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Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Friends
Yikes, what's up with Jess.
Okay, Bella gunning the engine after Rosalie, to funny. :)
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Acquaintances
Aw, what a sweetie that Edward Cullen is. :)
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Relentless
:O im gonna read on need more!
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Half Truths
~tears~ Poor Jake! He's so young.
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Giddy
LOL, loved it!
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Fine
WFH they were like real werewolves?? they completely lost themselves?? and they didn't explode??! confused but good
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Irresponsible
The White Knight arrives. :)
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:35 AM · On: The Lodge
Ah, the wisdom of the father. :)
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Monster
want more now love it soo cool can't beliee he's in denial, want to read on but needed to let you know i don't hate you 11 p.S sorry for clogging up your inbox for reviewing like every chapter! lol gonna read ow, thanks for posting this story!
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Birthday Girl
Jake is such a sweetie.
I'm liking Edward's lighter side. :)
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Interview
Scrappy Doo, lol. :)
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Crushed
W.O.W love it :) wonder how she will react
must read on sorry but another GREAT chapter!!
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:51 AM · On: College
Yep, she's afraid and Edward can read her like an open book. lol
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Unrequited
:O that's so not fair about Edward's poV!!! i can't get onto forums they just dnt work for me so i cnt see bt i can guess - he's in love with her.already watchign her sleep and it crushed him when she said that stuf about Jake a few cahpters ago about how she's not liek everyone doesn't like him etc yeah??
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Hallowed
WOW lovin it :D gonn read on so glad i discovered this story when there r 30 odd chapters but im startin to run out :O so better slow down ....... but thats kinda impossible :P
Reviewer: alls_rosie (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
there is a reason why i found this story in the top 10 list :) your writing is so powerful.. especially the scenes with edward rejecting bella and then bella rejecting jacob... i found myself crying over it, even though i knew it was inevitable.
i love how believable IVO is, like it is panning out exactly how it would have if edward had arrived a bit later than he did in twilight. i am currently up to chapter 30, and i have not once thought... 'hmm that didnt seem right'.
thankyou for this, it has made my week!
x
Reviewer: brave girl (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Hypocrisy
No issues with the chapter. I am so glad she is turning the corner and owning up to her own irrational and hypocritical behavior . It was difficult to stomach her bitterness, but I completely understand the necessity of it to the story. I am especially glad that she is not being hateful to Alice anymore. Great job. I am sure the process of writing Bella's perspective in her current state is incredibly draining. Can't wait for detention!
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Hypocrisy
I can't wait for your update, I check every day, this is my favorite fan-fiction story. You're a superb writer. I'm hoping the next chapter will be out soon?
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Missing
Poor Sam, Poor Leah - I love that you had Bella there to be one of her comforters. :)
Cute hopital scene, "Like father, like daughter," lol
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Shakespeare
Fabulous! I can only imagine what the rest of the class was thinking during this scene.
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Terminal
Dazzled into telling of her history of clumsiness. lol
Mike, what a dork - "Yeah, man, it's okay if the teacher is dying as long as we get a free period." What a goof! (I actually love Mike, what am I saying I love all the characters except Lauren! We could all do without Lauren. :)
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Break
I feel so bad that Alice has had to go all this time eating alone. :(
Yay, the return of the dear one. lol
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Bonfire
I like Leah too. It's nice she and Bella are friends, at least for now. She really got the raw end of the deal in series.
There's an awesome Leah story over on ff called Endless Daylight by princess bertha I think. It's awesome because Leah finally gets her happy ending. Definitely will make you laugh.
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:03 AM · On: English
I love your tranlation of Twilight into your story. :)
Reviewer: SweetDulcinea (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Hypocrisy
I really must compliment you on the way you have carried this story out. Although it is already quite long and there is still not that inevitable B&E relationship we all natural want, it doesn't feel like it drags on at all. Overall, it's very unpredictable, which I hope you take as a compliment to your writing and creativity. I would never have guessed or been able to think up many of the scenes and events you've created. Truly wonderful. And it's obvious you have so far to go. Do you plan to carry it all the way through BD or will it end sooner? I don't mean "will there be a Nessie or not" but rather, will you go all the way through their relationship? I suppose now that I'm caught up I can go check out the thread on the boards =)
Thanks for sharing this with all of us!
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