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Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Hypocrisy
Great chapter. But YIKES, I just noticed that you haven't updated in almost four weeks. I hope you haven't abandoned the story. I love this story and I hope I haven't spent all this time over the past week plus to read all the chappies for nothing. Please say you haven't thrown in the towel.
Reviewer: chigh (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Bonfire
This is the first review that i have written anyone on here - but i just have to say - i've only read yr first 4 chapters up to now and they are fabulous!!!!
I love yr descriptions of everyone and everything - it's a real build up!
You really do have a natural talent for writing and just wanted to let you know.
xx Charlotte xx
Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Birthday Girl
I love that Edward calls Bella a grouch!!
Priceless!!!
Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Missing
I don't understand why Sam would change if he was in seattle and not in La Push at the time, but otherwise awesome :)
Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:09 PM · On: First Day
i love that Bella said something to Lauren, even if she regretted it later.
2 thumbs up!
Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
It's knid of obvious that you aren't a Jacob fan, but it's still a good story.
Congrats!
Reviewer: AliceElizabeth (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Hypocrisy
When oh when oh when oh when will you update?
I'm dangerously close to reading a teaser and I don't want to ruin it for myself. I barely survived the wait for the last chapter; like, the rope was hanging from the ceiling.If you do not update soon then I am going to die.
Reviewer: Sparkleshine (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Hypocrisy
Loves your story. Actually stayed up after working a 14 hour shift to read the entire thing! Hope that you will write more.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Hypocrisy
Great chapter. I look forward to reading more as Edward and Bella carry out their detentions.
Reviewer: wildeyes (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Monster
OMG! You're evil! But I'm loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're amazing!
Reviewer: LindseyPAngel (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Hypocrisy
Please update soon...... Im going crazy this is one of the best stories
thank you for writing it
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Hypocrisy
Wow this story is great. I don't know why but it's easier for me to believe than the actual book. Your a great writer and i can't wait to read 'the biggest WTF moment' in the entire story! Update soon.
Reviewer: emij757 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Scarred
This story is absolutely amazing. It has all the aspects of a great work; it has the darkness that makes the light that much more wonderful. I have read so much fanfiction where I could hardly make it past the first chapter because it was so OOC, terrible grammar, and this is such an awesome change. EVERYTHING you have written thus far I have found to be nearly flawless, and I have had no complaints whatsoever. I cannot wait to keep reading. But honestly, I am not fluffing it up when I say that this is by far the best Twilight fanfic I have read yet.
You've got talent.
Reviewer: MAGalovic (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Hypocrisy
I am so addicted to this story, its like it the next book in the Saga. I love it truely! You are an amazing writer and I dying for the next one! Seriously!
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Fine
hahaha, I'm laughing I don't know why, I must be having a Bella moment. lol Great twist. :)
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Over
Nooo, she can't send Alice away. :(
She's supposed to be her partner in crime.
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Monster
She tricked Edward into staying and I don't even thinks she knows what she did. Now she and Alice work on wearing him down. lol
Reviewer: semper thine eye (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Hypocrisy
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! can't wait for the next chapter, please post soon! x
Reviewer: cristynd (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Hypocrisy
Beautiful! So well written!
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Truth
Fabulous writing. :)
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Supernatural
Still lovin' it!
Reviewer: PMA215 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Hypocrisy
This story is amazing. Just want to say that I really really love it.
Reviewer: AliceElizabeth (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Hypocrisy
There is no point to this review.
I just wanted to be the 2000th reviewer.
You know, to prove my dedication.
xxx
Reviewer: missymarieb (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Hypocrisy
I Love your story...More please!!
Reviewer: Goddess of Whatnot (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Hypocrisy
you are such an amazing writer. i can't wait for the next chapter!
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