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Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 19
yeah man .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 18
multipule orgasms ARE the best .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 17
fucking steamy .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 16
HOT HOT HOT !
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 15
what the fuck ?!
why can't all guys be like edward !?!
wanting to give you pleasure than just having you suck their cock and be gone ?!
fuck ,
.
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 14
hot ass shit here mother fucker .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 13
that's fucking faggot .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 12
yeah jeez . who knew emmett had it in him ?
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 11
holy shit .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 10
hot .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 9
aaaaaahahahahahhahaha ,. eddie boys not jealous is he ?
tsktsk .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 8
horrificly EPIC .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 7
eddies gotta get a little more action sweetie , he's gonna be in the looney bin if he doesn't !
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
hells fucking yes !
she just OWNED him !!!
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 5
'i want to fuck you doggie-style and have you ride me till my pelvis breaks and i have to go to water arobics .' --- THAT is what he should say .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 4
again , having ahard-on is NOTHING bad .
haha , they're fun to take care of in fact . ;)
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 3
it's only dangerous to have a hard on when you're in the pool and surrounded by big , gruff , manly-men who are homo-phobic .
that's the only time .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 2
why yes young edward . it could .
hahahaha .
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
hahahahha . that would be SUCH an embarressing talk !
goodness .
hahahaha .
i'm actually laughing out loud right now .
Reviewer: tiggy616 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Epilogue
Well written, made me laugh many times over!!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Epilogue
Hmmm...I AM an Emmett fan...So I probably SHOULD check that out....And I LOVED the ending. But I think they SHOULD have been vampires so the forever would really be FOREVER....Oh, well.
Great story. One of the best I've ever read. You've done a magnificant job, and I've had great...pleasure, reading your story. < :)
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 24
I think that you should just make this story over again in Bella's POV. The WHOLE story in her POV. OPLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEOPLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 23
OMGOMGOMGOMG! HES GONNA RAPE HER!!!!!!!!! OH!!!!!!!! Im gonna MURDER him. HES GONNA RAPE HER!!! WHEN HE DOES, THERE BETTER BE A SEQUEL.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 22
Awww. So sweet!!! I hope there a sequel.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 21
Mmmmm. That was amazing. XD Yay!!!!!!!! They DID have sex afterall. And as soon as he decided to 'forget' the condom I KNEW she would be on the pill. My cousin is for her periods.
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