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Reviews For Midnight Desire
Reviewer: CapriciousC (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2008 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 11

"The monster donned a flak vest."  Okay, at this point I laughed so hard I shot soda through my nose.  Seriously, this is one of the funniest and best-written stories I've ever read. 

I really like where you've taken the story, and the way that Edward has grown as a character as a result of his love for Bella.  You're a wonderful writer!  I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: Avalonia (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2008 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 11

I tried like hell to ignore the single bed covered with a simple quilt, but my dick was performing like a divining rod drawn to water.

ROFLMAO...I don't think I stopped laughing once while reading this chapter, except perhaps during certain steamy moments when I found it rather hard to breathe.  This story is brilliant, a perfect hilarious mix of humor, realism, and hotness.  I absolutely can't wait for more!


Reviewer: golden_light3 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 10


Reviewer: coffeeobsessed (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

this is fantastic! please continue! I am anxiously awaiting your next chapter(s)!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2008 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 10

This is the best!  I've passed it on to all the naughty gals at work to enjoy!! Please update soon, can't wait! THANKS!

Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 10

What a wonderful story! I really like this side of Edward *wide grin* Hope you update soon! 

Reviewer: happyphantom (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 10

I enjoyed reading your fanfic. Edward still remains in control even if his hunger is consuming him. Can't wait for your update.

Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 10

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks Elise - appreciate it!

Reviewer: mint_n_chip (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2008 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 10

that was really good!! great job!

Author's Response: Thank you for your continuing reviews mnc . . .

Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 10

This was, as usual, amazing.  I really can't come up with any words adequate to explain how much I love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you CL.  Glad you're enjoying it . . .

Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 10

Love this story! When is the "monster" finally going to get it's way, because, to be completley honest, I can not wait for it to take over.

Author's Response: Ah, the number one question . . .  We shall see.  Thanks BK.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 10

AMAZING!!! Loved this last chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you bb!!

Reviewer: limona (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 10

Alice packed Frank Sinatra for their picnic. That's wonderful.

This fic is really becoming a guilty pleasure for me. All of your chapters are so consistently good, I really enjoy them.

Author's Response: Thank you limona and thanks for following . . .

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 10

Yay!! Finally! I love this story! I loved the line...

"Crap. The monster stopped humping the blanket, raised its head and said huh?" also I loved the Eat her, Eat her!  comment as well!!

Author's Response: Thanks bbt - I appreciate your reviews!

Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 10

Danggg so good! I love this story :)

Author's Response: Thank you so danggg much!

Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 10


Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 10

"To the woods"


I love this fic so much I want to cry a little. 

Author's Response: Aww.  Thank you!

Reviewer: KatieBelle (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 10

Aw that was so sweet. I like that the softer side of Edward finally came out, and that he's not just a horndog all the time (just most of the time lol) Insightful chappie :)

Author's Response: Thanks KB!!

Reviewer: Lola Schatzi (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

Awww... I love the monster! Hee hee! He makes me laugh every time! This was such an amazing chapter. You did a wonderful job at capturing our beloved Edward!

 Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you LS - I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: InnerAnomaly (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

ahhh!!  so great!!  I love how you write Edward in this... it's wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you so much IA!!

Reviewer: JenWordSong (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

OOooooh, how much do I love Twilightzoner? Let me count the ways.

1. Horny little Eddie

2. Hot and heavy car kisses

3. Mutilple ways to ravage Bella

4. Laugh out loud worthy hillarity! 

*squeezes!*  Still LOVE it!  

Author's Response: Tz sighs with bliss and joy . . .

Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 10

You had Edward chant "eat her, eat her"! Ah, that's so cute...

Loved it TZ! I don't know how you do it, but please don't ever stop. And that kiss was hot!! Keep 'em coming. :) 

Author's Response: Thanks cdun - loved your review!!

Reviewer: SiDEADde (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 10


Thank you for the quick update...this is the perfect balance between humor and drama.  I'm so loving it!


Fav Line:

“It’s true, Bella.” I do, however, have a lot of experience with self love . . .

Author's Response: Thank you Si!!!

Reviewer: eternalsunshines (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

First off, thank you so much for updating.

Second, god, I almost died from laughter during some part of this chapter. You're a pro at writing comedy.

 Third, finally! Some action! haha.

Fourth. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks!  Me, too!

Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 10

i want an endearing horny monster to do a running commentary about my awkward moments with the opposite sex.

but you know that.

Author's Response: I believe that can be arranged . . .  Thank you gcs!

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