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Reviewer: Jenna (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 12
I absolutely LOVE the way you portray "the monster". The monster donning the bowtie - running to the stairs - jumping on the bed and patting the spot next to it. It's hysterical!
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 13
omc. right before I read this I was thinking when was she going to bring in James, I was planning on asking you in this review even. hehe. Loved it. I love the monsterabsolutley love him. the things it wants to do, dear god. can't wait til they push their boundries all the way. Edward- just give in already. please. hehe. sorry on this weird happy-high thing sthis morning. love it can't wait fo rmore.
Reviewer: broken_fate (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great story. I stayed up entirely too late reading all 13 chapters last night and I can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 13
Yeah, I wondered how you were going to introduce James... poor Gropeward. It was wonderful, TZ. I love Edward's inner conflict with the BSR plan. It sounds like he might benefit from a ten-step program too.
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 13
...magic wanking wand... ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!! Fantastic! I do love my Wankward... Great story, great chapter. But oh, no. James. Urgh.
Reviewer: MacGyverTape (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love this; your portrayal of the "monster" constantly has me laughing. The story is also really really hot. My favorite combination, hot + hilarious. Love it!
Reviewer: FireDragon (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 13
I am wondering if in keeping with the idea behind this story if James is going to try to rape Bella?
I am also wondering if you will continue this to New Moon and Eclipse?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Obviously, I can't say what will happen in the story - you just have to stay tuned. However, I have no plan to continue the story beyond the basic Twilight scenario.
Reviewer: blondie (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow - what a hot chapter! My favorite line: She could probably get away without wearing a bra, I was holding them so much of the time. Love snarky Edward! Bella is going to be his undoing... James had better keep his hands to himself... Thanks for writing such a fresh story... I was so excited to see the update! Now I have to go find my Edward, er, husband 8-)
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 13
OH NO! He's going to make a run for Bella, isn't he? I love Edward's monster... I seriously do. The talks Edward has with him, him kicking the table leg, dry humping Bella... hopefully the monster will get to come out and play sooN!
Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 13
bah!!! why are you so amazing????!!!
Reviewer: Miriellegrey (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just read through all the chapters you have posted and I don't think I have ever laughed so hard while reading. I love Edward, and I love his monster. I sped through the sexy parts because I was always so afraid that Edward was going to get caught. Now I am going to back and read them properly! Thank you for such an entertaining, delightful read. Edward's monster is simply priceless.
Reviewer: InnerAnomaly (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 13
ugh. James... I hope a Victoria comes into the picture and gets rid of that jerk. so glad for the update! can't wait for the next!!!
Reviewer: KatieBelle (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh no. You did not just fuck shit up. lol! That was awesome tho - yay! Edward got naked boobies! And I love his thought process with Alice and Bella becoming friends - too funny. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 13
OMG James??!! you know what?! fuck the BSR plan! lol kidding i just love frustrated edward and the monster is trully my fav. character LOL! can't wait for the next one :D
Reviewer: Belladonna75 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 13
Woot! An update! As usual, the monster is freaking hilarious! Awesome job and can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Alylyn (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
I actually feel srry for edward. he's so confused. :3
Reviewer: rubies_and_topaz (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 7
wow. it's late and I should have been asleep two hours ago, but i can't stop reading this ! THANK YOU !
Reviewer: sg360girl (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 12
lol, looove this Edward. Hope Bella remembers to reciprocate!! Poor Wankward...
Reviewer: cowza (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 12
This is the funniest fanfic I have ever read. I love it. It is exactly what Midnight Sun is all about-- crazy Edward over-thinking and torturing himself, but even more ridiculous. Brilliantly done!
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 12
OM MY GOSH you have kept me laughing so much with the monster references... pulling the trigger, donning a bow tie... LOL!! I hope you update soon.... very very soon... *the monster gets on his knees and begs*
Reviewer: distelfink (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2008 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 12
i just spent the last two days reading this, hot and sarcastic. i love seeing this side of edward. update soon.
Reviewer: lovesfool (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
I can never get enough Edward...
Reviewer: augustus love (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
this. is. AMAZING. and reeeeally funny. :)
Reviewer: wants_an_edward86 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 12
so amazing! i kinda like horny teenage Edward, haha...please please please post more soon....i'm very intrigued to see what happens next!
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2008 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 12
I serious just adore this story!
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