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Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
Edward's got alot of "splainin'" to do.
Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
Fabulous chapter. Geez I wish there was a sound track I could click on when reading this. Not that I don't check out the songs at the chapters beginnings. But whenever Edward plays, I always wish I could hear him.
And the white blood count, I was wondering about the lost years. this will explain a lot.
Thanks for the great chapter!!!
Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1
I'm all hot and sweaty after that....Whew.
Seriously erotic.
And now part 2. Whoa. :-0
Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 2
Well, they've made some great progress! Yea! No more brother sister relationship.
Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 11: On Purpose Part 1
A Small Chance? Ha! Can't wait. thanks for the excellent story! Sheesh...so guarded and tenative.
Better than falling immediately into bed really. :-)
Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
Hangin' in Sweetie! Geez I want them to lock lips. Great build up!
Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 1
Yea, can't stop now!!! OOOOO
Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 2
I love the mounting tension between them. Can't wait for the passionate kiss!
Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: Worth Fighting For
Never apoligize for the long chapters! I love them!
Reviewer: tfffan (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"
Well now, this is getting interesting.
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 2
ok..it's now 6:54 and NOW I decide to try and get some sleep for 35 minutes before the devils wake up...maybe I can sleep and they'll be good and no fighting..fat chance..7 and 4 year old boys. Anyway, I'll be back soon to finish reading..guaranteed that by this time tomorrow, I will have finished this story!!! You must have really changed your mind, because I see there are way more than four to five chapters left.
Night..or Morning..shit, I'm gonna be exhausted..so worth it though
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 2
damn you again..on to the next chapter..now 5:09..ha..should I even go to bed?
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 12: Fuse Part 1
holy shit!!!! that was fucking awesome...and yes, I'm still up saying one more chapter and it's now 4:45 a.m. my kids are going to be up around 7:30...damn you..I have to read the next chapter..I LOVE this story
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2
I started this story tonight at it's now 3:56 a.m....damn you..damn you for writing suh a great story that I keep telling myself one more chapter..one more chapter..I can't go to sleep until SOMETHING happens with them..damn, Edward and Bella are stupid asses..but it just makes them getting together so much better. And by the way, don't apologize for your long chapters..I love them and it just gives us more of your talented writing!!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:42 PM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
okay first off i love this story it was amazing and i know i'm new but i absolutely loved this story through the good and bad times it was amazing
i loved loved loved the outakes and i loved the ending it was perfect how u showed how everyone elses life was going on and i love the relationship between bella and edward even when they were so ablivious that u wanted to hit them
u r an amazing author and u deserve an award
u r on my fav author so i will be looking for more stories
when u write new stories i know they will be a success
so until next time mbellaandedwardm
Reviewer: emilychar (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 15: Practical Part 1
Untouched by The Veronicas ALWAYS makes me think of Twilight, it definately should have made the soundtrack...maybe it will for Eclipse!?
:-)
Reviewer: sistabell (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:56 PM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
awww!! edwards pov of the meadow was so cute! great job! wish this story could go on forever!!
Reviewer: Corinab (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 13: Lovely Part 1
I love some angst!
Reviewer: flutterback (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:39 AM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
Sorry I didn't comment throughout, but I was so captivated I couldn't stop reading. This was such a fantastic story. I love how you portrayed the characters, and I love how you tweaked the relationships but still kept them true to canon. (My only cringe-worthy moment was when they said Bella was dancing with Marcus at the wedding!) But I loved Carlie, and I loved Collin, you had such a way with your original characters.
It was such an enjoyment reading your story. Thank you so much for sharing your gift of writing with us!
Reviewer: fallenangell2010 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:33 PM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
PHEW!!!!!! that is, without doubt, the best fanfiction story i have ever read! im sorry i didnt review after each chapter, but i just couldnt stop reading, in took me 14 solid hours and 1 grumpy husband! lol. right, im going to give me eyes a break and i will be back to read again (i will make sure i review eah chapter this time!!!)
i would just like to say that i actually felt like i was in that story, like a fly on the wall, it was so well written. its so intense, emotional, funny, gripping, god i wish you would write more!!!! lol
well done xxxxxxxxx
Reviewer: hermoinelvsronald (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 16: Wanted Part 1
omg a smart alice! she should have said all this stuff in the real books , it would make them almost as great as this story!
go ALICE!
Reviewer: sabsipinky (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:17 PM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
Oh Edward if you had just told her then things would've been different. SIlly boy. Well it worked out in the end any way. I liked EPOV.
Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 1: "Only the Beginning"
Ah, seriously doubt that last remark...
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 01:17 PM · On: MBFS Outtake (vjgm)
awwww :)
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