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Reviewer: Twop (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 4

Awwwwwww. Jasper's such a sweetheart! I love your originality with this story! Like not jumping straight into E/B



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the review! Glad you love Jasper :) He is my perfect guy in this story, whereas Edward is the flawed hero.  So happy you're still enjoying this.

Reviewer: Twop (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 2

I like that you're not going with the stereotypical "best friends straight away" thing, because that shit's annoying. Love this. Awesome work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for appreciating that they aren't just going to meet and fall madly in love in 2 seconds :)  I appreciate your reviews!

Reviewer: Twop (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this already. I had to create a Twilighted account to read this, but I'm glad I did. (Y)



Author's Response:

aw, Twop, I am so flattered you made an accont to review!  You are so sweet :)  I hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: ElizabethTabby (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 17

WOOOOOOOOOH! 

I've read the entire thing so far in one 'sitting', (is that the right word?!)

And I'm loving it. Alot.

xx gee xx 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! :) I am glad that you're enjoying the story so far.

Here is your teaser, as promised:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 7

So she takes everyone up on a date EXCEPT Edward?

It is kinda funny though... because if a guy had 3 dates like that in a matter of 24 hours... everyone would be calling him a man-whore, or an ass, or something not nice.

But when a girl does it everyone is all "Go Girl!"

Strange.



Author's Response:

I can appreciate your perspective.  However, just because she has three dates doesn't mean she's going to sleep with three people in one weekend.  She's trying to open herself up (no pun intended) to new experiences and this was her first reaction -- to find out what casual dating was like. 

FWIW, I've never heard a guy been referred to as a man-whore for having 3 dates in one weekend.. especially not first dates.  No one expects to be exclusive after one date, do they?

Thanks for the review; you gave me something to think about.  I value the honest feedback.

Reviewer: PreferBrunettes (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 17

So I see that Bella wasn't able to refuse Edward in the morning.  I don't blame her, who could after a wonderful/terrible first date like that.  Too bad they were interrupted.  But, as I've said before, anticipation makes that first time all the better.  And boy did Edward really make up for the disaster with this second date.  It was intense but I don't think they can hold off on what's been building between them much longer anyway.

Can't wait to see what they do with their dessert!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I am glad you liked the chapter... here is the promised teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: theressomethingaboutmary (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 17

wow! that was really fantastic! the whole chapter was great and the ending with edward and bella was great, it was romantic and hot, just perfect, i applaud you! i can't wait for more, i really love this story!

 

mary



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I am glad that you are enjoying all of the little moments sprinkled in :)  Here is your teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 17

Yes, please give me a teaser! 

I love this story.  I love how both Alice and Rose are with Bella's sloppy seconds (sort of).  I love it how Jake almost cockblocked Bella in this story, during the STI talk between ExB.  heehee

Thanks for the lemon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I am glad that you are enjoying all of the little moments sprinkled in :)  Here is your teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 17

Awww that was perfect! I personally feel awkward at B&B's - I can't relax for some reason =) Love the fact the "girls" are bonding more, getting over the fact they kept stealing her mans lol

Melsie!



Author's Response:

hahaha.. thanks for the review, it made me laugh with the man stealing ;)  Here is your teaser, as promised:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 17

If Coffee Girl sends Scone Boy a song at this point it should be India Arie's Therapy.  I thought of it this a.m. after finishing your latest and greatest chapter while chillin with my IPod.  PLEASE hurry with more soon



Author's Response:

I'll have to look into the IA song - - thanks so much for the idea!

Reviewer: laceys (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 17

I love your story.  Please post more soon. pleeeeeease?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  :)

Here is your teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: noel presh (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 17

Yay! So great! I loved at the beginning how Bella still had her song! And I must say, as I'm about to go out of town and putting of packing until the last minute, that I would really like to have Rose & Alice to put a suitcase together for me. Hah.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  :)  Wouldn't it be awesome to have them pack all our bags?!@  Sheesh.

Here is your teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 17

As if that wasn't a tease already!  So unbearably hot, I just want to scream!  Oh, and Edward, so mindful (I hope that won't turn into anything) yet so romantic and loving....sigh..

Fantastic, wonderful, you're the most awesome author, I grovel for my treat.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  :)

Here is your teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 17

Very romantic night - a bit much for the second date, bu they've known each other a while and were moving that way quickly. I'm with Alice - swoon for the romantic gesture from a man. I'm glad they handled the awkward protection issue so well with no freak outs. As much as they (approximately) the same age, Edward shows her how to be an adult sometimes - normal dating, how to react, maturity.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  :)

Here is your teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 17

MsKathy -- I was so happy to see an update! I was missing CG and SB. And now they've made sweet luv! :) I was a little surprised at her reaction to "I've never felt like that before". Can't wait to see what that naughty boy is going to do with those desserts...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  :)  Poor Bella, she was feeling a little awkward to the whole never felt like that moment.. we'll hear more about that next chapter.

Here is your teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 17

Sure I woukd love to have the teaser for the next xchapter. I loved their first time together at a B&B of all places. Edward is such the romantic isn't he. I like how Alice and Rose supplied Bella with a little protection in case something happened. Such great friends. I hope Jacob will get the hint.. Update soon. =)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  :)

Here is your teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: Wishingforlove (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 17

Wow!! Awsomely hot! I love how Edward was responsible even when it was awkward and a bit of a mood killer. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  :)  I am glad that you liked responsible Edward. 

Here is your teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 17

Oh, MsK this was the best birthday present EVER to wake up and find a new chapter waiting for me!  You are the master of romance and this E & B are just so sweet and lovable.  PLEASE PLEASE send me the tease and hurry it up already!! -Thanks



Author's Response:

hahaha.   Your review made me giggle.  Thanks for that.  Here is your teaser, bb:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 17

First of all - imagine a 38 year old female jumping in her seat getting the email of the update. I felt like a teenage again.

then imagine a big smile of this woman as i read the chapter. OMG - where is a real edward when you need one.

excellent writing and pleas update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you bb, for this very kind and sweet review, as always!  Here is your promised teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: OnlyOneSymptom (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 17

I was trying to write a paper when I stumbled across this.  I just needed a short distraction and now it's past four in the morning and I'm still not done with my paper.  Thanks a lot.  You're story is so freaking captivating that I'm not going to get any sleep tonight.  And New Bella isn't helping me cut down on my snark in my paper.  If I fail it is wholly the fault of you and your outrageous talent.



Author's Response:

awww.. I am so sorry that I screwed you on your paper!  I have faith that you will not fail, but if you do, at least there's always fanfiction?  ;)

Here is your promised teaser:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 17

lmao one, great chapter, i love that edward's responsible like that, and two, teaser please?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Here is your teaser, as promised :)

 

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: thot-2 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 17

I was getting very upset about the time frame for the update but, you pulled through with another great chapter and it was pretty lengthy so I cannot be mad.  Are you the Ms. Kathy super beta as well???  Maybe I've found the reason for the over due updates.  I have to say most of my favorite stories have authors thanking you.  I can see now why we have to wait for updates.  You're a very busy woman.



Author's Response:

hahahah.  It's true, I am also the beta whose name oyu see everywhere.. and that is also the reason why my updates have been slow!  Sorry :(  Thanks for the review.  Here is your teaser, as promised:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: allaboutemward (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 17

You are amazing!  Edward is such the romantic, I love it.  I got spoiled by your quick updates before but well worth the wait on this one.  I'm looking forward to what Edward and Bella are up to next. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  Here is your teaser, as promised:

I climbed onto the bed just as naked as I had left it.  Edward and I sat facing each other, knees touching.  The first box he opened was the crème brulee.  I put my hands on his knees and ran them up his thighs as he looked into the disposable foil pot curiously. 

His eyes flicked from the pot to mine and then back as my hands continued on their path.  When I reached his waist, I uncrossed my legs and climbed into his lap.  I adjusted myself and wrapped my legs around him, pulling myself a little closer. 

“You're gonna share, right?” I raised an eyebrow.

Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 7

That chapter was grrrrreat!  I LOOOOVE sassy Bella so much in this story and all the twists and tangles of fate so far.  Thanks for the impeccable writing by the way - i can't stand reading sloppy shit.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!  I am so glad that you love the story :)  There should be an update soon!

Reviewer: allaboutemward (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am absolutely in love with this story and I NEED an update!  I'm having scone boy withdrawls :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I promise I am working on the update and should have it soon :)

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