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Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Six
I loved this chapter. I'm so glad Bella finally knows the truth. Can't wait to read more.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :)
I'll be updating ASAP.
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Six
You know I love it. LOVE IT!!!
And now, I need to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: :D Thank you!
I'm working on el numero 7 right now. ^_^
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Six
OMG! Did Edward see Tiny Voice there towards the end? And let me just say that Tiny Voice rocked this chapter! Thanks to Tiny Voice my new goal in life is to kiss Jackson Rathbone....all for the sake of science, of course....hehe. I so completely love this story. Bella's actions and her thoughts and the way she reacts to stuff is just priceless. I love it! And Edward is great too. I loved the bit of excited Edward we got there towards the end and his happiness when remarked that Bella hadn't run. I loved when Bella kinda called Edward beautiful even though she didn't mean to say it out loud and all of their reactions to that. I'm really hoping that you'll give us a glimpse into Bella's mind when Alice and Edward confessed to her that they're vampires....I imagine her thought processes on that were all kinds of interesting. This story has quickly risen to become one of my top, all-time favorite stories and we're only on chapter 6. It seriously just makes me smile soooo much. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Oh yes he did :D Jackson Rathbone *dreamy sigh* hehe
I just might write the later half of the chapter six in BPOV after I'm done with chapter 7, and add it in there. We shall see :)
I'm seriously thrilled that you're enjoying this story so much, thank you for your review!
Reviewer: piratehannelore (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Six
Love the chapter and the soundtrack so far. Definately have some favs on there and some new ones to youtube. Love it! :D
Author's Response: Glad that you're enjoying them! Thank you for the review! :)
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Six
Love it love it love it!!
Author's Response: Excellent! :)
Reviewer: maisydaze (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Six
W.O.W. Awesome story!!! LOVE "tiny voice"! LOVe that you are keeping in character with our beloved vampires (and bella of course). More please?
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying this crazy tale of mine. More is on the way! :)
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Six
My husband is still trying to figure out why I've been laughing as I read this. I tried to explain but he didn't get my translation I guess. My favorite part was Bella and her reaction to the door. LOL And Edward "seeing" tiny Bella. :)
“‘Careless’ with a door usually means that you slam your hand in it, or hit yourself in the face.” I blushed slightly, recalling self-inflicted door injuries of my own. “Not rendering it free of its frame, and doing whatever in the hell you’ve done to the handle.”
Author's Response: :D I'm totally thrilled that the story made you LOL.
Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Six
awwh thts so cool! bella's mind works in colorful colors! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the crazy Bella! Thank you for the review! :)
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Six
Great chapter! I love that Edward caught a glimpse of Tiny Voice, especially in that particular moment. Too funny!
When your Edward isn't being his usual emo self, I love the playful side of him. The whole pinning her to the door thing was pretty hot.
Author's Response: I'm glad ya dig the playful Edward. I got sick of making him so broody all the time. It just seemed totally irrational to me for him to be all doom and gloom after one of his greatest fears was no longer a possibility!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: SilverSeaGull (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Six
I loved it! This is a more confident, certain Edward than in the books, but still with a hint of cannon. I like him a lot. I like his games and his playfulness.
Bella's mind is simply fascinating. How she thinks, what she thinks, it's amazing.I have a question: there is a medical condition in which the nerve responses to the ears and eyes are mixed, and so when the person hears somethingm it manifests in colors in her/his eyes, instead of being registered as actual sounds. Is that what happenes with Bella? i sometimes have a hard time understanding how her mind works. Could you maybe explain it a little?
Thanks for updating!
Elena
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying the story! And playful Edward! :)
Yes! The condition is neurological, and is called synesthesia. It manifests differently person to person, but it usually leads to a strong association between the different sensory perceptions. Some people have a strong, mental image that portrays certain tactile sensations, for example. I'm pretty sure I've greatly exaggerated the condition in this story - but it's more fun this way!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: anonymous (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Five
Very wonderful writing! Mysterious, suspenseful. Fantastic. :)
My theory is that Bella is synesthetic...but if I'm wrong, I can't wait to see what is really going on with her mind.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it!
Your theory would be correct, though I've greatly exaggerated it, I think.
Thank you for the review! :)
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Five
So, is Alice going to tell her what is so very interesting about her future? She seems to be on the cusp of figuring things out, like Edward's mind reading, besides the whole vampire thing.
And Sparkles? That was just hilarious!
Author's Response: Glad ya like! :D And she is indeed very close to finding out some epic happenings in the Cullen house!
Reviewer: SilverSeaGull (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Five
Hey! I totally loved this!! Stavager1 recommended it to me cause she's my beta too... which makes you my sort of beta-sister... and I am LOVING IT!!! I love the way her mind works and just her attitude and how edwrad is STILL a prick even though I love him and... gah! Just, well, to wrao it up, I love it.
Oh and maybe you know, but it's Stavanger1's b-day today! Drop by her forum *whisper conspiratorially*
hugs!
Elena
Author's Response: hehe, thank ya! stavanger1 is win. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying! Thank you so much for giving it a read, and leaving a review!
ooh and *SWAT team hand motions for 'I'm on the way to the forum'* :D
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Five
ok, your bella is absolutely precious. her dialogue with tiny voice is so great! i just found your story so i am a little late in catching up, but i love it so far!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you've given it a read and enjoyed it!
Thank you for the review! :)
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Five
hehe, so cute! Edwards got it baaaad!!
Author's Response: Indeed he does XD
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilightlover90 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Five
this stroy is really good and i really want chapter 6 up :)
Author's Response: Come visit the forum if you'd like to read any teasers! Thank you for the review! :D
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Five
Oh all the pretty colors... Wonderful, can't wait to see how she reacts to the revalation of what they are.
Author's Response: Haha! Glad that you're enjoying it, and thank you for the review! :D
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Five
Love it!!!! I love the new banner! Did you make it?
Author's Response: Thanks!
I did. *blush* hehe
Reviewer: labellamafia (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Five
Excuse the language...
But I fucking love Bella's Tiny Voice.
And the music.
I'm hooked, and impatiently awaiting the next chapter ;)
Author's Response: Cuss all ya' damn well please!
I'll be updating ASAP.
Glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for the review!
Reviewer: TLP (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Five
“I’m only ever about 80% certain of my sanity at any given moment, anyway, so who am I do decide what’s right? Plus, if this whole thing turns out to be some lunatic’s dream fabrication, I’d hate to be labeled as ‘high-strung.’”
LOL that's hands down the best quote in the story :D
Loved this chapter :) Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: *Happy dance* Glad ya liked it!
:D Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Heather_Kristine (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Five
Just found this story...it rocks!! I'm curious as to where you are going to go with this...The banner is great and the soundtrack...well, let's just say that I don't think that Bella is the only one that has Jim Morrison fantasies...I know I DO!!!
Author's Response: Mmm... Morrison.*sigh*
Anyway!
Glad that you're enjoying the story so far, there is much in store, so I hope you'll continue to read on!
Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Five
Awesome progress here :) I dig the new banner, but the old one was cool too...undecided
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you like the banners, thank you for letting me know! :)
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Four
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank ya! :)
Reviewer: xxashleyxx (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Three
Wow. I can't believe you just used an acid bath song! It fit the moment perfectly.
Author's Response: :D I'm in love with Dax Riggs, there is no denying it.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: pink_sapphire (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Five
Ah! I'm totally hooked now! Love it! Your descriptions of Bella's mind are wonderful! I can't wait to see how she acts when Edward shares his secret!
Author's Response: Excellent! Thank you for reading & reviewing! :D
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