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Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

Did you mean to say "Edward would throw himself in front of a bus for Bella", not Emmett, in your last sentence? :)

Damn Emmett for ruining what could have been an even better evening! 

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 1

OMEEEEE!!! I can't wait for Edward to re-dazzle Bella into submission!!

Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

OH MY GOODNESS!!!! WOW! that was just AMAZING!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: learn2fall (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PLEASE POST CHAPTER 12 AS SOON AS POSSIBLE BEFORE I INTERNALLY COMBUST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I WOULD LOVE YOU FOREVER IF YOU DO IT!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! I'VE WAITED SO LONG FOR B & E TO GET TOGETHER!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON!!!!!!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: tnuccio (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

what a great update!  I love that they FINALLY took the next step!!  I'm glad Jake found someone and everyone else is coming together!

 It's getting REALLY good now!

Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

hey!

well done!

keep up the awesome work!

i hope you feel better and if not get well soon!!!

loved the last line "Edward would throw himself in front of a bus for Emmett, but he couldn't help wanting to throw Emmett in front of one right now." Classic! ha ha

- stephanie x =]

Reviewer: katdan2003 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"

Rosalie and Edward....EEWWW!

Gotta correct this relationship QUICK!

Love the story.

Reviewer: limona (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

Two lovely, well-written chapters. I'm glad they're finally doing something on purpose!

And is Emmett really that thickheaded, or is he butting in on purpose out of some misguided brotherly protection? 

Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

I am so, so very happy right now.  I love this chapter.  Wonderful.

Reviewer: nicole37 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

Aww... such a great chapter!

Thanks for the update!! 

Reviewer: no reservations (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

Love this chapter. Not rushing it at all. Hope he sneaks into her room.

 

 

Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

my lord. i love this. it's like a slow burn, and i can't wait for everything to go up in flames! you're AWESOME!

Reviewer: irismagic101 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

AH!!! THEY KISSED! FREAKING AWESOME!!!

Reviewer: COLDASICEx3 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

COCKBLOCK EMMETT.

 

Loved the update.

Reviewer: Lizzie (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

Amazing, amazing chapter! Perfect in every way! Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

B&E are so adorably cute. And it's about.freaking.time they talked.

I adore how you made their conversation natural, awkward, immensely sweet, and tender all at the same time. Lovely.

Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

So I was looking for some really good AH fan fiction to read and I stumbled upon this.

And I must say, you are an amazing writer! I love this story so much. And I really really want the next chapter!

Your story makes me want my own Edward even more!

Reviewer: who knows (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

I am in love with this story.   I stayed up ENTIRELY way too late on a weeknight to read it.  (I am paying the price today...but it was so worth it!!)

 I am glad they get a clue soon.  I think their family and friends are the BIGGEST MOMENT-KILLERS EVER!  That said, I wouldn't change a thing.  They need to take this time to realize they feel the same way about each other.

 

Reviewer: nicole37 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

Awesome chapter......

I just want them to hook up already!!!

HAHA Defaintly Angst!

Thanks for the update :-) 

Reviewer: XxJanaxX (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

i really loved this story!

i hope you dont mind, but i printed it out because my dad gave me a limited time on the computer and i was so into the story i couldnt get up! cant wait for an update!

Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

I was hoping that when you said they would get a clue soon it would be SOON!  Please youre killing me!

Reviewer: amblovestoread (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2008 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

I just love love love this story!!!!! I don't think I can tell you that enough. And no the angst is not unbearable, it makes my heart thump in my chest and I LOVE IT!!!  I laughed so much at the breadfast talk. They are just so cute. Again I love this story! Great chapter as always!

Reviewer: distelfink (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

thanks for the storym ive spent th epast two days reading it, and i'm waiting now till they're finally on the same page. update soon =)

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

I just found this story and I absolutely love it!! They seriously need to get together already. It's driving me crazy. Please update soon!

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

OH PLEASE.... soon!! SOOON!! And good on Alice for having them go to the cabin earlier... I'm sure she has figured out that nothing has happened between them, yet.

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