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Reviewer: robsbitch (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

OMG. I loved this chapter.  I'm already antsy for another one.  I think I might love your Edward more than SM's.  *sobs* I'm not ready for this story to end!

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

What priceless moments!  Thank you!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

I think this was the best chapter yet, and I have been a fan of the story for awhile now. I loved the conversation after the package arrived. I can't wait to see what happens next, I am assuming the story will come to a close pretty soon, right? I would love to see it continue on though :)

Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

OMG!!!!

It's a girl!!!

I loved this

Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Wonderful chapter! However, you left it on the edge... I cannot wait to read the next chapter and meet their new baby girl.

 

Please please don't leave us waiting for too long.

 

Thanks so much for writing!!!

 

Sarah

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Huh.  A fairly normal childbirth... I can't help but wonder though what happens with Bella and being changed.  She has a half-human/half-vampire baby and a full vampire husband.  What is her future to be?

I'm glad Edward was able to do this and not freak out.  Too bad Carlisle couldn't be there, but it's done now.



Author's Response:

"The change" will be addressed in the next chapter.  Thanks for your feedback.

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

OMG!!!!!  I'm so glad that she had a healthy baby and that she is alright..at least I think she is.  I guess I don't know whats going to happen next.  What a beautiful chapter.  And as always I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: schaapje98 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Wow.... an amazing chapter!!! You are so talented, I really wonder who you are ;)

Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Awesome!  I loved this chapter.  You write such love and adoration in your words.  Wonderful!

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Aww!  A cute little girl for Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: dandyvamp (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

OMG that was amazing!

Reviewer: Kaytee (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

ITS A GIRL!!! im so excited to see whats next!!!!!

Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Now I'm crying!  What a beautiful chapter, (and a realistic birth!) I loved Edward with the Legos----I love how sentimental your Edward is.  You write such amazing conversations for E and B, I sigh, smile and swoon the entire time I'm reading each chapter. Honestly, I'm just so happy after I read your updates...thank you!!Please tell me there's more??? I can't wait to see everyone with the baby, and what will they name her?  Also, you can't end without Bella changing, can you??I'm shameless...I actually would like this story to never be done!Anyways, BRAVO WIndchime!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  Bella's decision about her change, and the circumstances surrounding it, will be part of the next chapter - or maybe the one after if the next one goes on too long.  I'm glad you like the conversations between Edwrd and Bella, I enjoy writing them so it's good to know you like reading them.  And the Lego will make another appearance (yes, Edward discovers he can order on-line).  Thanks again for your review.

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

this is how the book *should* have been written! no chewing -_- Bravo

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Ah!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WWWOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAZEL TOV!!! OPA!!!!!!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS A GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK, I NEED TO STOP WRITING IN CAPS BUT I DON'T THINK I AM CAPABLE OF IT YET BECAUSE I AM SO FREAKING HAPPY!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR GIVING EDWARD AND BELLA THE HAPPY PREGNANCY AND BIRTH THAT THEY DESERVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Thanks for not leaving us hanging... I was getting worried. You must have children because the experience sounded dead on. I love your version of the birth so much better than in BD, although I a wondering now when Bella will be changed. Guess I'll wait and see.  

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

I wonder if Edward knows not to pay attention to labour-pain-induced rantings. Because I know he would be blaming himself for Bella's pain, but those rantings are normal, even in normal pregnancies.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Oh my God.  I absolutely loved it.  I felt like I was right there with them.  Wonderful job. Can't wait for more.  And I love the fact that you had Edward deliver his little girl.

Reviewer: janeg33 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

wow that was awesome, you give the greatest little bits of side story too. original material and very well written, thanks!

Reviewer: jazzy89 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

awww, that was a great chapter :) update soon i wanna know what they name her!! :)

Reviewer: kumari (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

This was just fantabulous!!   Bout time Edward gets to deliver his own child after all he does have two medical degrees.  I know you have written this in Bella POV,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but I would love to see a filler or one shot with the start of labour and birth done from Edward's POV.  there is so much going on that she is in a "haze" during and I would love to hear his thought's happiness, worry etc as he helps his daughter into the world.   I don't know if you take requests but this was so well written and probably my favorite rendition of how labor and birth should have been between the two........I would really love to hear his side.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Fantabulous - that's great! :)   I'm planning to do an epilogue from Edward's point of view, which will cover most of the events in this story, including the delivery of his daughter.  But maybe I could do the labour as an Edward one-shot - that's a good idea.  Might think about that, thanks.

 

Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Oh what a spectacular chapter!  I thought you were going to be a meanie-head and cut it off with poor Bella in mid-labor but you were awesome and didn't.  I loved the build up to the birth, and LOL @ Alice for everyone being positive the baby was coming on the 16th.  I also liked that you had the baby be born on such a special day to Edward and Bella.

Their presents to each other were quite cute too.

Can't wait to see how all the Cullens are going to be with the new little one, and to find out her name :-)  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Jessypt (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

I recently had a baby... without drugs... and as I was reading this it totally took me back!  This was really great and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!  Don't take long!

Reviewer: RushGirl (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

You Rock!  What a chapter and written so well.  Congratulations!

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Wow! The amount of work you put into this chapter was just astounding--and well worth it.  The birth scene was as beautiful as one can be.  I adore the 'heart to hearts' that you write, so many people gloss over them in their fics and yours are always so touching.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  I'm glad you like their little discussions, I really enjoy writing them.

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