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Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:04 PM · On: English

I am reading this for the second time.  After hanging out on the IVO thread I feel like I missed so much the first time around---I think it was because it was so good I read  too fast to get to the next chapter.

I even love to read the chapter end notes! I can't believe that this was your first attempt at fanfiction--you have way too much talent.

Reviewer: roobsten (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen

i reeeeeaaally lUv you're fic its the most adictive ever xd

buuuut  are you EVER going to update again..?? pleaseeeeeeeeee

Reviewer: Bella Frenzy (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Relentless

I've waited so long 4 the next chapter (chapter 32), When will you post it?

I cant wait, cant wait, cant wait

I hope u'll give bella the happiness, she deserve that

Reviewer: ejdisme (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Relentless

I adore this fic!! I love the angst and the way you tell their story, your writing is fantastic, PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!

Reviewer: belle11 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen

Update soon please..  :)

Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Relentless

please pleae please for my sanity, and for everyone's pleasure, get the next chapter up!!! i need it!!!!

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Relentless

All I can say is wow.  I just spent nearly my whole Sunday with your story (beginning to end!) instead of doing all the chores I should have been doing---and it was worth it.  I had better get back to real-life now, so I apoligize if this review is just gushing praise and not a carefully constructed discussion of your use of symbolism :-), but I just had to thank you for writing such a great piece!

Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Truth

a) the image of Edward standing in the pouring rsain is one that i'm going to enjoy for quite a while, so thank you for that and
b) i bloody love this story....i have been reduced to tears quite a few times with the emotional intensity of it. i thank you for writing it.

Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Crushed

omg, i love love love how you ended this chapter ^_^

Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Friends

I thought it was really great :) i love this story, and the detail is wonderful ^_^

Reviewer: buffylvr (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Relentless

ok. i am so in love with this story. it seems like its been months since you've updated. so please, pretty please with a cherry on top update. gimme lots more of this story. i'm rereading it because i love it so much.

i promise to give wonderful, lengthy reviews every single time you update praising your work. I just NEED some new chapters.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. (i'm pouting)

 

Reviewer: w112skp (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Relentless

I really hope you submit a new chapter soon!  I've been reading this over on fanfiction for the last few months and I'm anxious for an update!  :)

Reviewer: x_twi-kat_x (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Relentless

Wow, I love love love this story so far!!

Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens :)

Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Acquaintances

Not finished yet, but i must say... I wish i read this before twilight...

Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen

me again, once again BEGGING you to please please please update soon.  i just love this story and Edward has finally spilled his guts to Bella, and i MUST know what happens next.  please, have mercy on your readers!  i hope you don't give up on this story and stop writing it.  the story arc has been fantastic and we are all left on this major cliffhanger and it's tremendously painful.  



Author's Response:

This is kind of old, but you did ask several times, so I don't want to ignore you:  To answer your question, tomorrow.  And yeah, it was horrible of me to leave you all with that cliffhanger.  It was not my intention to not update for as long as I waited.  Lots of working overtime at my real job + writer's block = frustration.  I really am sorry. 

Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Relentless

You're killing me! I can't even enjoy my other favorite fanfiction stories because yours is my number 1 favorite and i haven't had my fix! Maybe you want some buttering up? Okay fine, your story is the best fanfiction story i have ever read, you are one of the best fanfiction writers or even writers period that i have read and i read like 2 books a week. So come on, give us another chapter please, i'm dying for my angst!

Reviewer: ashtreeha (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Relentless

ah no! it ended! :P

UPDATE! I'm hooked.

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Relentless

I am in love with this story!

Reviewer: Vaderian (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Relentless

Wow! Maybe Stephanie should have handed over the pen for you to write the Twilight saga instead...

Reviewer: bsmithy (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Scarred

omg finally jake get's whats coming to him :P

Reviewer: bsmithy (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Monster

i loved this chapter! it was so emotional, i actually nearly cried lmao
i love your writting so much!!

Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Birthday Girl

Hah! I thought she'd say "It's my party and I'll cry if I want to." It's funny and ironic. Oh well, it is very good as it is. I just like making suggestions. Usually those suggestions are much too late to make it into the story though. Thanks for the fic.

Reviewer: verbaciouscat (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Relentless

Please continue....I am on tenterhooks...TENTERHOOKS!!!

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen

This is one of my favorite stories!! Please update soon or let us know if you have givin up. I check on you every day!!! Please finish!

Reviewer: Adritha (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Relentless

Please miss, can I 'ave s'more? I think I have been very patient and deserving and whatnot.

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