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Reviewer: labellamafia (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
my goodness, who knew alice had it in her?
i loved it. wonder if tanya will come back for more?
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
OH hey! Give us an Edward that gives into sex a hell of a lot easier than most Edwards ;)
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
Awesome Alice!!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
I think this is the only Twilight story I've ever read that I actually prefer Bella's pov to Edward's....including Twilight/MS cause I loved the dozen MS chapters more than the whole Twilight book, but even though this one was all Edward it was simply fantastic! The lust, the love, the anger, the Tanya hating.....TERRIFIC! This story makes me want to scream and shout and jump up and down. I was sooooo happy when Alice punched Tanya for Bella! God bless that tiny pixie vampire! LOL!
Also totally adored Jasper's commentaries in his thoughts on the emotions throughout the chapter and Bella figuring out a way to talk to Edward in her head. Last chapter had the funniest line ever, this one though held one of the most profound lines ever “It’s all about perspective, Edward. How else would you expect to freshen your views of the world, if you’re always looking at it the same way?”
LOVED THAT! Awesome line and completely Bella! I love how she makes Edward want to experience things again. And the steamy dancing was fan-freaking-tastic! Amazing, amazing, amazing chapter! Please update soon? Pretty please with Tiny Voice on top? :D
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
That was freakin' awesome. Gotta love Alice.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Four
Is there any way you can just kill off that bitch Tanya?????????????
She is such a HO!!!!
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
wow I love how you had them all gang up on tanya like that! OK well isn't lucid dream a weird titel for this story? well it works because this is a weird story! I mean that in the best way...please updat soon!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
HELL VOLTERRA, ALICE!
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
Hell YES! This is GREAT!!!! Bella's artist/mind thing is absolutely fascinating, and now the spelling out of words etc. is such a cool twist. And I love that she's not afraid of anything!!! You're doing a great job!!
Reviewer: crimsonserpent (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Three
You know Acid Bath? Wow I thought I was the only one who still remembered Acid Bath . . . Props, they're awesome. Good story, loving it so far. The way Bella's mind works is fascinating.
Mandi
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
that was so great! i loved tanya getting hers. HA! so great.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
Ha! Way to go Alice!! Great chapter! Please update soon?
Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
oh my goodness! i want some smexing, thank you alice for the punch, dont really know why tanya is even allowed to hang out with the gang! can't wait to see where this goes, awesome job! i love this story your bella is so unique, i wonder why she needs to drink and smoke so much...
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Seven - Part Two
Hell yes! Great, empowering chapter :)
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Seven - Part Two
Great chapter. Your Bella is very interesting..she definitely has her own layers the SM's. She's all bravado, but really mushy on the inside..probably why she drowns herself in Patron and self abuse when things get tense?
Love this story. Love your take on it. More please!
Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Seven - Part Two
I love this story, very creative.
It's so nice to have Edward be able to read Bella's mind, especially the way you have it in this story. I would assume that it would drive Edward insane to listen to all of his love's thoughts if they were "normal" and i like how Bella can literally spell out her thoughts and all the other ways her mind visualises. I can can why Edward would find her captivating.
It's also nice to see Bella strong, and mostly comfortable with who she is even with the vices that she has. Nice to see Bella and Alice give it to Tanya and Jasper agree that Tanya is a crazy skag!
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: absoluteTE (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Seven - Part Two
Yay for Alice!!!
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Seven - Part Two
I love how Bella was ready to punch her. That was awesome. And the spelling of artistic letters? Genious. So original and beautiful.
I love this story and it's getting pimped again soon!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Seven - Part Two
HEHEHEHEHEHE!
Tanya got hers! Loved how Bella is more confident in this story. But then again, she's still the same Bella, if someone pissed her off that much she'd fight. I mean look what she did in Eclipse. Jacob pissed her off enough that she forgot he was a werewolf when she punched him.
Reviewer: kinolaughs (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Seven - Part Two
Wow....maybe that will finally get rid of Tanya?
Reviewer: kinolaughs (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Seven - Part One
Stav recommended your story to me today and I have to say I think it is wonderful! I will be keeping my eye out for your update!
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Seven - Part One
Really a departure from the norm and I am enjoying it very much! I had a close friend who has synesthesia. Particularly names of people had a very distinct set of colors. Oddly, her daughter has it too, but they saw different colors for people. It was a very odd conversation to listen to....
I really like the world you've created here.
Reviewer: puresilver (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Seven - Part One
Great chapter:) Um...yum? I can't wait for more. And if I were Bella, I'd totally be checking out that shower.
Reviewer: puresilver (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Six
Great chapter! I'm glad everything got cleared up for the most part!
Reviewer: puresilver (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Five
Finally! A song I know! I love Bach's Cello Suite No. 2! I love Yo Yo's baroche version best. It's so haunting and touching. Great chapter:) They seriously skirted the issue though, didn't they?
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