Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"
when the hell is he going to tell her???!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
hahahahahaha wat did bells do ravage him???!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
What an incredible update. Please give them their happily ever after. I'm so sad to see it end. Will you write an epilogue?
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
very well done
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
i love edward but y hasn't he told everyone that he and rose are spliting????!!!!! bella needs to no!!!!!!!!
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Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
edward is sooooo hot i no thats like the understatement of the century but its still true!!!!
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Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
oh shit that was funny as bu i feel so sorry for poor bells she must be mortified!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
Oh gosh! How I love this story so much. It's without a doubt a story that I will remember and revisit way after it's finished. It was one of the first stories I ever read last summer and I knew I would patiently wait for the end. These two chapters were worthy of the wait, the written dialogue would put me in the frame and the beautiful scenes at the end made me sigh. Fantastic story that should be in everyone's favourite. Looking forward to the last chapter and dare I ask maybe an Epilogue???
Thank you so for much for sharing your talent :)
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
I LOVED this second half of the chapter. Only one chapter left? I hope it is a long one to help show how they deal with the two week separation and Bella's job interviews...not to mention Edward's late hours in the lab. I cannot wait to read what you come up with to end this couple's journey to happily ever after.
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
i love it. update soon, please
Reviewer: freesiagirl171 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
C'MON!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
I can't believe I've finally caught up. I lost quite a bit of sleep but it was definitely worth it.
I'm glad Edward finally told Bella and she understood. How are they going to stay together though?
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 1
Great chapter. I like the R/B stuff at the start. Glad their becoming good friends. Hope Edward can tell Bella soon so they can figure things out.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pink tulips
Great chapter. I'm glad Rose and Edward met Charlie. The story about Edward stealing apples for Bella was really cute. Can't wait to read more. How will Edward tell Bella about him going back to California?
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
Lol Mr Dazzling's laboratory. So corny, yet so sweet.
I like how this chapter came out. I didn't mind that you cut out the girls' night. Plus E/B totally made up for it. I'm glad they could show each other how much they want each other and how they appreciate each other too.
Thank you for the email. It's nice to know that you don't mind me leaving a bunch of reviews and clogging up your inbox, especially when I just ramble and put down my random thoughts in half of them.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 1
Great chapter. I loved reading about the guys playing Jasper's bachelor party and arguing over pizza toppings. I'm glad Bella stood up for herself when Edward was overreacting. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2
I liked the E/B conversation at the start of the chapter. It helped clear up a lot of things. I liked the girls' pre-bachelorette party. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1
It's 3:36am here but I can't bring myself to stop reading. TGI Sunday tomorrow. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I'm glad Bella's going to make Edward work for it.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
Great chapter. I'm glad they talked about so much and Bella had her realisations. I liked Rose's advice. Can't wait to read more. AndI have to agree with Bella: being practical about being in love is a ridiculous idea.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 1
I'm glad Bella's finally home and she talked to Emmett. Can't wait to read more. I'm glad Bella's calling Alice too.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
Great chapter. I liked the Em/Ed stuff and the Angela/Bella bit. Glad they're slowly working through things. What did Edward text?
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 1
I'm glad Edward's going to give Bella space. Hope she can make sense of things soon and go talk to Edward.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
Great chapter. I'm glad Jake was there for Bella and talked to Edward. Anyway, something's been nagging at the back of head since the end of the last chapter and I remebered it again when I read: "But if he felt so deeply, how could he stay silent for so long?" Bella felt the exact same way so how did she stay silent for so long? She loved him even before he became distant so why couldn't she tell him first?
Can't wait to read more. Hope they can figure things out between them.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward finally told Bella. How is he going to fix things now though? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Great chapter. Morning afters are always hard to deal with. I'm glad Edward told Emmett how he wants to be with Bella and Emmett was okay with it. Hope Edward can get Bella to understand how he feels about her. Can't wait to read more.
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