After a moment, Emmett said, "Bella, I'm sorry."

Her brow pinched. "Why?" She looked around the table. "Damn it, Emmett. Did you eat all the bacon?"

"What? Yes. But that's not why I'm apologizing."

 

Holy shit, I could not stop laughing at this line.  It is so THEM.  Also, I'm really enjoying this so far.  Much better than I expected it to be.

This has been so much fun to read.  i just found your story yesterday and read all day to finish it.  I couldn't walk away from it, I was hooked.  I'm glad to hear that you will finish it because I am so loving it that I have to know what happens next.  Please update soon!!!!!

This is an amazing story...

I can't wait to read what happens next!

This dancing around is so redundant when everything is so obvious. I don't understand how they could do the things they do so many times and still have to wonder about it. How long are they supposed to do this because this hasn't been a mystery for quite some time.

Anyway, I like your story.

love it love it :D

update soooooon :)

I just finished reading your whole story over the last few days...I love it! Please update soon!

Part 2 was a little shorter than expected...but I loved the girlieness at the end!

I have to say, you are one of those authors I truly desipise for sucking me into their stories and depriving me of much needed sleep, but at the same time, that's why I love you so much! Stories like this really make me all warm and fuzzy. I get frustrated, sad, happy, giggly, shy, excited, nervous... but through all that, I am completely and utterly in love! There's nothing better than a really, really, really amazing story to keep you up until stupid o'clock, then leave you content for the rest of the long, yawn-filled day!
I was really annoyed at having to leave this story part-way through this morning to go to work. It was the longest afternoon ever...

I do hope you update soon! You've got me wrapped around your little finger...

Thank you!

XoXo

please keep writing I am waitng to read more. Excellent Job so far!!!!! KEEP IT UP!

This really is a grat story. Can't wait for some more Edward/Bella alone time.

wow !!

 

stunning absoulutley loved the whole story

are you writing any more stuning...x

oh! so happy to see an update!!  can't wait to read about this little party you have cooked up!  should be a fun one!!

 I've just spent the past two days reading your story from start to now. I'm really enjoying it and can't wait until you update!

I love this story!  I like what you've done with the characters-- sometimes the transition to All Human doesn't quite work, but I like how you've developed the characters.  There's a good mix of who they were in Twilight and your own development.  Your dialogue moves the story along very well, and it's authentic/believable.  I hate cheesy, overdone dialogue, but yours is perfect.  And the tension between Edward and Bella is well-played.  Enough to make it suspenseful, but not so much that I quit the story.  I can't wait to see how it's all resolved!  Definitely looking forward to your next post and future fanfics you write!