Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
great chapter! i cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
OH MY GOD!!! LOVED it!! That was a facking hot as hell chapter!! When he asked her if she had ever been fucked up against the wall, I had to stop reading and had to go and change my chonies!!!!! CANNOT wait for more!! Awesome job!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 1
Oh Jenn!! JUST LOVED it!!! So fantastic!!! Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
I was so glad Bella wanted to stay with Edward. They need to move past their history and onto their future. The question I have is, with Edward leaving, will Bella go with him? Will he return to her? Will they attempt a long-distance relationship? What? With only two chapters left, I'm curious as to how you plan to wrap that up.
Thanks for a wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 1
It's getting juicy!!
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 2
Yeah it's nice to know nethier one of them mind!!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 1
pretty great start to the chapter. now moving on to part 2. :)
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1
Oh Yeah!!
Reviewer: azora (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 1
"Edward looked at Emmett and gave him a small smile. "I've waited for more than seven years for her. If I can't wait a little longer, then I don't deserve her."
WOW! GREAT LINE! One of the best in this story and a real eye opener for all involved! You have done a great job here, I am really enjoying this one..
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
I'm so glad that these 2 chapters were put out together, but I was very surprised to see them out back to back like that. Please keep up the wonderful work.
I love these two together & I look forward to seeing what happens when Edward goes back to work.
Reviewer: angbo (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
awesome chapter. great story. I was sooo excited to see an update today!
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
Awesome as always!
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
I really liked it, both chapters. Loved the lemons. Finally they are getting somewhere. I don't know what you have planned, but I don't want him to go. Why didn't he ask to go back with him? Update soon. and please reply
Author's Response: Your question:Why didn't he ask to go back with him?
That will be addressed in the later chapters. :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
This was excellent. I love that Bella decided to stop wasting time so that they could simply BE together. I love that they can't control the passion they feel for eachother. They've wasted 7 years... they need to enjoy every minute.
Are you planning on writing a sequel? I would love to read where they go from here!
Author's Response: At this time, I have no plans to write a sequel. :)
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
lol who in their right mind has a problem with lovey fluffy smuttiness??? I guess if the story became only smut and little to no plot it would be concerning... but somehow I don't think that will be the case with this story!!!
I can't wait to see what happens and how they work out their geographical issues!!!
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
Hi jennlynnfs,
loved this chapter (both parts). Glad Bella took the news quite well. Will there be a sequel if you only have two chapters left (e.g. how their relationship developes with Edward in California)?
Great work. Looking forward to more.
Sarah
Author's Response: Hi Sarah!
Thank you so much for the reviews. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter so much. It was a lot of fun to write and I wasn't sure how well received the lemon would be.
At this, I have not plans for a sequel. I love the characters and I loved writing their story, but I'm ready to move on. :) But thank you for asking.
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 1
Hey jennlynnfs,
loved this chapter. Love how you incorporate Alice's 'It's time' :-)
Wonder how Bella'll react to Edward having to go back so soon.
Great job.
Sarah
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"
I'll be honest, you're writing is great but the whole "Edward hasn't told her thing" has run its course. Now it's just annoying that he won't tell her.
Reviewer: bigcap (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
Good to see this story is still around! I reread it not long ago and it made me want the new chapters. Trust me, I understand about real life, but have mercy on your fans!! :)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
Great chapter! Glad she didn't freak out about him having to go back! Really happy that you updated!!!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
omg! hot!!!
Reviewer: rubytuesday (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
I'm so glad that everything's starting to turn out right
Hopefully the job thing won't get in the way, can't wait to read the last 2 chapters. :)
Ruby
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see how it ends :-)
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
That was hot, sweet, awesome, fantastic, orgasmic!! Loved it! I can't wait to see how the story plays out for these two.
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
I love Edward. This has always been my favorite Edward. Sigh.
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