Just beautiful. BEAUTIFUL. To hear Edward's thoughts, hopes, and fears was just heart stopping. The way you portray his fear of losing Bella is truly endearing. How can we not love him? Sigh...

I think my favorite part was when he told Bella that SHE had given him his son through her actions and love for him. Oh how my tears ran freely.

Question: is this ending already? Now that Edward has met his son, is this the end of the tale? I hope we get to see some of that "pushing past the boundaries" that B&E agreed to on the ride to Chicago. After all, they still have that night in that cozy hotel room to look forward to. (Wagging my eyebrows now!) I also hope that we're left with a confirmation on a set date for the wedding. I am so going to miss this. Your writing is positively lovely. And I adore your form of lovely,

MORE PLEASE.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I love your reviews.  There is still more to come - not many chapters, but there are still some more twists and turns and there will be some "boundary pushing" in the next chapter.   There will also be some discussion re the wedding, and the future. 

awww This gives me good shivers.

Author's Response:

Good shivers are good.  Thanks for your review!

Your story is so imaginative and so very well written! You have kept everyone completely "in character" while spinning a story that's compelling and very interesting. It's so different from 99% of the Twilight fan fiction. You really feel like you're getting to know Edward and what makes him tick.

You are a very gifted writer. If you haven't already done so, please get started on other projects that you will be able to sell!

Thanks so much for sharing this special tale with us!

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks very much.  I really don't know what to say - you're review has really blown me away, thank you.

that was so beautiful

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it.

First time I've actually liked a fanfiction story enough to review it. This. Is. Gold. Absolutely perfect! I can't wait for more chapters! You're writing is fantastic :).

Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you very much.  I really don't know what to say - just, wow!  'There's another chapter in the queue so hopefully it will be up soon.

Great story!!! LOVED IT!!!! You nailed Edwards character but is ths the end????? Sequel???? You rocked the characters to no end including Rosalie. You are one of the best writers yet....

Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you.  No, it's not the end just yet.  There are still a few chapters left.  Hopefully the next one will be up soon, it's in the queue now.

beautiful chapter. i love that George and Rebecca were so perceptive. :)

Lovely job.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

That was an excellent chapter. It answered so many questions and pulled together some of the loose ends. It would be cool if George could be told that Edward really is his father though. I am glad Edward and Bella talked so openly about everything at the end. Bella has a way of not saying things that need to be said sometimes.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Next chapter should be up soon and that might give you a clue as to whether George finds out about Edward.

c'mon, please let Edward go back and have a chat w/George... answer all his thoughts.  It's not like George can tell anyone.  And, it's his dying wish to know his father... Pretty please?

Plus, he should donate some money to the school too... just cuz.

But, please, let him talk to George....????

 

Author's Response:

Hey!  Have you been reading my mind!  We're getting there, don't worry.  Thanks for your review!

i LOVE this story! its so original but still keeps everyone in character! PLEASE update more often!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  Next chapter is in the queue so hopefully it will be up soon.

I think this is the favourite story on my favourites list right now.  I just love it.  In fact, if you hadn't updated today, I was going to review again and beg.  I check everyday.  It's just so darn well written.  I love the simple plot, which expands on Edward's character without overwriting what we learn in the books.  It just feels right when I read it.  (And I do read it... over and over and over again.  Sad I know! lol)

How much longer do you plan to go... I just love this story!

Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you very much!  There are still a few more chapters to go and a few more twists and turns. 

Great chapter.

Is Edward breaking the rules if he tells George who he is?  It's not like George can communicate to anyone what he knows.

Of course, it might be too much for George, and might kill him.

I agree with Bella; it's sad that Edward's seen his son for the first and last time.

Very nicely written.  Update for us soon please.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I guess, technically, Edward would be breaking the rules by telling George.  But really, would the Volturi ever know?  I think not.  So Edward might tell him - I don't know, we'll have to wait and see.  Next chaper is in the queue.