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Great chapter. Loved the E/B interaction and Bella's thoughts. "Could I lick his face mid-sentence?  That would be considered rude, right?" Hehe.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

 

When I saw this story had been updated again, I totally squealed in delight. I have missed Tiny Voice sooo sooo sooo much. It was just wonderful to hear from Tiny Voice once again....oh yeah, and the other characters too, I guess. ;D   And please don't apologize for the fluffiness cause I totally loved it. They need some nice fluffiness to counteract Bella's craziness and Edward's emoness, lol.

I loved Bella's childlike behavior at the beginning of the story. I think that innocent quality to her mind is probably one of the best things about it. Plus who doesn't love to stick your fingers in your ears and dance around singing loudly? Lol.

I also discovered just how wonderful it is that in this story Edward can get mental pictures from Bella. "Edward growled in response to my mental image." Hehe....she can get him all hot and bothered without moving or saying a word. You've got to appreciate that.

And painting on Edward Cullen...yum! Lucky Bella. There's just something hot about painting someone too....that'd be a great date idea actually. At least to me it would be, lol.

"Tiny Voice stood at my side, making lewd squeezy-hand gestures towards him. I don’t know what it is about him that turns me into some lust-ridden – Bella and Tiny Voice scoping out Edward's ass while he worked in the kitchen was definitely one of the highlights of this chapter and him knowing that Bella was looking at his ass just made it all that much better. Tiny Voice is still definitely my hero!

" I’d rather have Edward slathered in syrup any day-Edward dropped the fork as a low growl rumbled deep in his chest."  hehe...more benefits to Edward's mind-reading. Of course though who wouldn't want Edward slathered in syrup....yum again! :D

I'm so thrilled that Emmett is finally there. Rosalie not so much, but I love Emmett and his crazy antics. Him keeping the car from moving was really cute, as was his method for winning the race against Rose. I have a feeling that he and Bella will really get along.

Forks should be quite interesting. Can't wait for more! Terrific as always!

how awesome i sthat they belong together

fucking epic win with devil's dance floor, i was listening to that song just as i started reading this chapter and it made me laugh.  plus, huge kudos for alice cold-cockin tanya.

the paint scene was hot ;)

and brand new=love.

good job on the chapter

Go Alice....im really enjoying this one...cant wait for more...I love Alice ...way to punch the skanky hoe lol

And And! Ty for Stitches! I love it

The "my Bella's" and "my love" really get cloying.  I don't know, it's one thing to say them out loud to the object of your affection, but to think it in your head in your internal monologue is just...over the top and irritating. 

This is nothing against your writing or story, it's just I think sometimes writers go too far in trying to make Edward sound 'flowery' or lovey dovey. 

My Family !  I think Alice knows stuff !  Ha    I like a grinding Edward too.

Ok, love Alice's final line. Sounds like something I'd say. loved the update as usual and can't wait till more! :D

Hehe, I like the bet. It's a nice way for Alice to get her car. Thanks for the update and I can't wait to read more!