Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
So, I have a question for you: Can you make this into a sequel? Can you at least make it ten more chapters? ;)
I think the part I loved the most about this chapter was how closely MBBF Edward emulates canon Edward. So worried about hurting her when he was a younger, savage 17 YO. It was both lovely and sweet. I also love that neither Bella nor Edward are presumptuous about the relationship and where it might go; they both see each other in their heads, but believe that vision is too good to be true. It's such an earnest way of thinking that is almost universally appealing.
I'm frankly grateful that rather than focus on all the wedding details, you mainly focused on Edward and Bella. Let's be honest: They're the schizz we all care about anyhow. The schmexing was so sweet and hot and wonderful. Doesn't everyone deserve an Edward who is willing to take things slowly and focus on their partner's pleasure, no matter how difficult it is to achieve?
Really lovely job, Jenny, but I'm very sad it will all be over soon. The concept of feeling your love is unrequited, then discovering that it has been secretly requited all along is compelling and beatiful. Wonderful job, my dear!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"
Sorry puter spazing so have to be careful not to get kicked off. will review more once I get this damn thing to work
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
Whooo things are getting good. Drunk Bella really is a riot,,,
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
WTF? Pretenses...I think i am a little confused in what Edward is trying to pull here...must read more to find out....
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
WTF? Pretenses...I think i am a little confused in what Edward is trying to pull here...must read more to find out....
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
Ok like where this is going but seriously wondering what's up with Edward and Rose...Just discovered this story and already sucked in...
Reviewer: Zing (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
I must say I'm terribly impressed you manage to write such a wonderful, heart wrenching story in-between kids and a career. I really have no idea how you manage it, but you may have just become my idol!
Thank you for the wonderful story! I was able to finish it in one day between finishing my homework, my nephew's homework, making two meals, and cleaning the house.
Thanks again, and I'm looking forward to the next installment!
Kris
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
Well I for one will miss this story very much. I hope you do an epilogue as well as out takes.
Any out takes that you write will be great.Edward's POV are wonderful and I am sure the high school one will be awesome.
Thanks for sharing this ownderful story. I have always liked the way you have protrayed this Bella. She will be missed. Your Edward is very refreshing as well. He is very romantic and virile. Bella is one lucky girl. As Rose put it he has 7 years to make up for.
=-D
P.S. Is it ok to say I am not looking forward to the end of this story.=-)
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
Holly cow! I cant say I blame her...I would be pissed off too! Thanks for making Bella a strong woman and not a weak pathetic bag of bones!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
Thanks for another really great chapter and journey involving these characters. The exchange between Alice, Rosalie and Bella about Bella's relationship with Edward was really well done. I found Edward and Bella being caught by Esme and Aunt Tanya quite funny. Most of all, I love that Edward and Bella spoke honestly that last night about their fears and hopes for the future. I think that you did achieve your goal to show the ups and downs of the beginning of this relationship. We have watched your characters learn a lot about themselves as well as their partner. It will be sad to have this story end, but it was worth the journey.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
I love this story so very much. I am so sad this is almost over. I love their relationship. They have come so far. I DO hope they have their HEA. They are destined to be together!!! I wish he would have asked her to come with him... I love this. It is excellent!!!
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
wat did he send? wat did he send???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: Jasmett (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
aww the end was so sweet, tho i couldnt help thinking of ways edward could have proven to bella that he wasnt gay, like sweeping her into his arms and nibbling on her neck then whispering into her ear right before he gave her a mind numbing kiss, being one of them lol
Reviewer: Jasmett (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 6: "Transformation"
what the crap is edward dumb or something? how can he miss the fact that shes crazy about him? at first i was feelin sorry for him, what wit gettin teased like that but now i think its divine punishment or something. lol cant wait to see what else happens duing the rest of the week and at the lake
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
Love your story
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
This story is wonderful, and I thank you for continuing it. I never mind waiting for a new chapter because it is always a nice surprise & yours are worth waiting for.
Looks like Alice had a wonderful wedding & Bella and Edward had a wonderful night afterwards.
You said it is ending soon... I hope things work out for them.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1
holy shit you are totally forgiven for taking sooooo long for them to get together that was awsome!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: Jasmett (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
hahahaha poor edward he finally gets bellas hands on him and he couldnt enjoy it.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
oh please can they just get together now????!!!
wtm
Reviewer: Jasmett (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
im so confused...bellas in love with edward thats a no brainer, and apparently edward likes bella too, but whats wit rosalie? and why did edward leave for 7yrs?
im on the edge of my seat, just waiting to find out the answers to these questions =)
oh and i love the fact that bellas this super kickboxing women, i was like YES when i read that lol
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
thank god for end of chapter notes!!!!!!! cant survive more angst!!!!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
What a lovely chapter. The connection between Edward and BElla is in everything they say and do, from frantic kisses in the hallway to the slow love-making of the night.
I think my favorite part was the discussion of weddings. How both wants the other to be the person they're marrying, but is afraid to say it. I'm proud of Edward for being brave enough to admit to it.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 6: "Transformation"
r they ever gonna get together or wat???
wtm
Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
thanks for another great chapter! i loved it!
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