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Reviews For Lucid Dreams
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Three

I'm confused, is Edward going to be gone for a few months, or not?  It sounds to me like he has changed his mind, and is going back.  I assume Jasper is going to have a rough time to come with a human living with him?  That should be interesting.

Author's Response:

Yep, he has decided to return to Seattle, and try to ignore Bella.

Jasper will struggle with it, of course, but little Alice might still have a trick or two up her sleeve.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 12:22 PM · On: One

Ok my dear, the thread is a go:

Author's Response:

Have I told you today how amazing you are? :D

I really appreciate it, I quite literally did a happy dance a few seconds ago.

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Three

She has to confess her mind shit to our boy...he always understands a fucked up Bella

Author's Response:

Oooh she will... quite soon ;)
Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Three

I can only hope for a happy ending, and more drunk Bella!

Author's Response:

Well, I don't usually say "ask an you shall receive", but in this case, maybe. :D
Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Three

Delightful! I hope she sings when he comes back too! haha

Author's Response:

Haha, she just might ;)
Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Three

I like your style! Your writing is very descriptive and refreshing :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing, glad that you like it! :D

Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Three

I love what you're doing with Bella's mind! Totally cool idea, can't wait to see what happens next :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'll be updating very soon!

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Three

i really love your bella, she seems in character in a lot of ways but then we get the quirks like the mind and the drinking/smoking and the dancing of course, i really cant wait to see how she deals with emoward, i love this its really different from a lot of other stories, bellas mind is such a mystery i cant wait for more =D

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I don't think I'm going to let Bella put up with too much of emoward's b.s. hehe

I'm glad that you're enjoying this story, and I hope you'll continue to read on! :)

Reviewer: In_a_blue_bathrobe (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Three

Kind of a neat take on synesthesia.

Author's Response:

Clever!  That was actually my initial inspiration for this story. :D
Of course I've blown it wildly out of proportion - since it's more fun this way. heh

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:19 AM · On: Three

Edward, Edward, Edward... pull Bella off the pedestal! It's not comfortable for a woman! No place to roam, and the fall is hard!

Author's Response:

Indeed!  He will learn his lesson soon enough, though.
Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Three

Hihi, Edward...stupid, cocky little dude...ummm...vampire. At least he;s trying to think with his head, although it wouldn't hurt him to think with n=both of them at times... lol... anyway,  I like it, but you already knew that.

I think we should start you a thread for this story, what do you think?

Author's Response:

Oh my ! lol
I do love Pervward, perhaps he will make an appearance in the next chapter XD

I think a thread is a marvelous idea!

Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Two

I was your first reviewer over at FF and I'm so glad to see you posting this here!  It is so unique.  I love this twist on how her mind operates, and also Tiny Voice is quite amusing!  I look forward to how all of this unfolds.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews, it really means a lot to me that you've reviewed on both sites!  I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story, and hope that you'll continue to read.  :)

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Two

This is really good! I am enjoying it!

Author's Response:

Excellent! Thank you for the review! :)

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 10:26 AM · On: One


Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Two

edward-bella started getting on each other didn't they? please please continue.. i wanna knoow ;P

Author's Response:

I shall continue!  Thank you for the review! :)

Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 02:32 AM · On: One

I'm really enjoying your fic. The concept is amazing.

Please, write more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm glad that you're enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Two

You know I love it. I really, truly do! Poor Edward and his confused state, poor Bella too...

can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response:

This review made me smile like this ->   :D

Thank you!


Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Two

Ah Edward, torturing himself with self loathing over what he almost did last night, I asume. And now Bella will think he doesn't like her, when she is all he can think about...

Author's Response:

Of course!  It's the classic set up, yeah?

Don't worry, they'll see the light soon enough.

Thank you for the review! :)

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Two

Excellent story so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Two

omg fantasticness, i love edwards perspectives, but can edward hear bellas thoughts or is more just he sees the colours that would accompany them? really wonderful i can hardly wait for more =D

Author's Response:

Edward can "hear" the colors of her thoughts, and all associated sensations ; her mind is image-oriented, so he doesn't get any words. 

Thank you for the review! :)

Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Two

I like that Edward can see only the colors of emotions in Bella's mind.  Tiny voice is very amusing to me.  :)  Edward seems to have brought his multiple personalities to this story if he's referring to Bella at the last bit.   I'm interested to see where you take this.

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it, thank you so much for the review! :)

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Two

Oh, is Edward going to be driving her away?  I'm guessing the smell is too much for him now?  Like that will stop Alice now that she's had a vision. 

I'm not crazy about smoking Bella, but I guess that would help cover her scent?  Make it more bearable for Edward?  I do like that she seems to be strong, independent, and open to adventure.


Author's Response:

Yes of course ;D 

Alice won't let him be too much of a fool. hehe

Thank you for the review!


Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Two

Your killing me...I hate to say hurry up,,,,but damn HURRY UP.  Can't say that I can comment on the music, but I will find them and take a listen, just because I love you.  Thanks for writing.  I am really into this story.  E just smells so damn good.

Author's Response:

hehe O_O
I will do my best to ensure speedy updates! :D
Glad that you are enjoying the read, thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Two

I'm kind of confused...why did Bella have her hand on Alice's chest?

Author's Response:

Like a lot of female friends at a club, they were just showing off.

Pretty much just pervy fluff.

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 08:11 PM · On: One

Wow!  You're writing is very's a real pleasure to read.  It's interesting that Edward can see  into Bella's it that he can get feelings and images, but no words?  I'll look for your updates!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Yes, her thoughts are processed in a primarily image-oriented way, so that is what Edward "hears".

The relationship between her images and emotions will be explained in a few chapters. :) 

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