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Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
dun dun dunnnnn haha
what a great chapter. i love happy edward. :)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
I love Dadward and how he treats Bella. Uh-oh about Charlie. I look forward to the fireworks. :o)
Sweet chapter.
Author's Response: Mm, yes ... there quite likely will be fireworks. I'm working on it now. I'm glad you like Edward in his new role. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: bandcampblonde (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
oh no! Charlie is going to freak out!! Oh my gosh, update soon.
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Charlie, always the last to know! LOL. Really great chapter. =)
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Holy crow!! As Bella would say...
Love that Bella and Edward get some happiness during the pregnancy!
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Uh oh....
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
That was lovely! All the excitement of having a baby just really well done. Not ad nauseum, but showing the growth of their relationship and themselves. I really liked the scene in Bella's bedroom with the book of etiquette. I like that you surprise me time and again with little details such as that. You've impressed me over and over with the obvious amount of thought and attention to detail in this fic. Dare I say it, but it just feels to me that you truly love writing this fic. That may sound strange but it is the impression I am left with after reading and thinking about what to say in my review.
Edward is just itching to reach for the bubblewrap. You just know he is after Bella nearly fell twice in like a 5 minute timeframe.
I have to giggle at Charlie. What baby, indeed!
Author's Response: Yes, I do enjoy writing this, very much. Though some chapters are easier than others. I'm really glad you're enjoying it. Poor Charlie, I'm wondering what he's going to make of it all!
Thanks very much for your lovely comments, I appreciate them very much.
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
First off, I want edward to sing happy birthday to me like that. And uh oh. who heard about the baby? can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, it wouldn't be a bad thing to have Edward sing happy birthday like that, would it? Next chapter is in the works. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tlg (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
I LOVE this story!!! You are doing a wonderful job! Great writing and great story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much - I really appreciate your comments.
Reviewer: ocd_edward (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 4: All About Edward
yay! New Zealand!! oooh and its practically where i live! Lyttelton, love it, its turned into an awesome we town now.
x
Author's Response: Wow, amazing - you live near Lyttelton! I'm glad you're enjoying the story - thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: ocd_edward (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: I Really Didn't See That Coming
oh my goodness! this brilliant! absolutely wonderful, i cant stop reading!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you like it so much. I've just submitted chapter fifteen, so I hope you'll stay with me and keep reading! Thanks again.
Reviewer: missyninz (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: I Really Didn't See That Coming
um, tragic. damn.
i'm sorry but i think i'll pass on having to remember this story. it kinda hurts to the core, sort of like i was bella.
gosh. sorry!
Author's Response: I understand, but thanks for reviewing. However, if you're willing to read another chapter or two, you'll see it's really a story about Edward and Bella's love growing even deeper and it becomes a very happy story.
Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
YIKES Windchime! I just read back your response to someone asking how many more chapters bc she's scared it will end, and you said 1 or 2!!!
OMG...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
ok, gulp, if you do, you have to start a new one, still keeping them in character...i love the idea of Epi from EPOV, but that's not enough!
you have to promise to start a new story...and After Dawn....please....whimpering...
Author's Response: Wow, your enthusiasm really flatters me, thanks. I don't know if I will do an After Dawn - I don't really have a story line in mind beyond this one. But thanks for your encouragement. Who knows, if I get another idea, I'll write it down. Thanks very much!
Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
ok, i need my next fix of this!
I'm gagging for it....puhlease hurry!
XXOO
Author's Response: Gag no longer - I've just submitted the next chapter now. It's in the queue so hopefully in the next day or so it'll be up. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
What is he good news??????? Update soon.
Author's Response: Working on the good news now. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
Amazing story! Please post again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Next chapter on its way - soon I hope.
Reviewer: henbane (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
This is, hands down, the most well written, inventive and compelling story I've read on this or any other site. PLEASE update soon!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm overwhelmed by your comments! Thanks very much - I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I'm working on the next chapter now so hopefully it'll be up in a few days. And thanks again, I'm really blown away by your review!
Reviewer: henbane (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
This is, hands down, the most well written, inventive and compelling story I've read on this or any other site. PLEASE update soon!
Reviewer: ILEAMC (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
Your story is AWSOME! the wriitng is awsome! I really like it! Especially loved Emmett's world's GREATEST uncle and world's SECOND greatest uncle t-shirts!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
:) :0
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you like the story. Next chapter is on the way.
Reviewer: LilGray (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
amazing as always... I was so excited to see a new chapter... I loved all of it, and I can't wait to hear the "details" keep up the great work!
-Gray
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm really pleased that you're enjoying it. I'm working on the "details" now, so hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: Ruby_Wednesday (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
wonderful chapter...as always. I love this story so much...it's just beautiful and endearing. The cute moments with the rest of the Cullens were so well done with out being overdone.
the wedding...the honeymoon...all the palpabe love and emotion. so much goodness here.
Edward had too many aw moments to count, the considering buying the coffee shop franchise being my favourite
thank you so much for writing and sharing this wonderful story. I can never praise it enough.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Your reviews mean a lot and I really appreciate your comments and support. It also helps keep the ideas coming :)
I'm glad you liked the coffee shop conversation. I could just imagine Edward doing that to keep Bella in her favourite hot beverage!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
is it a crime that i prefare the pregnancy in this story to the pregnancy in breaking dawn; i mean i really liked breaking dawn but your story is a joy to read; edward & bella's love (physical especially) seems so much more natural- theres no fear, no anxiety about the consequences and when one unexpectedly comes along they embrace it, and i absolutley love that! especiall edward's excitement about becoming a father. its also so very well written, its really great work! it feels like the way it was meant to be for the two of them. you've got their characters down to a T so nothing is out of character as well!
and what a cliffhanger! i can't wait to find out, please update soon its killing me!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you think they're true to character, that's what I've been trying for. I'm working on the next chapter now so hopefully it'll be up soon. Thanks for reading and I appreciate you letting me know what you think.
Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
I just found this story. I thought I wouldn't like it because of Edward having a human child before he turned.. that hangle was hard for me to get into. But after reading it I have to say that you handled the idea wonderfully. I'm normally not someone who loves E/B and baby stories either but something about this has me excited. I can't wait until they can have that family they always wanted together.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you stuck with the story even though you weren't sure about it at first, and thank you for the lovely feedback, it's very much appreciated.
Reviewer: kumari (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
What a wonderful story, I think you have grabbed Edwards point of view wonderfully, not an easy task. Also thank you for not making Bella overly vulnerable. I appreciate that she you are allowing her intelligence as well as her emotions for Edward come through, without making her seem clingy, or to much of a helpless girl. Bella is a very strong personality, which I believe why she intrigues Edward so much and I appreciate that you have captured that as well as how the rest of the family behaves. I hope you plan on continuing with Edwards' insight throughout the pregnancy and the birth.
As much as I love Stephenie, I really didn't like Breaking Dawn and the way she handled the pregnancy and birth. I understood the reasons, but it seemed like she left Edward emotionally out of it for the most part, so I am thorughly enjoying this much more involved idea on how they go through this together.
In other words I LOVE YOUR STORY!! Look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks very much. I really am glad that you're enjoying the story. I am planning on going through the pregnancy and birth and Edward will play a big part. Thanks again for your review.
Reviewer: schaapje98 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate
Very nice story!!! I'm amazed!
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
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