Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
Love it! Love it! Love it!
Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
Snoopy doesn't hunt...THAT was so cute!!! I love little details like that. Other authors may have not even cared about a little detail like that, but that's what makes your story...that was just simply perfect for this Edward!!! Oh, and I really liked that Bella said he would have no corners to hide his guilt in. That's true. Now that he is actually saving her instead of killing her, he can't carry that guilt into their future. Loved that! It made it all truly more special. Thanks for sharing that chapter. Sorry to hear that it was hard to write but you did it so well.
Author's Response: Thank very much. I'm glad you liked Snoopy - I thought wearing him was something Edward would have chosen to do to help Bella remember things. And yeah, he doesn't hunt.
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
Aww I loved this so much. So sad that Bella had to be turned so soon, but it almost had to be this way.
I absolutely adore this story. I was get so happy when I see you've updated. I'm sad its almost over :(
Lovely job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
ahhh you know how much I love this story and I really hate to see it end...Any who...I loved this chapter so romantic and sweet...I think you did a great job on it. I really liked when bella woke up from the change...Edward and Her were really great...I also loved the
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"Whoa, it was out in the open! I always thought the deed was done here. Go, Edward!" There was a whack, stone hitting stone.
"She can hear you now." Alice.
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I loved that part so much..I really can't wait for the next chapter...Ud soon
Author's Response: Thanks. That idea came out of nowhere and I just thought it was funny, I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
Really movingly written. It made such good sense for Edward to change her to save her--rather than just keep her for himself.
Author's Response: Thanks. I agree, as Bella says, he would have always had a little dark, guilty corner if he'd done it for 'selfish' reasons. But I didn't want it to be a traumatic change where she didn't know what was going on or they didn't have time to adjust. I'm glad you think it worked, thanks for letting me know.
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
I love this update. Eager for more soon.
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
no corners, no secrets, no darkness--so lovely
Reviewer: nike2 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
You know I abandoned my son and the little league baseball game to read your story when it came up.
You did a great job with this chapter. The way you explored B/E's feelings during this process was very good. As a reader, I was so connected to them.Your explanation of Edward and the corners was right on. I love that Charlie can stay in Bella's life - with a believable explanation. I'm soooo psyched there is going to be another chapter. As always - thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks very much - I can't believe you chose the story over the baseball game! I'm glad you liked the chapter - I had a lot of trouble getting it to come out the way I wanted and I was glad you felt connected. Thanks for letting me know.
Reviewer: Karsha (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
That is the best description & circumstances for the change I think I have ever read. Awesome!!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks very much! I really struggled with getting this chapter the way I wanted it so I'm glad it worked for you, thanks.
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
What a ride this has been! While I am not happy with "snarly wolf" Zeke, I love the choice in having it be a necessity to change her. As you wrote, it eliminates the corners.
Just. Mindblowingly. Incredible. I'm heading back over to Moonlight to cast another vote. I am just angry that I was too late to nominate you for two of the other categories :-(
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yeah, Zeke isn't a nice wolf, but he kind of gets his come-uppance. And Edward definitely didn't need any corners.
And thank you so much for your nominations and your votes - I really appreciate your support :) :)
Reviewer: safarigirl (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
Such a great story! I will be so sad when it's finished! Thank you for writing this!
Reviewer: lilquackers77 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
Bellas change was done very well. Edward did change her with out the guilt as she said.
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
Thank God Zeke didn't rip Bella apart, I was kind of worried that he would. I love how Edward is so calm when getting ready to change her, at least he is from Bellas POV. I also like how you had Charlie find out, I mean for the love of Pete he's a cop so he's not totally stupid, even if he is oblivious.
I'm so sad this story is coming to an end but I'm still enjoying it very much. Even though you had trouble writing this chapter I think it came out very well, so good job!
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
I really enjoy the way this chapter is written--with Bella telling the story as a memory. It makes the chapter more intriguing, I think. :)
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
Voted for Bloodlines, btw :)
LOVE this story so much, and I'm so sad to see it come to an end. But, as they say, all good things must come to an end. Looking forward to the rest! You really did a great job with this story. Edward is just perfect.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
I liked how you brought that all together. It worked for this story. I'm really sorry to see this story end. It will be one of my all time favorites that I will read again and again.
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
This story is so beautifully written that even when it is finished it will remain in my favorites.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
I'm sad :(
I really loved this story. You did an incredible job bringing out the characters and the point of the story. I really enjoyed reading it and I'm looking forward to the epilogue :)
Reviewer: bandcampblonde (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
LOVED IT!!!
Reviewer: Kyrene (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
....We're almost done? This makes me very sad. I love this story so hard. I love the way you handled the change and such. It was all very sweet and made sense. I'm happy Charlie got to find out in this one too. Happy Charlie makes for a happy me.
Oh! And Edward totally owned this chapter! I was swinging my fist and like "YEA!" everytime he angrily talked about the wolves. I mean, that was a bunch of crap, Zeke even stepping foot into her father's house. I'm so happy he said all that seriously needed to be said. YEA!
I can't wait for more, even if it's the last chapter ::tear:: Keep Going!!
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
eeee! :D
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
You did a great job with this chapter!!
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 21: Memories and Mashed Banana
Lovely chapter!
Reviewer: lovepink (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
when r u goin to update? its been like 2 weeks and im waiting for more haha
Author's Response: I know, sorry. I've just submitted now (like two seconds ago) so it's in the queue - hopefully it won't be too long until it's validated.
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 20: Photos and Flatscreens
I LOVE this story...I love all of the changes and I ABSOLUTELTY AM Loving Edward as a Daddy. It is a beautiful side of him.
I anxiously await the continuation of this beautiful story.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Yeah, Edward's pretty yummy as a Dad. Next chapter is on the way. Thanks for your review.
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