Wonderful, I had goosebumps for this one.  Thank you for completing it.  It was on my watch list for a long time, but I had been reading so many other FF, I hadn't made to MBBF. 

Wait, wait.  I've got to go a bottle of water. and some popcorn.  Then I'll be ready for Roselie info on BJ's.

Okay. buttered Kettle popcorn and Ozarka. Check.  [if I wasn't on meds it would be goose and tonic instead of the water.]

Cute chappie.

 

 

oh my god , what a build up to the BEST sex scene i'/e e/er read on a fan fiction site , really it was amazing the urgency to it was so good , i felt e/ery bit of it !! totally en/ious , so good , thanks !

This was a good story.  I truly enjoyed it.  Thanks.

Simply beautiful.

Im sorry ive not reviewed before but I have been captivated by your story and have been too eager to get to the next chapter. I have spent the last 2 days constantly reading MBBF

The whole story has been an emotional read but this last chapter brought tears to my eyes, it was just beautiful x

I love love loved this story!

I am so very glad I was thinking of the wrong Dexter, because serial killer underwear is damned creepy.

love this story!!!!!

Awww!  This was story was so sweet!  I loved it.  PERFECT!!! 

Really enjoyed this chapter - the impromptu girl's night out is awesome! Bella and Ange really need to get in touch with their inner divas- lol! Plus I can't wait to read Edward's reaction to seeing her all dolled up as on the prowl with the sistahs! That's bound to be fun!

Chyla

Hello.  I just found your story two days ago, and have been enthusiastically reading it ever since. This is my first review of the story - I've been sneaking time to read at work on my ipod so I haven't gotten much opportunity to write my thoughts down.

I just want to check in here and tell you that I am so glad that these two are finally letting their guards down and getting on with it. The tension over the last few chaps was too much for me - I was wondering how long the dance was going to go on...  I can't wait to read Bella's reaction to Edwards composition for her - I'm seriously hoping that some intense and sensual lovemaking ensues. I also am looking forward to them sharing their thoughts and hopes for the future. You did a good job capturing their pent up desire finally being loosed, but I think I'd feel like Bella did with Edward not there by her side to welcome in the morning after such an experience. I hope they get a chance for that later.

Also I have a quick question - why does Edward have a low white blood cell count? I hope that doesn't mean anything too bad???...

Good work so far and I can't wait to read on - BTW I love the long chaps - I'm a marathon reader so keep em coming!

Chyla

Author's Response:

Your question might have already been answered, if you've already finished reading. :) If not, the low white blood cell count was in reference to Edward's research. He works in a lab back in California. More about this will be covered in future chapters.

Thank you so much for your review and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. 

XO

Jenn

Does anyone SERIOUSLY NOT WANT the sex scenes?! Bring it on! I find them quite lovely. ;-)

I'm a little stunned at how Bella took the news... why doesn't she go with him?? She is done with school, has no job... I say she should hop on the plane!