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Reviewer: dbg (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2013 02:42 PM · On: Epilogue

Good story. Loved he drama and funny lines.

Reviewer: angelrob (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Pre-teen Vampire

Whoa!  Stefan and Vald!!  Duuuuudes!!!!!!  Poor little Dakota ;-)

Reviewer: nursebrandy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Epilogue

Fantastic read. 

Reviewer: julzrox (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Wolf Cubs

that is soo kewl. Although i wanted Quil to be romantic and stuff its a cool twist

Reviewer: julzrox (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Wolf Cubs

that is soo kewl. Although i wanted Quil to be romantic and stuff its a cool twist

Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Abstractly Expressing My Dread

oh wow. this is uncomfortable.  but Claire's dress was pretty awesome and i can imagine a stud of a Quil in a tux

Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 12:35 AM · On: The Beast with Two Backs

seriously? oh, he's got it bad if that's the best he could do! "shut up!" would have even been better than " i know you are but what am i?" poor guy

Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Hit by the WTF Bus

aw they're finally together, but at the same time it's kind of weird because technically he's around 32 and she's still 17. but hey, what do i know, i've never been imprinted on.  i'm sure if i had a pack brother wanting my goodies, i'd give them too :)

Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Those Chicken Breast Thingys

i think i would have hung out with this Claire when i was 16; she seems really cool. y'know, if she wasn't fictional and all...

Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Xtreme Sand Castling

fire and sand make glass, which would indeed make it xtreme!  i like the funny that's happening here

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Hit by the WTF Bus

i LOVE claire, su funny

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Bout Time, Man!

this chapter is made of love

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Soccer Moms in SUVs

love it

Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Those Chicken Breast Thingys

I love this story and its nice to find some one else who`s so in-love with the idea of imprinting as i am.

Reviewer: moofy (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Epilogue

Another great story.  You are an awesome writer and I really enjoy how well developed your characters are. Can't wait to start the sequel!



Author's Response:

The sequel is available on my fanfiction.net account yay4shanghai

Reviewer: chst (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Enough with This Moving Gravity Already!

Oops, he's determined. Like his PoV better.

Reviewer: chst (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Those Chicken Breast Thingys

I like it.

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Brothers

Dang. So Anna knows Bella? And why did they leave her,maybe has a message?

Reviewer: blessthecharter (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Let's Get Our Drink On!

I would like to point out that the whole reason jared stayed behind is because kim is PREGNANT!!! She should NOT be drinking anything but water, milk, and tea if she gets nauceous.



Author's Response:

Keep reading my friend... Kinm is a tricky lady!

Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Epilogue

Good story. I'm going to have read the other side pieces as well as the sequel. Nice job.

Reviewer: katey07 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:47 PM · On: The Fairest of Them All!

Your story is great. I don't know how you come up with all of this! I think your Kim is also awesome. (I have been reading your companion stories too - they are great). Please keep writing, even though Im not at the end yet, as I only started reading this story today.

Reviewer: katey07 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:47 PM · On: The Fairest of Them All!

Your story is great. I don't know how you come up with all of this! I think your Kim is also awesome. (I have been reading your companion stories too - they are great). Please keep writing, even though Im not at the end yet, as I only started reading this story today.

Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks so much I love your writing!

Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Days 1 to 54

Wow is all I can say! Thanks so much for your writing

Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Hit by the WTF Bus

So excited there's more.

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