Reviewer: Thaitetwi (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Great Chapter! Wonderful writting! Awesome Story! I love your long chapters. They really tell the story without cutting out so much between chapters. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: Lost Star (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 04:49 AM · On: MBBF Outtakes
Great story with some great lemons! Thanks for writing it.
I had better get back to studying now but this was a great distraction for several days! :D
Reviewer: Thaitetwi (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
Great chapter. I'm happy to see some progress to mending their relationship. Can't wait to read about them get closer.
Reviewer: Laran (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
awesome chapter - emmett is hillarious!! love the hot girls list conversation! i wanna shake E and B tho - they're both so blind about how the other one feels!!!
Reviewer: jbellamore (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
love it!
Reviewer: cullenswanson (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
i understand bella feelings and get why she is hurt but its not like she said anything about how she felt about him all those years ago either so one would think she would understand to an extent. and she is so mad about how the rest of them don't understand how hurt she is but she hides and burries her feelings then wonders why they don't know??!! hmmmm...... time to put on ur big girl panties bella and talk to the ones u love instead of burrying feeling and running away!
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
So found this story and can't seem to stop, but I really want to know why edward was ajerk and left those seven years ago.
Reviewer: cullenswanson (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
alright already with the phone ringing! its played out and ima break their phones! grrr
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
I really enjoyed this story. I usually stick to same universe and candid but I really liked this, im glad I read it. Thanks b
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 21 Part 2 A Long Time
looking forward to boycotting valentine's day..:D
Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For
Isn't Angela in Forks taking care of her mother? How does the sentence end? in a happy...
Reviewer: zozezoze (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"
your a genius!!!!! I've never enjoyed a story this much.
am having my exams and i just cant stop myself from reading.
i dont know weather i should hug u or kill you...
but either ways... i fell in love with ur story :D
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 02:40 PM · On: MBBF Outtakes
I loved all of these outtakes. I understand why you chose to eliminate them, but I am glad that you let us read them. The sex conversation in ch. 12 and the steak dinner in ch.17 were my favorites for totally different reasons. Thank you for uploading these gems!
Reviewer: Ambrekah (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 03:27 AM · On: MBBF Outtakes
yeah! a great story all the way to the end, thanks for the outtakes. they added just a bit more.
Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
I'm so glad you decided to write the epilouge. I love happy wedding endings. Thanks for the ride. It was a good one. I'm going to check out the pics on the FF site. I'll look for the outtakes as you post. Again great story. Thanks for you rhard work and dedication to the story and your fans. We appreciate it.
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1
Bella can do whatever the hell she wants. Alice needs to stop telling her how to treat her man. Playing games sucks. If Bella wants Edward to ask her on a date, she needs to tell him that, not all of a sudden stop touching him or something like that. That being said, yes, they need to go on a date like real people :)
Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
i absolutely loved ur story. it was very realistic and it carried all the misunderstandings and drama of most relationships. kudos to u grl!!!! keep doing ur writing!!!!
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
Cute story...I loved the ending...so Bella...good job on the lemons too. ;cD
One little thing I had an issue with...Carlie...I was happy that Jacob got someone and that you didn't name her Nessie, but the first few times I saw her name I thought it was Charlie and I got a little confused. And then the wedding when both of them were there...I understand that Carlie was Nessie's middle name, but I think it would have been better to have a different name for her.
But other than that...I loved the story and can't wait for the outtakes!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
Great ending. the one thing i can't get past is Washington's waiting period for mariage licences. :)
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 1
Precious brother-sister time! Coming to understandings, hugs, and arm wrestling...wonderful
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 21 Part 2 A Long Time
Thank you for this lovely story. It was well written. The love story was very natural. This was a great read and left me feeling light hearted.
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
great story though i never understood the blood disorder that edward had or why he was annoyed at rose for talking about his work, etc....
Author's Response: Edward didn't have a blood disorder. He studied them. He was annoyed at Rose for talking about his work b/c Rose was giving him a hard time about it.
I hope that clears things up.
Jenn
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
thanks for the podcast rec. Great job with the lemon.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 1
A slow burn
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: Pink tulips
Super cute chapter...the kid's showing off their new significant others.
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