Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1
Good lord, I loved the wrestling.
Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
Your story was so entertaining! I couldn't stop reading it. I have to tell you that I loved that Bella got a wedding that Alice didn't plan.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For
Go Bella
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
Great stories and games
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
lol! That whole bedroom scene was so fantastically awkward; I absolutely adored it!
Also wonderfully awkward: the talk with Jacob and the bar scenes. 2 different kinds of uncomfortable, but both enjoyable.
Em and Rose are so cute! It's intoxicating here. I think I like it so much because it's so sweet and slow, unlike the usually tumultuous start they're often given. Diswasher talk and coffee...priceless.
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
I can;t seem to pull away from this story. it's 2:30 in the morning and I'm obsessively reading this. that's how good it is.
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
So does everybody know they're in love with eacj other except them? Thry think too much.
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
This is cool. I'm not sure what about it I like so much, but I like it.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"
Poor Bella her dream really happened. Edward is a wuss.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
Drunk Bella is cute!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
This outcome of this chapter was really unexpected. I was expecting more fire, but I really like your outcome.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
Thanks for getting to the point with Edward & Bella's banter about being attracked...and Emmett's interuption. I am looking forward to next chapter with Rosalie.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
This chapter is killing me. I like how you are writing this story. You really got me with Rosalie being Edward's girlfriend. I would've cried like Bella too.
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
wonderful story! Looking forward to the outtakes and would lovea sequel
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
I have enjoyed reading this story so very much. These characters were so very endearing and compelling. I was captivated by them from the very start. I am so grateful to you for sharing this story with us. I am looking foward to the outtakes. This was a beautiful chapter!
Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
I absolutely loved this story...great job!!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
Great story great ending iloved how you tied up all loose ends in the storyso we have a fair idea of how all their lives have gone on.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
wonderful ending. I wish there could be a sequel or maybe a second epi with some kiddos for everyone..but all good things come to an end. I really enjoyed this story.
Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
awwwww!!! that ended just how it was suppose to, just right! I loved it. the whole "rush" wedding right after purposing was perfect and then the proposal in general was sweet. not cliched or anything surprising to bella. it was perfect. great great job.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
beautiful story loved it thank you for sharing it.
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
Great epilogue! Thanks for sharing this story--I enjoyed reading it a lot!
Reviewer: eifeltwr (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
Great chapter... I'm sad to see the story ending.
Reviewer: karenlillie (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
Im so crying! I hate that this is done.... I wish I had a brother who could have a best friend as hot as Edward! Damnit that my mom had to give me sisters! LOL
Hope to hear more from you! It was an awesome ride and cant wait to continue with something new!
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
That was great! I'm so glad you decided to share it with us.
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
awesome story....thanks
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