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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
yeah!! He loves her! Now I know things will work out. They will work out...right??!!!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
Hmm, not sure what's going on with Edward and Rose, but I'm thinking Edward has a thing for Bella. I hope we find out why he left her.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
Aww that was cute, in a sad way. I'm glad i foudn this story, so far I'm liking it.
Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Yay! The lullaby is next! Keep the chapters coming!
Reviewer: tnuccio (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
great job...you conveyed their feelings and emotions so well! Great job...
Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2008 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
This frickin' awesome.
Reviewer: EmeraldLily (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
This story is amazing. Bella and Edward are so great together, especially with the way you've written this story. I'm so glad they're finally together properly, well almost (he still has to tell her, which will hopefully be in the next chapter) Update soon
Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
woohoo! finally! thanks for the awesome chapter! keep up the great work! - stephanie x =]
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
I think you wrote that lemon just perfectly, especially for this Edward and Bella. It was the right balance between sweet and spice. Truly lovely.
Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Wow. That leap in Bella and Edward's relationship was really unexpected - but much appreciated ;-) Lol at clueless Emmett and all the 'nature' talk!! Can't wait for Edward to play the lullaby (well thats what I'm assuming his plan is) so sweet/romantic. They really need to sit down and have a serious talk about everything and I can't wait to read all about it. I was sooooooooo excited to see a new chapter of this story posted and it definitely lived up to all my expectations! Thank you :-)
Reviewer: Jamiejo7984 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Dammit! I love this story! More please!!
Reviewer: Elizabeth (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
this is still my absolute favorite story!! please update soon, i cant wait for them to finally talk!! im glad to hear that you are feeling better
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2008 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Oh thank you for updating, i love this story!!!
Reviewer: sg360girl (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
you are evil! they keep getting interrupted by phone calls. EVERY single time... Im loving this story and Im wondering how in the world Edward will be able to explain the 7 yr silence.... its very hard to excuse for that, even if he fell in love and "got scared" or whatever... it just seems kinda unforgivable... so Im looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: learn2fall (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
AHHHHHHH CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!! NOT GOOD!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!!!!! ps. u did well on the lemon ;) i loved it!
Reviewer: Jenna (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
So excited about the update! Please update again soon!
Reviewer: kam11 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
I love this story, soo happy to see a new chapter and even happier that B&E finally got it on! He's going to play the piece he wrote before leaving isn't he?!? Weee!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
What a bummer for Bella to wake up all hot and bothered with no Edward to take care of it!! I am kinda bummed that he caved and took Emmetts side. I am glad however that she didn't take it from either of them. Totally glad that she asked Edward what it was between them and kept searching for him to give her something tangible on what is going on betweeen them. Loved how he just kissed her and how he is going to show her just how much he means to her through his music. Looking forward to more! Excellent job!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1
OMG! Can I just say "YES!!" Perfection how you brought the two of them together! Loved every minute of it.
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Ok so I would have lked the chapter earlier on but it was well worth the wait and I will wait for the next one. I loved this chapter but I really want Bella to finally ask him why he left her and have him explain it to her. I am glad to hear that you are feeling better.
Reviewer: Jaja (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
i loved this chapter! And I thought that the lemon was very tasteful, which many author's aren't able to do. So excellent job! can't wait for the next segment! -Ja
Reviewer: Samantha Whitlock (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Um...I doubt I'll be the first to tell you this, but that lemon was hardly awkward. I personally found it extremely emotional, passionate, and well-written. The well-written thing goes for the whole story, too. Also, the length of the story is nothing to apologize for. It has hearty substance, so how long it is ceases to matter. Thanks for writing and I can't wait for more:D
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Finally! Thank you! This is my favorite story. Seriously! I love you!
Reviewer: HopelessRomantic (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Yay! I was hoping you'd update soon! Those were amazing. I wish Bella would realize that Edward is in love with her! everyone else knows it!
Reviewer: cocoajunkie (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Your lemon was great - not too graphic or over the top. What is up with Edward's low white blood cell count? Is it his or someone else's that he was thinking about?
Author's Response: In this story, Edward works in a lab and specializes in hematology-the study of blood. :) It was someone else's test results. He was just trying to think of the most mundane thing possible at that moment. :)
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