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Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Arrival
I'm really intrigued by this concept!!! Please keep going. I wonder how hard it will be to listen to Edward's thoughts when he's constantly hearing everyone else's. This was beyond interesting.
Please update some more!!
Author's Response: I will! Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Arrival
I like the different POV and am interested to see where you go with the story. One little thing, though: It was difficult to read that last huge paragraph without getting lost and just rushing to the end. Add some breaks, separate the conversations perhaps. Just a suggestion. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice and the review! sorry it was hard to read!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Arrival
OHH. I really like this. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! and its coming =]
Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Arrival
OMG I love it!!!! I can't wait to read further chapters!!!! Post ASAP!!!!!!
Author's Response: hehe thank you. the second one should be up soon!!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Arrival
I like it.....write more!
Author's Response: Thank you! the second chapter is already up, just waiting to get approved. =]
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