Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 2
Finally some progress - these two are so dense!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1
Great first half! I'm am excited for the dinner.
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For
great chapter - I love Jacob's words - he seems so much more mature in this story than usual.
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
so sweet! I loved it!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
So tense and intriguing!
Reviewer: tauripeg (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 21 Part 1 A Long Time
Thank you soooo much for this story, I found it about a week and a half ago. I have been reading it consistently ever since. I think that this is probably one of my favorites that I have found on Twilighted. I will look forward to the last part of this last chapter with bated breath. Thank you again for all the work and time that you put into this story-It is truly fabulous.
Peg
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
Heartwreching!
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
Fuuuuuuuck.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pink tulips
I have been reading this non stop and keep forgetting to leave reviews. It is so good!!! I love it. you put so much detail into your writing. It is just amazing.
Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 21 Part 1 A Long Time
Okay so they are finally in the same zip code. Thats a good thing but I think you were right to make Bella a little standoffish. E deserves it. It's a phone call for gosh sake. How long does that really take?
To address another issue. In your author note you stated to head off all the questions about when things were going to be posted you noted the next chapters and outakes etc...However you did not give us a date so that really doesn't tell us anything about how long we are going to have to wait for the next posting. Only that some time in the future there will be some. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad b/c I can't wait to cont reading but I'm hoping you mean that we won't have to wait anywhere near as long as last time. Waiting for my story fix that long was torture. This is not said to be bitchy, It's only b/c I love the story so much and want more!!!
Author's Response: That is so weird. I don't know why the posting schedule didn't show up here. It totally did on ff.net.
I'll be posting Part 2 on Friday. The epilogue is with the betas, so once they're done, I'll post it. The outtakes won't be too long after the epilogue.
Sorry about that. I usually just cut and paste what I post over at the other site when I post here.
Jenn
Reviewer: bfk1122 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 21 Part 1 A Long Time
I'm so glad you finally update this story. My computer crashed and I lost a bunch of my favorites so when you updated I went back and reread the whole story again and it was just as good as the first time but with an additional chapter.
I hope the next update is soon. I love it!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
well i had a half day at work and decided to catch up on my reading this had to be some of the cutest lines i have read in along time its hard to make me laugh out loun but that dexter shit was just to funny
Reviewer: sarebear (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 21 Part 1 A Long Time
Just wanted to say how Fantastic your story is!!! I'm in love with it and hanging for part 2 and epilouge!! Hurry please....... Thanks for your brillant writing ability :-)
SB
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1
that was awesome! I am surprised they did it so quickly since it took forever for them to even REALLY kiss eachother.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 21 Part 1 A Long Time
2 freakin months!! Wow Edward is definately hardcore, but I must admit I've worked in a Molecular Life for most of my undergrad years and I know how crazy it could be. I've pulled 10-12 hour days and it is very easy to lose yourself in it. My husband at one point thought I was cheating until he spent the day with me and found out exactly what I do...LoL
I'm glad Emmett had his "talk" with Edward and I do hope now will be a turning point for those two.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! There were quite a few people who were upset at Edward and couldn't believe that he could be so busy. It's nice to feel validated b/c I do try and be as accurate as possible. :)
Thank you!
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
I like that Bella is giving Edward the what for. It was a crowderly thing to do.
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 21 Part 1 A Long Time
Poor Edward he's working so hard! I'm happy they all together again! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1
I am in love!!!!!!!!! with your story that is. I have a feeling I am going to be up way past my bed time tonight reading this.
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
go bella!
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
ah...finally
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
I don't think Emmett is being thick headed. I think he is being a big brother. LOL
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 2
Ok, ok...the dim cluelessness seems to be waning a little :)
This is good - the perfect amount of aggravation mixed with hope that B/E aren't as dumb as they act hee hee :)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1
you got it and its was perfect
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
pmg finally so sombody better tell him who mr dazling is or I will
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
I find it hilarious & ironic that Bella is getting her degree in communications - particularly social interaction, nonverbal and interpersonal hahahahahaha :)
Cool. I would not be a bit surprised if Rosalie had fixed the tv where Edward would have to take a look.
Onto the next chapter!
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