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Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 08:31 AM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)

Thanks for the insight into Edward and your writing process. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: hetzel4 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 03:27 AM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)

Awe...This makes me realize how much I loved MBBF. Your writing is awesome. Thanks for sharing this...

Reviewer: Marinitalita (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 2

What she doesn´t see is that she is equally coward; she begrudges Edward´s silence and partering with Emmett but what about her? She let it happen, always meekly accepting everything, not voicing her toughts and feelings with the ones that loved her and she loved, never standing her ground, never letting anything up, always suffering inside. How will someone ever knew? Both were wrong.

Reviewer: Jaci (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 21 Part 2 A Long Time

Wow!  That was such a great story!  I hope you write more.  Jacilyn

Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time

thank you for a wonderful story i thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

look forward to reading more of your work

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time

really really good!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2

really, really good!

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1

really good

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1

so wonderful!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 08:03 PM · On: MBBF Outtakes

Gah, I loved this!!!!  I miss them already!

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1

My gosh, I hope they get together soon. They are killing me. LOL

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"

Im lovin the story.

Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time

Sorry, just found out I've been giving wrong ratings.

Reviewer: Roselands (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Epilogue: Every Time

you're amazing.

 

this story was absolutely adorable and made me want to actually punch the both of them through the screen at times, that's how amazing your words have been =) hahah

 

but thank you for the time and effort that you've put into this beautiful work..it has been truly and greatly appreciated =)

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Epilogue: Every Time

wow! i stand amazed at what you have created. I have read my good share a fan-fiction, hell i'm even trying to write my own, but there are very few that I come across that truly blow me away. I've spent the last three days snowed into my apartment, sitting on my couch like a bum, reading your fic. i love the adventure you took these characters on, and it had such a beautiful ending! i was literally giggling, yes-giggling, the entire way through the epilogue. it was so romantic and fit their character profiles perfectly. and i definitely didnt expect things to happen the way they did- with alice being pregnant, bella finding the ring, or the ceremony just two weeks later... but it was perfect for them, which makes it a perfect ending to the fic. thank you for all the time you put into this.. i know i'm just a selfish reader, enjoying all the hard work you put in.. but i really did enjoy reading it. i'll be rec'ing it out as well. sorry for all the reviews.. i know some where really short, but i just wanted to let you know that i loved it all the way through. hope to read more of your work soon :) -Katelyn

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 21 Part 2 A Long Time

ahhh!!! okay... so i was originally so mad at their reunion. but if i really think about it, it was totally in character. just because i wanted edward to sweep bella into his arms, doesnt mean that it was actually something he would have done. so great job not letting the romance run away with you as you wrote this. but the they totally made up for it in this half of the chapter. oh, and i LOVE alice and jasper. they're adorable. your story was so fantastic.. really one of the better ones i've read, but i'll get to all that when i comment on the epilogue, which we both know by now that i will.

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 2

from laughing like a moron, straight to tears with this chapter. ugh. love it

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 20: "It's You" Part 1

so im in my campus library, grinning like an idiot thanks to your story... needless to say, i loved this chapter!

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 2

loved this chapter.. im glad edward told bella, and im so glad she didnt freak out. we both know shes more mature than that, so im happy :) ..and great lemon! i wish we all had an edward of our own to not be so careful with us....

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 19: Be Good Part 1

gotta love a jealous edward..

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 2

Mr. Dazzlings laboratory.. nice touch :)

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 1

ahhh hahahaha.. damn, i love your bella. im so glad she told edward off like that. and she was right, she is the one who determines the status of their relationship and im so glad she let him have it. i hate when men think they get to decide how we dress. its not their body. ugh. loved it

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 17: Dexter Part 1

ahhh hahahaha.. damn, i love your bella. im so glad she told edward off like that. and she was right, she is the one who determines the status of their relationship and im so glad she let him have it. i hate when men think they get to decide how we dress. its not their body. ugh. loved it

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 2

loved the girl time :)

Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1

okay.. this might be a hefty review, just bear with me... edwards interaction with bella in his bedroom was so sweet. i love how you have them cherish their time together without just jumping to sex. i think it was important for bella to really feel loved, and you accomplished that really well as an author. im also glad that they can talk about their past so honestly even though its a hard topic for them to discuss. ...and as a reader of your story, i admit i forgot about bella blowing up on alice too. im glad you had them spend time together and work it out, i saw the importance of it as i was reading. and.. (sorry i told you this would be a long review) im really glad you had alice speak up about bella not being there every time its convenient for edward. every healthy relationship needs space and a little thrill of the chase. so even know we both know these two amazing characters are soul mates, its nice to see you make them human. cant wait to see how edward makes most of his time with bella. :) okay so my rambling is done and im going to keep reading...

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