Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
that was sooo cute! i smiled the entire way through!!!!!
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
im glad you had rose baby shopping.. i think thats very cannon for her considering her desire for a baby in SM's saga. and i love how the boys freaked out over the text from bella... its nice to see some big strong men so flustered over a simple text :)
Reviewer: Thaitetwi (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2
Awesome Chapter and Great writing. I could feel the emotion in your words.
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 1
im glad everything is out in the open with these two.. cant wait to see how they fix things. ...but i love your story, i'm so glad i stumbled upon it!!
Author's Response: You are owning me with your responses! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for leaving such wonderful reviews.
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
i am usually anti-jacob.. but i do really like him in this story! i love how edward stayed and just watched the door, though. very cute :)
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
loved the angst! very well written :)
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
i loved the lemon :)
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
i love how their interaction is actually believable. i feel like if they really existed in real life, they might have had a night like that. one of my favorite aspects of your story is the character credibility and how you can put humor and romance in without making it cheesy.
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 2
awwwwww :) loved it! i'm glad that the dinner wasn't really a date. they deserve to have their first real date be focused on them, not alice's wedding
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1
...loved the wrestling ...and alice :)
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For
looking forward to more 'friendly' kissing...or maybe just plain kissing, from e&b. :)
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary
LOVEDDDDD THIS CHAPTER!!! it was absolutely hilarious!...and soo sweet at the end :)
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"
definitely didnt disappoint with the 'tuck in' incident. :) love the story
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
i want to know what happened with edward and bella in the bedroom!!! ...love the suspense though!
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
im so confused of why edward and rose pretended to date... hmmm
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
awwwww... of course bella isnt just any girl to edward. i love where this is going!!! your writing is fantastic!
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
just found your story.. love it already. this chapter made me laugh and gasp at the same time! love how you made edward with rose, well.. atleast for now. :) cant wait to keep reading!
Reviewer: Thaitetwi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2
Awwww. Fuckward is sweet to worry about Horny Bella. I'm glad to see she isn't going to waste anymore time.
Reviewer: sgsgirl (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
I've really enjoyed this fic. Thanks so much - also for the playlists - I've been turned onto MGMT now and am loving it!!!
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time
Thank you for a wonderful story. Yours is one that I enjoyed to the end. Some have left me disapointed. I will read this again in the future more slower and so that I can really enjoy it. I usually read the first time fast with excitment. Again great job.
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1
Yes, I agree. Have Edward work alittle hard for what he's missed for 7 years. He needs to learn Bella's not at his beck and call at all times. But also loved that you had him show her how very much she's wanted. It was delicious. Good Job!
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 1
Wow! I'm liking the turn out so far. i also like this story. It reminds me of Seducing Mrs Swan. Where Edward is awalld for a number of years.
Reviewer: Thaitetwi (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strong Enough: Part 2
Great chapter! The text was unexpected but good to stay connected. I can't wait for their next meeting.
Reviewer: Valentina23 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2
pretty sure that was the best head that bella has ever received from edward in all the fics that i have ever read. HOT HOT HOT! this story is soo good and i'm glad i don't have to wait for posts since it's finished... but i'll be sad when it's over.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's very flattering. I'm still getting the hang of writing lemons, so it's nice to hear when I've pulled one off. :)
Reviewer: Thaitetwi (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2
Totally surprised me with pissed off Bella.... How can she punch Edward in the face??? That beautiful face....I thought she would just forgive him like she did at the begining of this story. Great Chapter!
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