Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
poor edward! i'm sure that was not what he was expecting after playing her the song. but oh so realistic!
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
*sniffle* Very realistic that Bella would have issues to work through and I think you wrote it really well. Another great chapter.
Reviewer: leoflora (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
This story is so beautiful. I love the depth and complexity that your characters have. I felt Bellas pain in the first part of this chapter so strongly. Thank you so much for updating this story. Like previous reviewers before me have said, this is one of my favourite fanfics.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
When do you plan on updating? Just curious... this story is seriously in my top 3 all time fav Twilight fics and trust me, I've read a lot!!!!! I'm starting to go through withdraws... I love how long your chapters are, so I understand it takes time... but I hope this comment helps you to post sooner! :) YOU ARE AWESOME!!! AWESOME!!! TOTALLY AND COMPLETELY AWESOME!!!!!!
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2008 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Oh my goodness I can't believe you left off right before he played her the piano piece! Way to leave a gal hanging, hahahahaha. Anyway, I adore this, and I love that Bella and Emmett are related, it's great. Update soon please!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
I finally had a chance to read this story. Ok, I'm in love! I don't care how long it takes to finish or how long it takes between chapters I just want more of this story! I am a patient person and as of now I am waiting patiently for the next chapter! Anyone with an older brother can relate to this story. I think it is very sweet that E/B have been in love all this time and finally have an opportunity to express that love. The musical piece should be wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing with us!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I started it on Sunday and inbetween work and school I've been eattin' it up! It is addicting!!! So good! Every chapter gets better!! Plus I love how long it is. You are such a great writer! I love all of it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! :) It is worth the wait!!!
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Love the story! Can't wait for the update!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 6: "Transformation"
This story is soo good- I love how the characters have fallen in to place. Great writing! I generally only like stories written from POV, but this one has me hook, line and sinker! :) Seriously, it is really really good!!! But I guess you already know that! :)
Reviewer: wenn (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
Confession: I got a twilighted account soley in order to review this story and tell you how FANTASTICALLY ADDICTIVE IT IS. Seriously, this is an incredibly good story. The pacing is fantastic - you create just the right amount of suspense and then give just the right amount of payoff. I have read this in its entirety three times, and eagerly await the next chapter. Also, never apologize for a long chapter! Never! The longer the chapter, the more excited I am!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's so sweet of you to go through the trouble of getting an account. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: kcullen (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
ome that is sooo aesome!!please update soon!!
Reviewer: Jencrane (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
I just sat and read this in one sitting. I am going to absolutely feel awful in the morning, but it was so worth it. It is not too long and you don't put in any needless detail. Perfect. I just hope you keep writing. Also the smut was great!
Reviewer: fallen_phoenix (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
cant wait for the next chapter!! im intrigued
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Yet again, another excellent chapter. I'm glad Edward 'declared" himself to Emmett. And I can't wait to hear Bella's reaction to her lullaby. I hope you get feeling better soon and thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story with us. Donna PS: Sorry for spamming you but I felt I had to review each chapter. I hope you don't mind too much.
Author's Response: I appreciate your reviews. They were really nice to read. :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1
<thud> OME!!!!!!! This is my favorite chapter by far. They sure caught on quick! Definitely worth postpoining my schoolwork for :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
Woohoo! Finally!!!!!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 1
Oooh you are evil! I intended to stop here and start doing school work but I simply can't..... you have me addicted.....
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
I can feel it! They must be getting closer right???!!! They better! I am supposed to be putting the final touches on my senior thesis and instead? I'm stuck in your head :) Gee thanks!!
Author's Response: LOL! Go finish your thesis! The story will still be here. :) And thanks for commenting on each chapter that you've read. That was really sweet of you. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 2
Your comment made me go back and read the lyrics, nicely done :) I like how they snuggled up and WTG Bella for admiting ti was nice, looks like they are finally on the same page! Well ok, maybe not the same page, but at least they are now on the same book :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1
WTG Alice! I can['t wait to find out what she has planned for them at the dinner.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For
Yes! They are finally starting to get the message :) Have I told you yet how much I am enjoying your story? I like how you haven't made jacob into a bad guy. In most fan fiction it's either a Jacob or edward kind of world and no room for anything inbetween. I like you as much as we are rooting for edward, Jacob is a nice guy and isn't threatening to edward.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
well slowly but surely it looks like they are finally getting closer. YEAH!!!! I like your style of writing.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 6: "Transformation"
Hehehe I like how you are building up the tension :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"
Oh! I wished I could slap bella!! Silly silly women, she could have spent the night in Edwards arms! Oh maybe soon....right?
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
LOL What I wouldn't give to have been a fly on the wall of Bella's room to see how she tempted Edward :)
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