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Reviewer: Mary.F (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2013 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 19

please please please write more chapters i beg you

 

Reviewer: Mary.F (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2013 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 17

pleeeeeeaasssse right more chapters I will check every day untill you right more

Reviewer: Mary.F (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2013 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 13

YEAH CHCOLATE!!!! that got my attention by the way your story is amazing , so far its the best esme love story and I have read a LOT of them or it is at least tied for first I really wish there were mor chapters and none of the chapters about charles brother and instead used for more detail about something else but overall so far so good ill post agian at the end of the last chapter to tell you how i felt about the story over all    ;)

 

Reviewer: megan shepley (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2013 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 19

Good story And I would read it because esme is my favriot charater

Reviewer: Kathy (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2012 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 19

WOW. Too bad you stopped writing. You keep the reader involved and wanting more. Keep it up. I'll bet you get published some day.

Kathy

Reviewer: karis (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 19

I'm hooked, I love this story! I want MORE!!!

Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 19

MORE! WE WANT MORE WRITING!!!!!!!!!!NOW!!  Thank you for obliging the wants and obssessions of the people!!!

melanie

Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 18

Yay!  I love Esme.  She's one of my favorite characters in the series.  Hope you write more fast,

melanie

Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 18

Yay!  I love Esme.  She's one of my favorite characters in the series.  Hope you write more fast,

melanie

Reviewer: jstormlala (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 19

this is so amazing.

I have cried in parts.

Reviewer: edwardlover1126 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 19

omg SO worth the wait!!!

Reviewer: Jody (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 19

Aww finally Carlisle arrives. I love that you updated so quickly and the chapeter was great. Keep going.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 19

Ooh, she's thinking about Carlisle again.  Awesome chapter, thanks for the quick update!

Reviewer: twilightlover96 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 19

I feel so bad for Esme, for I know her son is going to die, but at least then she will be with Carisle.

Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 19

AAwww!! She saw Carlisle in the eyes of her baby! How sweet! *sniffle*

I love this story! Keep it coming!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 19

another great chapter!  So sweet that she sees Carlisle in her baby's eyes!

Manda

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 18

Esme is usually a pretty bland motherly character in most stories, but you've certainly changed my mind about her.  I love how you've fleshed out her human story, and I even though I know that she will get her happy ending, everything she experiences seems so real.  I'm very happy she escaped from Charles...I hope he stays tied up where she left him, haha.  He deserved worse for how poor Esme was treated.  Great job so far, please update again soon! 

Reviewer: RhiannonCullen (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 18

Yes. Yes. Yes. I Love it. I am so glad that Esme stood up for herself and fought back. I can't wait to read about her making a new life for herself. That was so awesome.
Jen

Reviewer: thebluejayway (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 18

Poor Esme! Please more soon!

Reviewer: Jody (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 18

I loved this chaper. Your really draw the reader in and make esme seem so real.

Reviewer: kreestahn (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 18

Yes esme!!!

But what will the consequences f this action be? I can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 18

Wow! Way to go Esme! This chapter was so good! I can't wait to read what's next for her life in Ashland! Esme is such an awesome character! So strong and loving, a free spirit!

Great job in writting Esme! You are such a wonderful writter! Keep it coming!

Reviewer: twilightlover96 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 18

I really like thisstory, I had never really thought much about Esme, but I am falling in love with the character. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 18

Go Esme!  Way to show that jerk and give him what was coming to him!  Another great chapter.  can't wait for more!

Manda

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 17

I love that she's happy at last...but I hate that I know it won't last!  Keep updating, please!

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