Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
Oh I loved how three men sat around dissecting her text message. That was great. That was mean that you didn't let us know what he wrote back. You my favorite meanest author. Seriously you are mean. Stop making me wait! I think you have been taking plenty of breaks from posting! What does that mean!?!?! Ugh. I'll forgive you if you post the next chapter tomorrow. Sorry I just love this thing.
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
I don't blame Bella for being mad. In Twilight she let him off the hook to easy. Great chapters. I was very excited to see an update. I hope she only makes him suffer a tiny bit!
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
fantastic update. I really love your Bella.
Reviewer: Twimoon (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
WOW . great chapter . man i so wana know what edward said in his text . haha update soon please i really like this story, it comes up with things that i was not expecting which surprises me haha which makes this fic even more interesting. GREAT JOB . =]
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
Do we have to be almost at the end...?
Reviewer: HopelessRomantic (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
Please update!!!
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2008 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
Wow! I say that for so many things... First off way long chapters. That isn't a complaint. I read this story complete yesterday. Once again my family was wondering what happened to me. LOL. I love the detail. Some fan fic do not use enough detail. I love that Bella is strong in this story. It took awhile for the mental strength to come out, but I knew it was going to. I really cannot wait to read the rest. Your story is one of the few that I will be checking my computer for updates and read as soon as they come thru! Please don't make me (us) wait too long.
Reviewer: afaye (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
i just read your story tonight and am trying to not go crazy waiting for the next chapter. when will we get it??! i was so happy that bella finally freaked out an edward for leaving for so long! great chapter!! please hurry and put us out of our misery!! please.
Reviewer: Milliehud (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
AHHHHMAZING CHAPTER AND STORY!!! AGHHH Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: smellyia (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
I finally caught up and whew! So lovely and well done! Thank you so much for writing this. It's an amazing thing you've crafted and I fall in love over and over with each post.
Reviewer: AppleJacks (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
So i just found this story a couple days ago and i love it. it a great story line. I love how emmett acts as her big brother, though i kind of expected him to react a little more strongly about edward wanting bella but his personality and how he treats bella is hilarious. I'm so happy you gave jacob someone, i cant stand it when he's pineing away for bella... i cant wait to see what's to come!
Reviewer: sweetnsassy (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
Hmmm, well, I can see Bella's point. Edward was being selfish. But Bella is just as selfish. He didn't think she'd ever want him. So she'd want him to stay around and live in agony as he watches her be happy with someone else? Yes, she knew that wouldn't have happened, but he was convinced it would. She was also being very immature with locking herself in her bathroom and trying to leave without talking to anyone. If she wants to be treated like an adult, she needs to act like one and face her problems and have honest discussions. I don't think she should have just let Edward off the hook, but she needs to deal with and, like Jacob said, give him a break. Very frustrating (but I do love love this story).
Reviewer: momofab (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
I love this story so much!! I like what Jacob said and I am not a Jacob fan! I want this story to never end!
Reviewer: thedramabean (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
I adore this story, especially how you made Bella into a fighter. When Edward left her in "New Moon" and just showed up back in her life again, admitting that he lied to her and all of that? I was PISSED when she let him off the hook that quickly. Suddenly, it was like the idiot had never left! Their relationship was so unequal that it made me sick half of the time. So I'm really, really glad that Bella didn't just "let it go" right away, and she's going to make him fight for her. We're all worth fighting for, but some men are just to obtuse to realize it. Though it was a sad one, it was a great chapter and I love this story! Please update soon!!
Reviewer: momofab (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
So sad. I agree that Edward should not have left her for 7 yrs ESPECIALLY if Emmett knew and he was fine with it! That just shows that Edward was a coward!
Reviewer: kcullen (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
sorry i dont want to be rude but i think bellas acting like a total biatch
Reviewer: KissinCullens (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
I was so happy to see you posted an update. I love this story. It had been a while since i'd read it through so to enjoy your new chapter i spent last night and this evening re-reading from the beginning again to get my bearings. This new chapter didnt disapoint. One question, is there any significance to Edward thinking about his white bloodcell count? And him Studying blood disorders? Or am i seeing something thats not there? Thanks for the great story!
Author's Response: Don't worry. It's just part of his job. There's nothing wrong with him or anyone else.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
Jacob is so sweet! I hope Carlie will make an appearance! :) Great chapter! I hope Edward has a plan! Please update soon!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
SO GOOD! I mean GREAT! I mean AWESOME! I love this story!!!! You are amazing! Now on to part 2! I'm sure she is calling Jacob!:) I'm Team Edward, but I always love alittle bit of Jacob thrown in the mix! :)
Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
I love this story! I hope that Edward can prove himself!
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
I discovered this story on sunday, and read every chapter, finishing the earlie hours of monday morning. It's so well written, and honestly i cried through most of the last chapter...can not wait to read the rest Thank you...
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
Just found your story tonight. I just finished it and it's 1:10 in the morning. It is excellent. I always thought Bella let Edward off to easy and I love that you gave her the balls to tell him and even punch him! Update soon!! Must have more!
Reviewer: Valla (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
I read the entire thing today, err, I guess it's yesterday now. I registered specifically so I could review, and tell you how much I love this story. This last chapter was so heartbreaking, I could feel Bella's pain and betrayal. It was so good at the same time. (You write quite well).
Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
That was really good. It makes me sad cause Edward and Bella are apart, but it was wonderfully written! And the whole Edward/Jake talk was so remniscent of the Fire and Ice chapter in Breaking Dawn. Except, Jake isn't trying to get with Bella [thank goodness].
Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
i love it. tears all over the place. awesome!
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