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Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
Hmmm...a unexpected visit? Just happened to be in the neighborhood? I think Edward is anxious to see someone!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
Aww..poor Bella! I hope Edward isn't with Rosalie? They aren't good for rach other! Loving the story!
Reviewer: DrSnuggles (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
ok. this is how it is: i haven't reviewed at all during this story- only beacaused it was finished and i knew you didn't need any encouragement or confirmations. so i wanted to concentrate on the story. But i AM reviewing now. the whole story. so is the rating. i absolutely loved this story! i'm usually one for the lemons ;) but this was so GREAT. as i said, really enjoyed it, laughed my ass of at the penguin-sleep-talking-thing, OMG that was so fucking hilarious! and yes your on author alert ;) thank you for this story :D //Linda
Reviewer: kensersmom (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
OK you are a worse cockblocker then SM. this is really gettin annoying
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Reviewer: kensersmom (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
complicated, fustrated.. what a haha with edward studying blood liked that one....jacob jacob always getting the shaft... poor guy. like it so far.
Reviewer: kensersmom (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
looks like this is going to be good. rosalie with edward huh... doesn't sound good. can't wait to see what is going to hapen.
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 09:41 AM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
Oh God, I read and loved this entire story, but I have to say this was the sweetest part of it. And the sadest. You saved the best and worst for last. Thank you so much for sharing.
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
Before she knew what was happening, her fist connected with his jaw. Edward was unprepared for the blow and fell back, holding his face.
There was venom in her voice. "You coward."
Ah, FINALLY! And she even punches him without breaking something, PRICELESS.
Now, let's ask him from WHEN he loved her, and since he was thinking of her always, if it was also during fucking Gianna... Sonofabitch, he can fuck someone, but he couldn't even practically stand her holding hands with someone, without them being gay, or what? I sure hope that she'll keep her legs shut for a while, because they did that way too early. Like Bella said, after 7 years you deserve answers (in this case she needed to know, because like she said, it was what was best for him).
Sonofa...
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
Emmett needs to die. Urgently.
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
He knew that she would find someone someday, and he knew he couldn't stay to watch it happen.
Selfish motherfucking bastard.
I really, really hope your Bella grows a pair and calls him out on all that shit, because seriously... people aren't this submissive in life, right?
Spikey
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For
I kissed Edward Cullen.
Her friend Angela had never seen her re-shelve books in such a happy
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I'm going to assume there's a word or a few words missing at the end of the chapter?
Spikey
Reviewer: DCBC (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
I DONT BLAME HER ONE FUCKING BIT. SUDDENLY HE COMES BACK AFTER ALL THESE YEARS. SHE WAS OVER HIM AND NOW SHE HAS TO START FROM SCRATCH, I DONT BLAME HER AT ALL FOR BEING FUMED...F HIM EDWARD IS A COWARD........BUT HE WOULD HAVE TO BE FORGIVEN...LOOSING HIM AGAIN IS MUCH WORSE!!! LOVE THIS CHAPTER~
Author's Response: Hahaha. Thank you for that. At the time it was posted, people were split down the middle. Some people liked Bella's reaction and other's thought it was OT.
Your capslock has me loling. :)
Reviewer: DCBC (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
omg omg I loved this chapter. Thank god hey finally had se, the buildup was killing me. LOVED THIS LEMON TO DEATH
Reviewer: malleigh (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 04:51 PM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
Write on, kind lady. Write on.
Reviewer: rb ever (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
GREAT!!!GREAT!!GREAT!!! YOU SHOULD BE THE NEXT STEPHANIE MEYER :)
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
it took a while to get there but they are finally reacting towards oneanother...they have wasted lots of time in their persomal lives, the story is really getting good now
Reviewer: Edward_love (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1
That was great! Worth the wait!
Reviewer: shadow205 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
the chronolgy of this is a little off. You say she hasn't seen him in 7 years but then you say she's 23... but she went to high school with him, etc. within 7 years of 23.
Otherwise, GREAT story so far!! I know alllll about the brother's best friend conundrum!! Haha. Love it.
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Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
I <3ed this story! Sorry I didn't really review but I've been trying to power through it :)
Reviewer: skamplain (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 1
Way too much cockblocking!
Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 06:22 AM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
aw,what a confused couple!even if one of them...but then this story wouldn't have been written,would it?at least,it would have been different.i ebjoyed it very much,and thank you for writing it.it's not unusual i know,to fall in love with a friend...or one supposed to be only a friend.at least these two had their happy ending.
Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
Nice. It's about time Edward let Bella know how he feels, clearly everyone else already knows. I wonder if Emmett can tell?
Great chapter! :D
Reviewer: EeWee (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:31 AM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
Loved your story. Not too much angst, great lemons, lots of love...just the way a B & E story should be. Some of these other authors should take notes from you.
I'm now going to read some of your other Twilight stories.
E
Reviewer: happysavsmile (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 12:19 PM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
fabulous!!!!!! this story is just fabulous !!!!!!!
bravo !!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Boxer R65 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Looks like my guess was wrong. I had it figured that Edward left becuase he, Charlie and Emmett got together and decided what was best for Bella was that Edward leave, as they recognized Bella's youthful affection for Edward was somehow limiting her choices (whatever that means).
I'm still here and still holding my interest. Its good
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