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Reviewer: CapriciousC (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
This is such a sweet story - I'm really enjoying it! You've done a wonderful job with all of the characters, and the dialogue is great. I can't wait to hear why Edward stayed away from Bella for all those years - I have a theory but it might be completely off-base. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Blondi94 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
Wow drunk Bella priceless
Reviewer: commonsense101 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
Oh my Gosh! You ended it like that!?!? I wanna know what happened in Bella's room! Oh, good old cliffhangers
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
Em-Bear!!! HA HA this chapter was funny...well some parts. i wonder what happened that made Edward leave so quickly? hmmm... but once again truley amazing! keep it up and yes a lot of people will not bother eating, let alone look on the internet once Breaking Dawn comes out...i will be one of those! LOL! but yeah great chapter!
Reviewer: azerbaijanie (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
gah you must tell us what happened in that bedroom! Seriously, make it a one shot excerpt or something. It will make my life complete, haha.
Reviewer: twilightgab (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
He had an expression of a man who had just been tested to his limits.- TO FUNNY!!! PLEASAE KEEP WRITING MORE CHAPTER. LOVE YOUR STORY...
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"
Aah! What happened in that bedroom?! That was evil not to post that. :P I love this story.
Reviewer: Little old me (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2008 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
So Rosalie and Edward really don't like each other that way? I'm glad. I love the story, by the way! It's a plot that you come across once in a blue moon, which is a good thing because it's not overused. Anyhoo.Why did Edward ignore Bella for 7 years? He better have a good story to tell her. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: MrsMcCoy (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2008 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
Right on! I am really interested in the Edward/Rosalie back story. How and why did they have to keep up a charade? Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: MrsMcCoy (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2008 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
Well you teased us since it says there are 3 chapters and there are really only 2. I really like the setup, the plot sounds interesting. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: jliane (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
I love this story so far...the chemistry between them is great :) I can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
OH MY GOSH!!!! soooooo good!! so i hope we find out what the heck is going on with Edward and the whole charade with Rosalie soon!! really looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: EmeraldLily (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
Brilliant chapter, and a good twist with the whole Edward/Rosalie thing. Poor Bella, though I'm sure they'll sort it out too. Looking forward to the chapter during which she is staying with him - Update soon
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
This is such a great story! I so look fwd to more chapters! One comment though, I would love a chapter to explain what happened to Rosalie and Edward. :) Just a thought.
Reviewer: vjgm (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
OK, Edward can kiss my knuckles anytime he wants.....
Fabulous chapter, I really enjoyed it!
Reviewer: EmeraldLily (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
Bless those two. Another brilliant chapter - update soon
Reviewer: Blondi94 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
thats pretty good
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
Really good chapter! I like how this story is turning out and I can't wait to see how the Rosalie/Edward situation works out. Update soon :)
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
Really good chapter! I like how this story is turning out and I can't wait to see how the Rosalie/Edward situation works out. Update soon :)
Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
woo well done! keep up the good work! i can't wait to read more! - stephanie x =]
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"
GAH!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! LOVEd this one!
Reviewer: vjgm (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
Really cool story! I can't wait to see where this leads :)
Reviewer: EmeraldLily (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
This story is really good so far, and I'm interested to see where you take it. Poor Bella though...update soon
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
OOOH! I like this story! Please update soon!!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
this story has super fatastic prospects!!! i LOVE it already!! but wait what is this thing with Edward and Rosalie? and then i wonder how long it will take for us (the reader) why Edward fizzled out his friendship with Bella? i can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!!!
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