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Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 28
Okay this story has been in my faves forever...i finally fnished it today and i have to say i loved it... thanks for writing such a wonderful story.
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
What a cool way to experience all of the cool things the good ol USA has to offer! Lived here all of my life and have only seen 10 states! Here's to new beginnings!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hello. I'm so glad to have found your story. Well Bella's been dealt one hell of a really crappy hand! I hope her new beginning is the start of better times. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 28
I really loved this story it was a really nice one! Gotta love them good old happy endings. Thank you for sharing it and I am so glad I took the time to read it! Kudos to you, your writing skills rock.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your reviews, and for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) :)
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 2
really likign this thank you for sharing
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow this is going to be good!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 28
I'm not sure what was harder... clicking complete on the first thing I ever wrote, or reading the end of the first fic I ever read. It had become almost like that story with the girl who is determined to live until the last leaf falls from the vine. As long as DBS was out there, I had to keep reading.
Well, now that I'm hooked - on the reading and the writing - there is no chance that I'll stop, but it's still surprising how emotionally I'm reacting to the last chapter of this story. I'll have to get my own bottle (although no tequila, because that makes my filter malfunction and my panties fall off) and box o'Kleenex.
The proposal we perfect. Really. I know people say that all the time, but fer serious. For these characters, as you've so lovingly written them, this was perfection. Her list and her journals were such an integral part of her journey (her discovery) and their relationship, that Scone Boy was a genius to open the discussion by posting it on the list. I really adored it.
The discussion between Bella and Esme at the cafe was brilliant. I hadn't really thought about how much each would benefit from the presence of the other. Thank goodness they are close now, so she can have Esme to help her during the wedding planning.
Thank you for giving us this gift. Thank you for sticking with it when you had four stories going and needed to get some semblance of order to your life. Thank you for coming back and putting such a perfect conclusion in place. Thanks for taking my fanfic v-card!
*mwah*
Author's Response: Awww. I love that you stuck with it and I am so honored that I took your cherry!
Glad you liked the proposal. I felt that it was very much "them" and so I'm just tickled that you agree.
The Esme thing took me by surprise, too; it was never part of my outline, but as I wrote and talked to them, I realized they'd come full circle and given something back to each other.
Thank you for sticking with me during the break, and for always being a great and faithful reviewer. ILY.
Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 27
This was such a lovely chapter, MsKathy! They way you have them comfortably morphing into a couple while maintaining their identities is excellent. I also really like the way they tease each other. When she tells him he's so "metro," that's much nicer than anal-retentive or OCD!
The proposal and her reaction to it was so authentic. Even when the method is so OOC for us, we do tend to go through an emotional upheaval in response. Even after the "I do," I find myself - when I see those "Marry Me" screens at a ball game - jealous of the place they are in their lives, with so much ahead of them. It's not jealousy of the person, per se, just envy of the opportunities. We make so many turns in life, and the "what if" for every alternative we didn't choose can create a lot of wondering.
Ugh, enough about introspectivity! As always, their physical relationship is beautifully written, caring and playful, passionate and romantic. I just love how you've written these characters. So sad that there is only one left!
Loved it as always! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean about being envious of that place in life. It's such a place of opportunity, and yet, how many of us took all of it for granted?
So glad you enjoyed this chapter. As always, I love your reviews. <3
Reviewer: lhommenoir (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 28
i loved this story. very well written.... i appreciate you taking the time to write it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: nwbelle (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 28
I loved how real this story seemed. It wasnt an instant thing with them, like in normal stories. She had to work on her shit before she could be ready for him. I loved how it wasnt corny for Emmet and Jasper to end up with Rosalie and Alice. The characters were believable adn I loved that about this story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story, and felt it was true-to-life :) :)
Reviewer: wannabbella (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 28
I loved this amazing story. With a smile on my face and Kleenex in my hands, I want to thank you for writing such an amazing story. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) There will be one outtake posted soon, I hope! :)
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 28
i am cry i absolutly loved this story bella just grew so much and i was one hell of a journey she took she learned so much from her friends and edward and i loved how she learned it was ok to lose someone and remember them even tho i hurts i wish u would write and epilogue even tho u said u wouldn't i just would wonder about their wedding and kids and how alice's and Roselie's lives went if they stayed close this truly was an inspirering story through the good and the bad i very much enjoyed it i am satisified with this ending it truly was just right perfect u truly r an amazing author u deserve an award my god u r very creative and detail and i love how all the characters grew throught this story i will put u on author alert bc i just want to read more from i will look forward to an outtake will it be on this page or will u do it separtely well thank you for writing this until next time mbellaandedwardm
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story. The outtake will be done as a separate story, so I'm glad you added me to your alerts. :)
Reviewer: Bookaholic Girl (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 10
i dont like this girl on girl action.
it makes me uncomfortable and a little nauseous, but that might be the twizzler i just ate.
Reviewer: ricks (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 28
I just read this entire story in less than 24 hours. Another excellent one, MsKathy. It's refreshing to read something that has a strong and confident Bella. You did a really good job capturing the fun, playful sides of college students. Very fun to read!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review! :) I'm so glad that this story captivated you, and that you enjoyed reading it. I had so much fun writing it.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 28
I have spend the past few days reading this. Oh, how I enjoyed it. I was bad about reviewing each chapter so I give you one big fic review.
I loved Bella's plan. She was truly amazing for having gone through so much and to be able to survive that and be determined to live a life is astounding.
I am such a canon girl yet somehow, I didn't gross out when Bella dated (and more) with Jasper, Emmett and Tanya. I was proud of her for trying and exploring all her options and even prouder when she saw the connection between J/A and did the right thing.
Then there was Edward. Oh, my Edward - you can give me a hot, horny, sweet, smart, pervy Edward anyday and twice on Sunday. He was just, beyond words with her. He made me very happy. He not only knew her so well but he understood her too.
I may have swooned (alot) when he proposed over and over again. That was adorable but ending this with Bella asking him was perfect.
This was such an incredible story. I am so glad that I read it. Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this one great review :) I appreciate it so much! So glad that you loved the story, and I enjoyed hearing about which parts you liked the best. I'm appreciative that you stuck in there even through the different pairings.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 28
Oh MY Gosh!! That is the best and sweetest proposal I've heard!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and praise! Glad you enjoyed :)
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 28
This story was amazing thanks so much for sharing. Their pain was so real and I felt every emotion I needed to. Amazing!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much for this review. I am so glad you enjoyed the story! :) :)
Reviewer: harlembella (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
a summer to travel the u.s., sounds wonderful. when i started college, i thought i had it all figured out. i didn't at 35, i still don't. i wish i took a summer road trip.
Author's Response: This could be a review I left for someone else -- agreed, on every point :) I hope you enjoyed Bella's trip.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 28
I'm sad it's over but I've loved ever minute of it even with the crazy pairings. LOL! I loved the way he proposed and kept doing it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. :) I am so so glad that you loved it, and that you felt it was a proper and good send off for them.
Reviewer: harlembella (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
ho shit!!! This is gonna be good!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying already.
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 28
Hey this was a really great ending and i hvae really loved this story =]
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Glad you felt the ending fit and was right. :) :)
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
HAHAHAHA I cant believe you did that OMG and Im 90% sure thats what everyone has said Wow girl nothing like starting off with a Bang lol hahaha I cant stop laughing.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the beginning of this story :) Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 28
I loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Glad you enjoyed :) :) Don't forget to vote in the outtake poll!
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 28
Aaawww... That was so sweet! (And the thought of Bella and Esme bawling over their lattes made me smile. I'm sure when they remember that moment in ten years they'll laugh. :D) Great story, and a very nice ending.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad that you enjoyed the way this story ended. :)
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 28
What an amazing story! The last 2 chapters struck me as particularly wonderful. I loved the theme of this one. A journey of self realization is something we all need to do. You wrote a truly wonderful, funny, romanctic and real love story. I love your work and look forward to whatever you have planned next. BTW...the ending was perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this very kind review. I'm so glad you thought the ending was perfect; I was so worried. Up next is finishing Paper Moon, which hasn't been posted at all here yet. And, the outtake for DBS of course, and my Fandom Gives Back auctions :)
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