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Reviewer: TearsOfHope (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
Thank you for this, it was a fresh gulp of air. It's a pity Stephenie Meyer didn't make Edward act like that... It would have saved us a lot of angst. I loved it. And I like the fact that they didn't go all the way... and Edward remained himself at the end. :)
Thank you again and have a good day
Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
About dam time Edward took control. Enough of Jacob and his crap!
Reviewer: Hayliz94 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was totally how this should've ended. I loved how you didn't keep him dominant, but that Edward came back. Awesome job.
Reviewer: tiffybooCullen (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow that was good
Reviewer: Lovingangelso7 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
I Loveeed it! Wish Edward would have taken over like that in the book. Great job.
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
*ahhhh* That was nice. A little volatile at first but I have to say, I was furious the first time I read Eclipse too. *g* Great one shot! *giggles*
Joan
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great job! I never understood the reason why Edward was so obviously insanely jealous over Jacob and yet never said or did anything. I think Bella would have really enjoyed it had he done something!
Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
I wish that happened in Eclipse.
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
A little OOC huh? I would say it was more than just a little. When he took his clothes off I thought for sure, it... could... go.. all.... the... way! But not quite. And talk about Edward staking his claim! In the words of Bella, "Holy Crow!" I wonder what the rest of the Cullen's will think when they get a wiff of Bella's new perfume after the battle? It was coo. I gots ta give you props.
Reviewer: monika (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
damn, i always thought that edward should at least once be demanding with bella because of jacob.......and here it is
Reviewer: Eiko007 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yeah!!! I was great Bella doesn't need to smell like a dog, but like Edward xD Great jobe keep writing xD good luck with everything byebye
Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
=) that would definetly been a more interesting reaction to jacobs kiss, loved it!
Reviewer: Cullenitis (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sparkle peen FTW!!!
Reviewer: BrandyP (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love possesive Edward! I would have liked to see him get this way more often in the books intsead of all "it's ok Bella, whatever makes you happy Bella" Nice work! I would like to read more from you!
Reviewer: Zara Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
loved the lemony story, but I found it strange that Edward would have "hot breath" when he spoke in Bella's ear also that she would have "heavy breast". I also would have like to have Jacob around to see his reaction to what just happened in the tent.
Reviewer: Zara Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
loved the lemony story, but I found it strange that Edward would have "hot breath" when he spoke in Bella's ear also that she would have "heavy breast". I also would have like to have Jacob around to see his reaction to what just happened in the tent.
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
Fun! I loved the glittery penis!!! :D
Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Fantastic first lemon!
Reviewer: vampiregirl360 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
haha this was funny...I liked it
Reviewer: vampiregirl360 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
haha this was funny...I liked it
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Touche' for Edward. Nice work!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Gotta love angry sex with Eddie...well, almost sex! LOL
Well done Edward, TAKE WHAT IS YOURS! LOLOLOL
Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
now THAT is what should have really happened! The Edward in the book was too calm...as a predator, he should have been furious and willing to do anything to mark his territory. Your Edward did that perfectly! Nice job! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad I'm not the only one who wanted Edward to react a little more possessively.
Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very plausible you sold me frankly I enjoyed your interpretation allot more than SM sorry Stephanie. Gratitude for keeping Bella sane aside I just cant see anyone that sainted with the patience Edward displayed toward the Jacob situtation. Enough is Enough already..
Author's Response: Thanks. I just wanted to kick Edward in the shin for being such a pansy about the kiss.
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