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Reviewer: lifeupsidedown (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
congrats on your new addition!
Reviewer: Creative_Thinker (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
Happy Mother's Day to You!
It surprised me when I l0oked through my email and saw that this story updated. I had to go back two vhapter before the new ones just to refresh my memory. You did a really swell job with the update and I'm liking how Edward and Bella are moving along with their relationship. Not too fast, yet not too slow. But you have to hit us with another lemon soon because, well....I just can't get enough of Bella and Edward getting it on. LOL
Hope you update sooner than later. Alao congratulations on the new addition to the family!!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
I love it. i think it was big, but youll never see me complaining bout that. I looooooved it. congrats for the baby, haappy mothers day, and update asap.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
Glad you're finally back! It had been so long I had to go back and re-read the whole thing today to remember what was going on - but I got to enjoy it all over again :) Can't wait to see how you're going to end it!
Reviewer: cgrigolo (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
Great story and chapter, one of my absolute favorites! Very excited to see what happens next!
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
wow i loved the dexter scene and the end where edward said that it was mr. dazzling's lab now!! that was so sweet and hot at the same time! can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Creative_Thinker (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 1
Oh no he didn't! lol
Telling her that she couldn't go out dressed like that? Who the hell does Edward think he is??
I really like this chapter. It gave me some good ideas of my own.....
Reviewer: Vess (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
About time! Wahoooozala! /likes
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
all the gold stars belong to you!
Reviewer: pxiicuties (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
worth the wait..:))
Reviewer: lorij (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
I still love this story
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
The angst in this fic has been killing me! But when Bella popped Edward in the jaw .... thank God, thank God, you portrayed her this way. I bow down to you .... Superbly done~!
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
So worth the wait and I'm glad I didn't give up on you. You are so talented. Thank you so much for sharing your gift. Happy Mother's Day.
Reviewer: Angie_Kay (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
sorry i haven't commented on all of the pages im trying to catch up.
but I really love this story. It makes me smile.
The lemon... AMAZING (:
I was getting frustrated with the cockblocking as well, I was just sitting here going GET ON with it. haha the Physical tension is incredible. Each chapter is leaving me with the urge for more. (:
Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
yay great chapter!
Reviewer: Josben (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
THANK YOU!!! So worth the wait.
Reviewer: beraroma (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
Thanks so much for the double update! It sorta makes up for the long wait! Great chapters. The guys were hilarious!
Reviewer: jliane (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
I squealed like a school girl when I saw this update :) I'm glad to hear everything is okay with you! Great job with this chapter... I like jealous Edward, and I'm glad that Bella didn't give in to him.
The reference to "seven years ago Bella" was great. How she would have reacted then, to how she reacted now. Loved it :)
Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
Oh! please update asap!!!
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
‘What happened to the thong' such a great line, I could actually here his disappointment!!!
Loved the conversations with the boys, and the round robin texts, poor Edward...
I've read this story from day one and it never disappoints.
Two months...well worth the wait. Thank you
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
Yay! Loved the update. I'm actually glad that you didn't go on and on and on about the girls' night. I don't think it would've added much to the story you've created so far. I think you did an excellent job the way you wrote it here.
Loved Edward getting totally and completely stunned/turned on by Bella. And then his possessive/jealous side and how Bella handled it (as well as Emmett, too.) The guys all kinda cracked me up in this one--when trying to decide what to do and then with the "therapy" session in the car afterward. They were just kind of all hilariously stupid at times. I loved it.
I've never seen Dexter's Lab, but that was really cute with the whole undies thing. And my absolute favorite line was:
"Dexter's been kicked out. It's Mr. Dazzling's laboratory now."
Reviewer: COLDASICEx3 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
OMG!!!! yay I am so freaking HAPPY that you have Updated!!!!! Ok Ok I'll go Read Now!!!
Reviewer: katieg (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
LOVE THIS STORY! Cant wait for an update!! My friends and I also recommend this one to new readers on the website
Reviewer: mialuvtwilight (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
wow i'm really excited about what is going to happen and i loved what edward did to bella to show her that he would always want her because it was so sweet and romantic and hot!
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