Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
Ok, so totally didn't see that little outburst coming but I'm so freaking glad it did! I love the angst and seriously, Edward needed to be a man. I laughed so hard during the Garrett part. That was hilarious. I'm so glad Bella stood up for herself. Great job!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Oh, I was so sad when Bella woke up alone in the morning but the explanation made everything almost ok. Emmett is such an interesting character. I would have expected him to react so much more violently to the thought of his sister and his best friend... being intimate... with one another, but he surprised me for the better. Great job, can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1
YAY! That was a wonderful lemon! I'm so glad you finally gave what the frick we wanted! I feel bad for poor Bella, I understood EXACTLY how she felt having to listen to Emmett. I'm surprised that after that she and Edward actually had sex. But, I'm freaking glad they did =)
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
I have to admit that I am so glad that this fic has so many chapters up because you like to tease your audience and having to wait for you update at this point would be pretty much physically painful. I'm glad Edward and Bella have at least sort of kinda figured out their feelings for one another. I hope Edward sneaks into her bedroom tonight. =)
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 1
No time for a long review. Have to run along to the next chapter where I believe we are promised the discovery of some very awesome feelings...
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
I seriously need to confiscate Edward and Bella's cellphones. I've discovered that they are your main means of torture! I can't wait for the next chapter when Edward and Bella FINALLY take a freaking hint!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 1
People REALLY need to stop interrupting Edward and Bella's private moments. You like to torture your readers don't you? You're really secretly finding sadistic and abusive methods to drive us up a wall. Don't even try to deny it. I've caught on to your little game but I won't let it drive me insane, lol.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 2
Lol, I lovd the whole "Mr, Dazzling" storyline. This was another good chapter and I'm so glad they are FINALLY making progress in their relationship. You are a very good writer and I can't wait to read when it finally becomes official!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1
Ah, finally Bella seems to have a clue. I have to admit I was getting slightly irriatated with all the run around but hopefully we are finally getting there. Edward and Bella need to open their eyes and I'm so ready for a heartfelt discussion about why Edward left in the first place...
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For
Just a random thought, but I thought the whole reason Bella was staying with the Cullens was because Angela was with her mom but then she was at work with Bella?
I did enjoy the chapter. I don't really like too much Jake in one story. It's not that I don't like him- it's just that I like Edward so much more. =)
I think Bella is a little too clueless. It's almost a forced cluelessness. Hopefully she will be enlightened soon.
It's time for Edward to freakin take the wheel, be a man, and tell Bella how he feels. And yet I have a feeling that it may not come til later...
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
So hopefully we are getting somewhere. The two of them seem to be making progress. The story with Maria was so funnt, I can't believe Edward didn't remember any of that. I wish he would explain to Bella that he left because he was in love with her. That is what happened right? Great chapter!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 6: "Transformation"
OMG! I need Edward and Bella to be together! I'm dying from all this run-around, lol. I know tension is good but it's time they realized they are in love with each other. Edward needs to man-up and freaking ask her out. I was in hysterics over Edward's reaction to the langerie show. Great stuff!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"
So, I forgot to mention in my last review how much I liked the way you handled Jake and Bella's relationship and I'm so glad that you didn't take it any further then it went. This chapter was fantastic but I'm dying for Bella to know that him and Rosalie aren't actually together. Also, what was Edward's problem? Good job!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
I forgot to mention how much I like that you put bits and pieces of the vamp's personality traits into their human traits. Like how Jasper is so attuned to emotion. I'm dying to find out what happened between Edward and Bella in her bedroom. Hopefully we get that in the next chapter =)
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
It's nice to finally have things explained with Edward and Rosalie. I do wish it was explained a bit more thoroughly. I got the impression they dated but it wasn't fantastic so they pretended to date for Jasper and Alice's sake- is that correct? I'm excited to get the ball rolling on the Edward/Bella train. I can't wait to figure out what his issue is. Great job!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
So I like your story but why is Edward being so flirty if he has a girlfriend and why is Bella not upset with it? I mean obviously Bella and Edward are meant to be together but perhaps he should take care of dumping Rosalie's butt before he attempts to start something with Bella. I guess we don't really know what is going on with Rosalie and Edward but Bella I think would be upset that he was with someone else. Of course, she could not realize he's even flirting with her. I'm just rambling now. On to the next chapter!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
Ok, so I'm a little grossed out that Rosalie and Edward are in a complicated kind of relationship but I'm sure there's a good explaination for that. You've set up the story really well and I can't wait to read more. I'm absolutely dying to find out what Edward's problem is! Great job!
Reviewer: halconmia (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
Great story looking forward to the end! Will keep checking back to see if thier are any new post for this. Good luck finishing the story!
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
I really love this story so far! Please please! update soon! I want to see what happens!!! this is keeping me on my toes lol
Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
i LOVE this story. honestly it has one of the best characterizations and plot line i've ever come across. PLEASE don't leave us hanging for too much longer!! write like the wind... or some equivilant to that haha!
Reviewer: momofab (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
LOVED IT!!! This is one of my favoriet stories! You are a great writer!
Reviewer: momofab (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 1
Love Emmett as her brother and I love that he wanted to beat up Edward for a moment. That is sweet in a brotherly way.
Reviewer: tnuccio (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
Aw, Jen...great reconciliation chapter! i loved the emotion behind it and Edward accepting that he wasn't going to back down. He'd respect her but he was still going to show her he loved her.
This was an awesome chapter! I can't wait until Bella fully realizes she just needs to embrace it.
Great job!
Reviewer: team_jake (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
i was so happy, i just disovered this story and was reading it straight up until this point. It was awesome, no having to wait for updates. Now the magical trail ended.
please update soon!
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
I just found this yesterday and WOW!!!!! I stayed up waaaay to late reading and finished it today. Amazing, brilliant, fabulous story! Thanks for sharing your talent with all of us, I look forward to more!
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