits that I loved in particular:
"...staring at me as if I were the lion rather than the lamb."
"...like an atheist eyeing a crucifix." I love love love interesting ways of saying things instead of resorting to tired cliches, so this wins in my book.
And of course, "nocturnal admissions." Hee.
Again, good show. I await future installments with delicious anticipation.
Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Relentless
After finishing this chapter I stared at this review box for way too long trying to figure out how to review a chapter that made me feel the way this chapter did.
Beautiful, heartwrenching, and for the first time I'm identifying with Bella.
I can't tell you how much I enjoy this fic. How absolutely beautiful it is.
So I'll IVO dance instead.
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Relentless
sososoooso SO happy you updated. This was a great, angsty chapter... but I'm ready to see everything develope officially..
Reviewer: Lizzie (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Relentless
This was an incredible chapter! I was absolutely glued to the screen. Nothing, I mean NOTHING could have distracted me while I was reading this chapter. I don't know how you string such compelling words together into immensely engaging, intense, heart-pounding scenes. You are so SO talented! Bravo! Just...bravo!
Reviewer: megs1313 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Relentless
I can't wait to see how she's going to handle this. Brilliant as always, Oxy!!!
Reviewer: Syndie (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Relentless
I usually only rate instead of review but I wanted to tell you I really enjoyed the dialogue in this chapter. I could really understand "Bratty" Bella's POV cause when I'm pissed I know I love to pick a fight with my husband. She's being a Bitch because she can, but in the end I think she knows that it will resove itself.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Relentless
Man, Edward is a persistent mofo - good for him! Once again, you made me think they would FINALLY kiss and then nothing. Ugh, you know what you're doing, you little temptress you! Okay, still loving the story. Loving that Edward is being persistent. And I'm ready for Bella to stop crying and start loving! She's not a hard-ass. She needs to just get over it and be happy and in love!
Okay, that's a long review. And here's what I looked like while I read this chapter---> :-D
That's right, your story slap a stupid smile on my face. I hope you're happy. ;)
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Relentless
Holy crap you've done it again! You have this awesome ability to literally glue my eyes to my computer screen when I read your work. I swear, a tornado could tear through my room and I wouldn't know it.
Brilliant, amazing, fantastic work! I'm in love with this story, thank you for updating!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Relentless
Great! Bella is getting a spine and Edward is not quite so martyred (thank freaking god, all that ever caused was more pain and heartache). Loving your story. More chapters. NOW! Seriously, liking the storyline.
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Relentless
I hope this doesn't make you sad, but my favorite part of this chapter was the author notes where you said you were going to perk things up. Please please please. i want to be happy again. And reading your characters usually makees me giddy. But I become so absorbed in them that I hurt when they do too. So bring on the happy. Happy happy joy joy.
~Mia
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Relentless
BB - you did it again! I'm so glad that Edward didn't puss out! I was cheering him on!!! What he did was terrible and it sucked and Bella has every right to be pissed and to still be pissed, but I'm glad he kept his eyes on the prize! He's got a lot of work to do to fix his mistake!! They are both so damn stubborn!!
Author's Response: Oh, and he will WORK hard. I enjoy Edward in pursuit of Bella, and I'm so excited to be able to start writing that portion of the story. It was hard not having him around for so many chapters.
Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Relentless
I'm so happy that it's going to get happy again. Don't get me wrong, I loved the angst as well. Bella needed to work through some of her own issues.
Edward and Bella just belong together. So I'm eagerly waiting for that!
By the way, I love the banner!
Author's Response: They DO belong together. It will happen...eventually. Like I said, that was the worst of it.
Also, thanks for the complement on the banner!
Reviewer: elfarmy (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Relentless
i already want more.
Author's Response: me too. it was hard to leave it there. thanks for the IVO love!
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Relentless
I love Bella's anger.
Although I got pissed at Edward when he was like, "you'll figure it out."
He needed to come out and say it!
Ah, but yeah, i love the angst but it's killin' me!
Author's Response: Oh, she figured it out. The "I belong to you" line was hard to misinterpret ;)
The angst is killing me, too. I've taken up smoking over it. The next chapter ends well, so hopefully that will dull your pain.
Reviewer: AppleDarling (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Relentless
holy shiiiiit, this was super amazing.
i think, actually, this is one my favorites. You did Bella PERFECTLY.
you are wonderfullll <3
Author's Response: Thanks for the review...a shit with 5 "i"s makes me smile. And multiple "l"s on wonderful. You spoil me ;)
Reviewer: sweeta8585 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Relentless
once again this chapter had me dropping everything and running into the computer room(rather than on my laptop) so i could read this in silence. My husband probably thinks I"m crazy but I really can't get enough of this story and this chapter does not dissapoint. I love this story! Definately the best out there!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I agree: IVO has to be read in silence. At times, it's too painful to read in public.
Reviewer: curls (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Relentless
That was an amazing chapter. When Charlie ran up with his gun, that had me laughing out loud. When Edward confronted Bella, that nearly had me in tears. Excellent job.
Author's Response: Thanks, curls! I too enjoyed Charlie with the gun. I really love writing him...he's such a typical, less-is-more Dad type. Which I love.
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Relentless
Yippee! Finally, Cadward has decided to be honest and lay it on the line. Still, he needs to suffer a little more. He's got to SHOW her as well as tell her.
I was half afraid "Relentless" meant that Jake was coming back to whine about how Mean Bella's being to him and declare that he wouldn't stop until she loves him again. Edward was right; even the human Jake held Bella back.
Author's Response: First to review the chap, Bkwrm. Well done. And no Jake for a little while longer (at least not in the next chapter). We need to focus on the E&B drama. Jake already had his turn.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Uninvited
Wonderful Chapter!
Reviewer: kellyam (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Pumpkins
The pumpkin patch.. nice. Edward made me giggle a lot for some reason in the chapter. I think it was all the banter between him and Bella. Or I am rediculously tired, but I would like to think it is the banter. :)
Great chapter.
Reviewer: kellyam (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Friends
I love in any story when Edward asks Bella to sit at lunch with him. I don't know why, I just do.
Great chapter. Off to read more....
Reviewer: kellyam (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Acquaintances
OK. I made an excutive decision tonight. Instead of reading through most of the chapters at once and not reviewing, I am going to tell you how much I love your story as much as I possibly can.
So, I just wanted to say great chapter. And I laughed at the monster truck/gangsta rap comment. :)
Reviewer: hanther (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
omg! i cant wait for the next chapter!!! love it!
update soooooon! <3
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