Reviewer: localmusicaddict (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
I'm really glad that this story doesn't portray Bella as a pushover. I'm glad that she held her own. I'm really enjoying this story and stayed up until about 4 in the morning to read it. I only stopped cuz i couldnt keep my eyes open. lol i cant wait to find out what happens!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
I just picked up reading this yesterday - it's so great! I still don't really understand why Edward kept away from her, other than fear of Emmett and that she didn't want him back. I can't wait to read the rest!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
Hmmmm... nice and fun, but Alice is right....need more sooner than later if possible, pze. thanx again.
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
I liked it, but I don't know I wish more conversations between Edward and Bella. Are they boyfriend and girlfriend? Have they told each other they loved each other, I can't remember? When can read Edward's pov? Update soon.
Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
I just found this Sunday and got caught up today. It is a great story and I think I cried during most of the chapters. To me, that means I was right there, you took me into the story. I couldn't believe that I finished it today and hope that you update soon. The reason I picked it to read is because I saw the blue ribbon...to me that means other have liked it so it had to be good. :-) And it hasn't disappointed!! Thanks for sharing your talent.
Reviewer: SparklSoulDtrgnt (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
After re-reading the two chapters with "Electric Feel" on repeat I think I can safely say that I will never hear the song the same way ever again.
Please update soon, each time I read this story I am reminded how much I love it.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
holy crap...that did NOT go the way I expected!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
love the story - can't wait for the next chapter and the song!!!
Reviewer: crazygreenfrog (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
fantistic chapters! I've missed reading your story so much. Update again soon.
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
I've followed this story for quite some time and am delighted that you are working on it again. Sometimes the muses decide to leave and you have to take a break. There's nothing wrong with that. :) I'm happy to wait until you have a chapter. Your story is worth the time. Your Bella is delightful.
Best,
Books
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
So thrilled when I saw there was an update to MBBF! Looking forward to the next update .....thanks so much for not giving up :-)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
aawww...this story just makes me want to cry!
Reviewer: momofab (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
YEA!!! Welcome back! Great chapters! I can't wait to see how she makes Edward work for her!!
Reviewer: jennymafurr (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
AHHH!!!
AN UPDATE!!!
WOOO!
(minor freakout over)
I love this story. Seriously. This story is the reason I started reading on twilighted. I love Bella's character in this, and the fact that she can beat the shit out of a punching bag, and her brother. I love Em in the big brother role, I think he fits perfectly.
Now, go write more!!!!! =D Please!
-jenny.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
LOl I LOVED this chapter. I like the girlie bonding moments and especially how likeable your Rose is.
I wonder what Edward had planned though? Was is something romantic? And I can't wait to see his expression when he sees dolled up Bella.
I'm glad you haven't abandoned this story, I like it... alot.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1
Hmmm not sure I agree with Alice on this one. Loved how Edward was able to show Bella how much he wanted her.
A very well-written chapter, I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Mastaspammip (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
ok i'm glad her and edward are moving in the right direction. I totally see where alice was coming froim about bella all of a sudden becoming available because edward wanted to spend time with her. Its a tricky situation. cant' wait for more. I'm sooooooooooooo glad you started posting again!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
i love this story. past week when there was no other nice fics to read, i started rereadung it. i really love it
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
Oh I am so glad to see your back to posting. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
LOVED the girl talk!!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
There is nothing I love more than an angsty story!!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1
Wonderful!! I love how Edward showed her how he felt about her...now on to part 2....
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
FINALLY! ABOUT FREAKING TIME! I loved it. I love you. I nomitated you for the Eddies and Bellies as I'm sure a million other people did. I was hoping E and B would be back before the end of the story, but I like the direction this is heading. I mean not the blow job discussion but about Edward not taking her for granted :)
Now, what is the appropriate amount of time to wait before I start begging and pleading and whining for the next chapter?
Reviewer: halconmia (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
Wow I was so excited to see an update on this story it is one of my all time favorites! Good Luck with your nominations I will certainly be putting my vote in for you! Can't wait for your next post!
Reviewer: TastyOne (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love love love this story!
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