hands down my favorite AU story for this section of canon

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you very much!

Great chap  I think what sticks out the most is the contrast of this love scene between  Edward and vampire Bella as opposed to Edward and human Bella.  The previous love scenes were softer, more emotional and sweet.  This love scene was more raw and primal, and depicting of a love scene between 2 vampires.  Great job!

I'm going to miss this Edward and Bella.  They are definitely one of my favorites.  I anxiously await anything else you write in fanfiction.  I will be the first to read and review.  You totally won my heart with this story.  It will stay in my favorites for me to reread often. 

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you thought the love scene worked.  I wanted to show that things were different, but was hoping to show that it was still based on love - it took me ages re-working it until I was happy with it.

Thanks for all your reviews and feedback and support, it's all been very much appreciated :)

I can't tell you how much I loved this story. Thank you so much. Beautiful.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much - I'm glad you came along for the ride :)

OMG this story has got to be one of my favs...Thanks so much for sharing this amazintg story with us...I know i'll read it over and over...AMAZING JOB...

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  I've really enjoyed writing this and I'm glad it's one of your favourites, thanks.  And thank you also for all the reviews you've written for Blood Lines - much appreciated :)

i love this story....i can't wait to read EPOV....i hope you include his thoughts on the day that he told Bella about his first engagement...very EMO-angsty Edward stuff...his thoughts when Bella was impaled on the pole...when Bella told him about their baby...her transformation....

 

i also hope that you try for an outtake or an extra where you show their first Christmas together in Edward's childhood home...that would be spectacular...

 

um, so Bella doesn't have a power in your story?  

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the story, thanks so much for letting me know!  We'll definitely see Edward's thoughts on that first day in the clearing - he was a bit distraught that day.  And no, Bella doesn't have a power.

'Thanks for your review.

I think I'm going to cry. I love this story so much I hate to see it end! The ending was just perfect, thank you so much!

Author's Response:

Don't cry!  I'm glad you liked the ending, thank you for letting me know.

This was absolutely beautiful. Loved this story. I'm going to miss it a ton. But this was the perfect ending. :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the ending :)  Thanks for all your reviews and feedback, it's been appreciated.

This was so good! Great ending chapter.  I love your Edward- he adores Bella and can be so tender and gentle, but naughty too.  I should probably find a vampire licking blood off someone disturbing, but your scene was just hot!  And him wanting Bella to hold him and letting the barriers fall... aww Edward.  And then I like your twist at the end about the lion and the lamb.  Gah I'm probably missing more things, but thank you for writing this!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much, glad you liked it!

Awesome chapter.  I love it.  Sad it's over.  Looking forward to EPOV and the outtakes.  

Bravo!  Beautiful job.  I'm sad to see this end, but that was a good spot to wrap it up.

The journey that Edward and Bella went on throughout your story was fabulous.  Their individual growth, as well as their growth as a couple was palpable.  I liked this so much better than Breaking Dawn.  The integrity of the characters remained largely intact, except that your renditions of them were more likable.  They were still themselves, but far less annoying! 

I loved the moments of humor throughout, and there was a lot of it in this chapter.  I loved the touching moments between Edward, Bella and Abbey.  I also greatly appreciated the believable manner in which they were able to keep Charlie in their lives.  No police chief father would ignore major things about his only daughter.  It makes more sense for Charlie to know the truth.

Oh, and I must say that the sexing this chapter was H-O-T!!  It was everything I hoped for Edward!

Thanks for writing such a great piece!

What can I say about this last chapter other than say that it was a perfect ending to a perfect story.  Like Edward said to Bella, he has always been at her mercy and I've been at yours for this story.  Every time I've seen there is an update, I know I'm in for a wonderful read of an incredibly long, well written chapter. 

I loved how you handled Bella's transformation here. Similar to BD, but with it's own spin.  I especially liked how the things from their past were brought up, especially George, taking us right back to the begining.  I thought it was so sweet how Abby new her mamma and how Edward saw it in her mind.

Of course, the private moments between Edward and Bella are my favorite. I thought it was so special that he wanted her to hold him and how he could for the first time just let go and not have to hold back.  My heart rejoiced for him and I thought you did an excellent job of conveying how much this meant to him.  Your Edward is one of my favorite Edwards ever. 

I am very much looking forward to the epilogue and the outakes as I'm not quite ready to let this glorious tale go quite yet.  I have to tell you, you are so talented, I would read anything that you'd write. Bravo!

GUH!! I'm speechless, seriously, I can not form a coherant thought!! Wonderful, perfect, romantic, sweet & WOW all come to mind, but that's it at the moment. I'll have to come back in a little while & do a proper review.

So sad that this story is over, but what a great story! Thank you for sharing this! And, of course, I can't wait to read the epilogue = )