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Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 02:24 PM · On: Threads
Loved it!!!!! Great story!!!!
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 03:47 PM · On: Threads
Well the title is more than apt for this crazy tale but its so good. At first I was simply entertained but that last chapter was beautiful :)
Reviewer: stella sin (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 12:39 PM · On: Damage Control (v)
omg i almost bit right through my bottom lip reading the E/B scene!!!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Threads
hey my goodreads buddie
finally got to read this, its been on my to read list for fanfic for some time
it was awesome as yours always are
Author's Response:
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Threads
What a great story! I just had to tell you one more time how much I loved it...Lots of reviewers say 'thanks for writing' but seriously I'm really glad you did, and from one of your author notes a couple of chapters back you thanked your beta(vjgm)for not letting you scrap your story, so I thank her too! Today is Valentine's Day and I wish you a sweet and happy one! :-) xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you so much sweets and a Happy Vday to you too! I am so greatful to have such a wonderful beta, truly, she keeps me sane...well, sane for me anyway ;) I'm very glad you enjoyed my little twisted tale <3 *MWAH*MWHA*MWHA*
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Reunions
I still can't believe it...Well now it's just Charlie and Jasper left then the 'family' will be complete. :-)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 03:19 AM · On: Family Ties
Oh my God, I'm freaking out; this is so cool! I never could have dreamed this scenario up, it's really brilliant. I even have a bit of a tear in my eyes(I'm such a sap) :D Wow, just wow...
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 02:53 AM · On: Purple
Great chapter as always, but yeah what the hell is going on? Why is Charlie there, and what if Em or Edward come into the house while he's there? Oooh, and Edward's ability is really cool. As I've been reading your story, I keep wishing I would have paid more attention to all the different abilities everyone had in BD when I read it. I know you've put your own spin on your story, and I love it but I just get the feeling some of your character's abilities might make more sense to me. But once again I'm probably wrong, I am quite frequently you know. *giggles* :-) Geez, there's only three chapters left; I'll be sad when I'm done. I have TAD to look forward to though, oh and CO'NT, and D. Hey, are you working on anything new? Just curious. :)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 02:22 AM · On: Possession
This is so much fun! ;) Now when is it going to be Jasper's turn, I'm dying to see how that goes... :-)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 02:06 AM · On: Brotherly Bond
You kill me with their dialog, it's too funny with a little sick and twisted thrown in; it's just perfect. *cue fit if laughter* :D
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 01:49 AM · On: Acting Fast
All I can say is, "Dude, this is really good. ;)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 01:27 AM · On: Awakening
One down, one in process, and one to go. For some twisted reason I'm laughing about all that. ;) I really love your story, have I told you that yet? :-)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 08:37 PM · On: Bath Confessions
I get that Alice and Bella need to watch out for Jasper and Edward incase Emmett....WAIT, I have to stop right here; It just hit me! Maybe I'm wrong but could it be that Emmett will react similarly to how Bella did in BD when she woke up? Alice didn't see if Em would smell Edward and Jaspers blood and try and kill them or if it would go another way, right? Oh I don't know, it's just a guess. I'll find out soon enough if I could just read a little faster! I loved this chapter; I keep repeating myself, but I have loved all your chapters. :-) Geez I can't wait to see what kind of vampire Emmett turns out to be(besides his usual funny, pain in the ass self)oh hell and especially Edward and Jasper; I think the only ability I would be right guessing about is Jasper's, but I never know with you...You're quite good at keeping up the mystery. Speaking of mystery, do Carlisle and Esme have abilities too; I can't wait to see. Because of my epiphany about Emmett, I forgot to say anything about Alice's vision of the future, I've been feeling that something was up in regards to the phone calls, Carlisle and Esme's arrival, and the way Alice had been acting and things she was obviously hiding from Bella and Rosalie; I never would have dreamed though that this was all seen through Alice's 'first' vision. Very cool. Yet another reason for me to praise your talents! :-) You are awesome! *Hugs*
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 07:03 PM · On: Some Questions Answered
*Still giggling* How did your genius brain come up with this storyline? Yours is one of the most original story ideas I've ever read; I really love it. I already said it but I am in love with your sense of humor too, oh and the dialog is killer, absolutely brilliant...Okay so now Edward and Jasper know the whole truth(mostly?)and what's up with this 'ability' Edward has, pretty cool isn't it? I'm slightly confused about why Carlisle and Esme are there; I know Alice called them(or should I say she called Esme)but weren't the girls sent to Forks as a punishment? I can't remember what the reason was from Bella's thoughts from chapter one, just that they had to stay there for ten years...I'm still thinking this was planned or something, and with Alice and her visions you never know...I know I'm forgetting to mention something, but I need to go read! I do have to say that I'm already picturing Emmett being a pain in the ass vamp to his brothers after they have all changed; I can just picture him being all cocky(and so Emmett-like)and taunting them with his having been turned first, and he'll undoubtedly be stronger as a vampire as he was as a human; basically nothing will have changed in that area of the their relationship...Sorry, I get carried away with my thoughts sometimes. ;) OOhhh, it just dawned on me why Carlisle and Esme are there, could it be something to do with Bella and Alice turning Edward and Jasper? Oh hell, I just better keep reading instead of trying to guess...
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Sketching
*Grinning* I'm assuming that Edward and Jasper are going to be given their 'choice' in the next ch. I don't think there will be any doubt as to what they choose, they are so beyond going back now; I'm pretty sure they wouldn't want to anyway. ;) I wonder how Emmett is doing...So the person who Alice has on speed dial is coming, who the hell is it? It's driving me batty not knowing! I can't wait to see...Off I go, chapter ten awaits! :-)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 10:45 AM · On: This Can't Be Normal (v)
I can't wait to find out what the hell is going on with Alice...great ch. :-)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 01:18 AM · On: Damage Control (v)
Ok, so is Edward going to remember Bella saying ILY to him? Who the hell was Alice on the phone with, it sounded like this was all sort of a plan or something...And woohoo, they all got their freak on; I think though, that Jasper is freaked out but also blissed out...I'm pretty sure blissed out trumps anything else at this point. I can't wait to see what happens next. ;-)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much, and thank you so much to your mom as well! I'm so glad that you are enjoying my twisted little brain and the stuff that spills out of it LOL! I hope you continue to enjoy, your reviews have given me such a big smile, thank you so very much for reading! <3
*MWAH*MWHA*MWHA*
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 12:38 AM · On: Liquor and Lovin'
Oh man, holy shit; I'm laughing so hard I'm crying; I kept re-reading parts of the guys drinking over and over(especially Jasper's reactions to Alice) and I'd laugh myself silly again...Then I wasn't laughing so much by the end of the chapter obviously; I don't think Emmett really knew how literal it was when he said, "Take me Rosalie, I'm yours forever, just take me." He is in for a big surprise, seriously how is he going to take this? I can't wait to read the next chapter to see how the hell this is going to play out; I mean what are Alice and Bella going to say(Alice would have seen that wouldn't she?)and what about Jasper and Edward? Well I guess I better haul it over to the next chapter and find out...This was a great chapter by the way. ;-)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 10:31 PM · On: Game On (v)
Oh shit here we go, this should be good...I've been laughing so hard that I just snorted; I guess that could be taken as a compliment...Of course it was; I love your story! :-)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 09:49 PM · On: Self Gratification (v)
I know I'm going to repeat myself several times throughout your story, but I hope you'll forgive me...I am absolutely in love with your story, seriously you have no idea...This is one of the best, and funniest stories I've ever read(and I'm not even to ch.5 yet!) You have the greatest damn sense of humor, the dialog is SFgood! ;-)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 08:55 PM · On: Letting It Happen (v)
I'm loving your story so much! :)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 08:31 PM · On: Setting the Scene (v)
*giggling ridiculously* This is great; I love it! :-)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 07:45 PM · On: The Beginning
I had to let you know I've just started your story, and giggled my way through the first chapter...I can tell this is going to be a great one! I love your different take on the usual fare; I love Bella's ability, and how damn convenient is that? I'm really excited to see how this all ends up...I've had you and your stories fav'd for a really long time(I know shame on me for not getting my butt in gear sooner)but you know how it is in the fic-dom, there are too many damn good stories out there...I read fairly slowly so that doesn't help, but my sixty-eight year old mom is in love with your stories,(this and TAD especially)and always asks me if I've read BT yet and that I'll love it..So here I am, finally! I may not review every chapter because as you can see I can be a bit wordy, my reviews end up looking like a mini-story; I actually talk about the story content and not just ramble like I am right now...Sorry, bad habit...Anyway just letting you know I loved this first chapter, your story idea, characters, and your sense of humor; I really can't wait to read more! Off I go... :-)
Reviewer: cathe (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Family Ties
Wowwww! Did NOT see that coming.
Reviewer: cathe (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 07:12 PM · On: Setting the Scene (v)
Hahaahaha, just read the first 2 chapters, how original and well written!!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much, it gives me a thrill to give people a good chuckle :)
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