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Reviewer: QueenShelley (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 11: Love
LOL...only thing I could think on that last sentence was "oooohhhh!" But I know how the story goes, so...Great stuff so far!
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
I NEED MORE>...............when? when?
Author's Response: Soon ...soon, I hope. I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully not too long. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing - I'm glad you need more :)
Reviewer: Malinche (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
This story is how BD should had been, it is amazing and fool of emotion, the soul of the story, the relationship between Bella and Edward is fantastically captured.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I really appreciate your feedback.
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Very enjoyable so far; you write well. You seem to be missing an important character, though--where's Jacob?
Author's Response: Jacob is roaming the wilds of Canada (see chapter 4). However, he's considering making a reappearance soon. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Cullen312 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Wow, I totally love this story and I'm sooo glad I found it. I love all of the unique twist and turns it's taking. It has all the good parts of an all human story (babies and setting up house) rolled into an AU story. Without causing too much controversey... it's the way BD should have been.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Ahhh what a cliffhanger!! Loving this so much, it's just perfect in every way. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully it will be up soon.
Reviewer: Tulip (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 2 Where Do We Go From Here?
CarliSle. Not carlile. but reading this made me sick to my stomach. the thought of edward with another woman disgusted me.
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 13: Hope, Happiness & Edward's Smile
Awww this is just amazing! The love between them is great and the fact that they are having a baby is just fab. I'm so in love with Edward *sighs*
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 11: Love
OMG this is the most romantic, brilliant story ever! I'm so totally hooked, I even stayed up until the early hours reading. OK, back to the reading now :)
Reviewer: forever_resolutions (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 9: Tank Tops and Tent Pegs
You know, it's 2:40 AM right now...and I'm absolutly GLUED to the screen - this story is AMAZING!
You are a very, very talented author. It's one thing to write a great story of your own, but it takes a LOT to write one about characters that are already established in a published novel.I LOVE the way you write Bella - she's not sickeningly meek like in other fictions; she has some strenght to her, like in the Twilight novels. It's refreshing!
I've been reading your story for hours straight, and I apoligize for not reviewing every chapter. Try and take it as a weird sort of compliment - I find this so riviting that I'm too excited to get to the next chapter to pause and review! Forgive me!
Now, I must continue and find out what happenes to poor Bella!
Author's Response: Absolutely, you're forgiven!! :) I certainly take that as a compliment - and not even a weird one. Thank you very, very much and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so much. I never saw Bella as a weak character so that's why I've written her this way in Blood Lines and I'm glad you like that. I hope you like the rest of the story, and thanks again.
Reviewer: Cullen312 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 6: What Edward Heard
I loved that Rebecca and George sensed something from Edward. I think it's great that he went to visit them. I can't wait to read what happens next. I'm so glad I found this story.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm glad you found the story, too :)
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where Do We Go From Here?
Your recognition and understanding of women's reaction to jealousy is dead-on; really excellent. Nice work so far; I look forward to reading further!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. The story is up to fifteen chapters now with not much more to go - I hope you'll keep reading and enjoy the rest. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where Do We Go From Here?
OMG I'm dying to know what's in that diary!!!
Author's Response: Ah, read on and all will be revealed. Thanks very much for the review :)
Reviewer: forever_resolutions (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 3: Lucy's Diary
Great chapter, really interesting!
I love that you mentioned Nova Scotia (I'm from there) so I'm bouncing in my chair with excitment right now! Haha!
Can't wait to keep reading!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the reference to Nova Scotia :) Thanks very much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the rest.
Reviewer: forever_resolutions (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: I Really Didn't See That Coming
Yay! I love it - I've never read a fic like this! Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much - I hope you like the rest, too.
Reviewer: GoldenGirl115 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Just caught up with this FANTASTIC story. I love it and I am addicted! Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully it won't be too long coming. Thanks again.
Reviewer: wickedlove (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 6: What Edward Heard
It's 3:15 in the morning and I can't stop reading!!!! Windchime you are a very good writer. NEVER STOP.....PLEASE!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much. I'm glad you like the story so much. I'm in the middle of writing the next chapter now, so hopefully it will be up soonish. Thanks again, and maybe get some sleep now!
Reviewer: ocd_edward (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 8: Break and Enter
aaaaawwwwwwwwh! that was lovely! awh
x
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks very much.
Reviewer: sabr101 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
keep writing!!!!!!! PLEASE! KEEP WRITING!!!
Author's Response: I will! I will! Thanks very much for the encouragement. I'm working on the next chapter now so hopefully it won't be too far away. Thanks again.
Reviewer: sabr101 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: I Really Didn't See That Coming
this is my favorite story!! please keep writing u end it really good so we keep reading it! Thanks and please keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Reviewer: twilight goddess (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
I love this story, I love how Edward is excited about the baby and that things are going to be okay (I hope). Nicely written, please continue.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you like the story, and excited Edward. There's still a little bit of tension in the works, but also lots of happy stuff. I'm working on the next chapter now, hopefully it'll be up soon. Thanks again.
Reviewer: henbane (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Gosh, I love this story! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm working on the next chapter now. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Awww!!
I love this Edward. He's so sweet! Love his excitement over the baby. It makes me smile non-stop. And it always leaves me with the feeling of wanting to say 'awww' all the time.
But, a cliff-hanger? Argh! I'm so impatient for the next chapter. :)
Update soon, please?
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter right now so hopefully it won't be too far away. I'm glad you like Edward - you're right, he is very sweet and he's very happy. But there's still some tense times ahead for him. Thanks very much for your review.
Reviewer: keerplunk2809 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
OMG!! YOUR EVIL!! how could you finish there.... haha... poor Charlie, i'm sure he doesn't saw that one coming so soon
Author's Response: I agree, Charlie didn't see that one coming so soon. I'm wondering how he's going to react - working on that one now. Thanks very much for your review!
Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
OMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZZZZZZZZZZING!
The Happy Birthday Song...fan-freaking-tastic.,,,
The Soap Bubble fight and baby kicking.....awwwww..
You are soooo GREAT! I love love love your story and never want to stop reading your work....
Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I was happy with the happy birthday song. And I'm glad you liked the bubble fight and the baby kicking. I thought it would be kind of fun to put such a momentous event as baby's first kick into the middle of something so every-day, like the washing up. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story - thanks very much for reading and for reviewing, I appreciate it.
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