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Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 1

Oh I'm doing the snoopy dance! You're posting again! Woo-Hoo! Hope you are feeling better! And I just adore this story. I find it so funny how you apologize for the long chapters because I find myself looking up and checking where I am in the story hoping that I haven't finished the chapter yet. I just don't want it to end. It's that good. I love how you have the relationships between the characters. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1

Wow. That was... just wow.

Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2

SQUEEE! That chapter was... GUH! Fantastic. Absolutely amazing!!! Guh! And he's going to play his song that he began composing all of those years ago. And... YAY! Edward is an idiot when he chose Emmett over Bella, but he apologised quickly. I'm glad he's not an idiot. I would've expected Emmett's reaction to be a bit stronger. :) But it's so good. So sweet. So...

I'm thrilled that you were able to update and I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Take care!!!

Reviewer: psych926 (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2008 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2

So good! Finally! I'm so happy! I love what you have done with the characters and how they interact together! Love it! Eagerly awaiting more!

Reviewer: ahhelga (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2

Oh my goodness, I'm loving this story. Really, really loving it. It feels as if everything in this story has been leading up to this point--or, the point in the beginning of the next chapter (when Edward shows that he loves Bella). The lemon was wonderful, and gosh, it felt so appropriate, and I especially loved the morning after, with all the innuendos. This is spectacular, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you continue soon!

Reviewer: vhartley (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2

I Love this story!

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1

Hot damn! That was...awesome! Lame response I know...so just know I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

I am sorry to hear that you are not feeling well and I agree family comes first! And YAY for being Preggers! I hope that you get better soon!

Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"

ok so I am going totally crazy for this story. I saw that you had said that you sent in the next chapter and that was clear back on the 30th, does it normally take this long?  I am so impatient.........

Author's Response:

No. I haven't been feeling well and since I'm pregnant, I can't take any medicine. It's been difficult reading the computer screen. The little energy I do have left, I've been saving for my family. 

I'm sorry for the delay. I haven't given up on the story. I will post when I'm feeling better.

Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

I'm stressing out about this story!  Before, you responded to at least some of your reviews, but now, its been a long time since you updated and no responses to reviews.  Are you ok?  I hope you didn't die because if you did, this story would never be updated and I might just not be able to go on living myself!!!!

Author's Response:

I only respond to reviews if there's a specific question that probably won't be answered in teh story later. 

I'm still around. :)

I usually post about the story in the Forums, in the All Human Forum, under my story "My Brother's Best Friend". Here's a link as to why I've been MIA.

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=533&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=240

 But I can also say that I've finally finished revising the next chapter and I sent it off to my betas last night. :)

 Thanks for inquiring! Sorry for the delay, but I do plan to post soon. :) 

Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

I just had to tell you that I just read your whole story again and I love that the chapters are so long!! :) Also I listen to the songs that you have in the story and found that it really added to it. I hope that you are able to update soon!

Reviewer: xoEdward4lifeox (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

Grrrrrrr! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2

But I want more!

 

AHHH!!!!!

 

It is 1 AM and I couldn't stop reading, and it just isn't enough.

 

I need more, like, immediately. -ANGRY FACE-

 

 

 

This is what happens when you're addicted to crack. 

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 1

I am dying here. When is it going to happen. You can't see me, but I'm sitting here looking at my computer with my angry face.

 

It's very threatening. :D 

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

I know 15 year olds that have had more sexual partners than Bella and Edward combined and times by like ten.

 

I do go to a pretty slutty school though... 

 

:D 

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 1

Moving on to the next chapter... :D

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 2

What, she'd prefer it if he made moves on her while he thought she was asleep.

 

Yeah, thats a quality I look for in a guy... :O 

 

hahaha, good chapter though. :D 

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1

Well, I'm going to review this half.

I'm loving it. Anyway, I want to read more so that is all I'm writing for now.

 

Do you have a full list of both of their playlists? 

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For

Stupid Jacob needs to but out. Why does Bella even like him? Why does she let him kiss her, I mean, he's gross.

 

Bleh.

 

Moving on. :D 

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 7: Nothing Out of the Ordinary

Aww. The last line was so sweet!

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 5 "Pictures"

Awww.

 

Why is Edward such a tool?

 

And I really want to know why he left! Ahhh!

 

I adore this story though, its like crack.

It's ruining my homelife (I'm spending all my time reading it) and it can't be good for my health (not sleeping, reading..) and its addictive.

 

 

Your story is crack.  :D  

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 4: "I'd Rather Leave Than Suffer This"

Oh la la. I love it.

 

There was a really funny thing you said so I'm going to go up and check what it was. 

 

Oh yeah, how offended and shocked Emmett was when Rosalie was described as carrot cake.

 

It wouldn't have been nearly as funny if it wasn't carrot cake. haha 

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"

But why did he ignore her for seven years!?!?!

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 2: "Elegant Creature"

Regardless of how much I loved Edward, I'd be so freaking mad I'd kill him, or at least give him the silent treatment, or try and make him jealous or SOMETHING... Why is she so nice and forgiving?

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"

If I were Bella, when I found out he was dating Rosalie I would have said something like, 'Ooh, tough break.' or 'Oh, sorry dude.'

Haha.

I haven't read many AU-Human, but I really like this one, so I'm going to give some more a go. :D 

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