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Reviewer: M Logan (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2

OMG!   This chapter started out 'lovely' and then...bam!  You hit us with Bella's emotional breakdown!  Edward needed to hear all of it and possibly more!  I actually had tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat. Kudos to you!  I cannot wait to read what happens in the morning.....

Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2

aww that chapter was sweet. and DAMN 3 times? what stamina lol I loved it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. keep up the great work. thanks bye

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2

Wow Alice and Jasper's wedding was so romantic and elegant...sigh Alice sure knows how to throw a party. I was happy to see Edward and Bella spend the last night together but not much was accomplished in term of talking about them being together other than in two weeks. It would be awesome if Bella got the job in California...then Edward could finish up his research. I can't wait to read how this all turns out

Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2

I never get teary eyed in a chapter. It takes a lot for me to do that, but I really did in this chapter. It was so heartwarming and sad in a way. What are they going to do? How can you finsih this in 1 chapter? We won't even know if there is a proposal.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 1

Awww this chapter was just so sweet and enlightening.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2

Hot damn  Bella should milk getting just right for all its worth. It is sad that Edward is leaving but that only makes me really curious as to how you will get these two together. Will Bella move? Oh the possibilities...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 1

Ahhh the little green monster strikes again...LOL Edward still has a way to go. Wonder what will happen when Edward has to leave *snicker* he many not be able to stay away for long.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 18: Pink tulips

Well I hope you have received my reviews before this story has ended as you have requested. I have been trying to read all as this story just brightens my day. I myself have just received my degree in molecular biology so to hear about Edward's research brings warm fuzzies to my heart as it brings back my recently completed research days. Thank you for sharing your story.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2

Holy Hale that was so HOT!!! I am glad Edward will no longer take Bella for granted and what a way to show her how much he cares!  *fans overheated face* The bachlorette party was so much fun and the "after party" was phenomenal

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 1

Ok I know I'm supposed to read part 2 first but thought should tell you I like where this is going

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2

Ok all I can say is... GIRL TALK ROCKS!!!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1

That's right Bella honey make that boy work!! Love that Alice brought those points up...was kind of thinking along those same lines. =) I am now curious what dress Alice has planned...she is just sinfully devious and I love her for it. Thanks for making your characters sassy!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2

Ack! keep gettin bumpd dang net... but will keep tryin until i catch up

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 1

OMG that was just beautiful...the sibling love is something to strive for...me and my little sis are just now finding it and I just love reading about it...sigh

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2

LOL...god I loved Emmett and his intro to babies...laughed so hard. Thank you needed to smile after the crappy day I've had.

Reviewer: bangersandmash (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1

Your great taste in music adds to this already fantastic story =)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 1

It's nice to see Edward and Emmett still being best friends...sigh

Did I mention I love your story...

LOL it really does bring a smile to my face =)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2

Halleluja Edward is finally getting a clue! Oh I love Jacob all the more for loving Bella like a true friend...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1

Gasp! There are simply  no words for the raging conflict coursing thru me...it was truly moving

Reviewer: angbo (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2

awesome chapter. I love this story and have told many friends about it. Thanks for taking time out of your busy life to entertain us!

Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2

I am caught up!!!!!  Your story has been wonderful.  I look forward to reading your last chapter.

Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2

wow, just wow.

Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 1

really, really loving your fic.  Again, sorry, but I have been reading on my iphone and am such a dimwhit that I don't know how to review there. 

Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2

loving your fic....

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 1

I reviewed part 2 of chapter 2 before realising that I hadn't read part 1 yet so I came back to read it.

Great chapter. I loved the mental image of Alice having to drag Bella out of the bathroom away from Edward. Lol.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

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