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Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 03:32 PM · On: It's Downhill from Here

I really am enjoying your little fic universe!  Keep up the great work, I'll be anxiously waiting.....



Author's Response:

It does feel that way, a little fic universe. It feels like there's everybody else's stories, and even my other one, First Kiss, and then there's this one :)

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 03:18 PM · On: It's Downhill from Here

WoW! What a fic. I hope to see another chapter soon!

Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Early Years

Just one more reason to not like anyone associated with Jessica.  lol   I hope Esme gets to keep her.  Is Edward Magic?  Cuz he took her pain away...at least he took some of her pain away.  I was kinda like woah..and then hmmmmm....so yeah..please be nice to Bella and let her stay with Esme.

Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 03:07 PM · On: It's Downhill from Here

Please continue.  :)  I want to see when Dreamward and Bella meet in reality. 

Reviewer: beetlejuicelover (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 02:46 PM · On: It's Downhill from Here

Aww! I hope Esme finds a way to keep her. Also, if you ever want to loan Dreamward out.. ;) Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, but Dreamward can't be loaned out. He's too dedicated to the Char Trust.

Reviewer: Abasketcase (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 02:38 PM · On: It's Downhill from Here

don't get ahead of yourself. your dreamward isn't the first.

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:59 PM · On: It's Downhill from Here

Oh, poor Bella. I have a feeling things aren't going to be so great for her for awhile.



Author's Response:

You feel right :D

Reviewer: onelove0814 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:28 PM · On: It's Downhill from Here

Tell me she will meet Edward in person soon! I really like this story, but I hope happiness is on it's way! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

You hope happiness is on the way.... hmmm.......... *cough*

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:25 PM · On: It's Downhill from Here

*sniff* That was sad.  And that Mrs. Stanley was a bitch.  Esme should have punched her when she gave her the card.  Just kidding.  Keep updating!



Author's Response:

I think she should've as well, but Esme's too much of a lady to do anything like that :)

Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 12:40 PM · On: It's Downhill from Here

i was just thinking baout your fic today when I realized i never added it to my fav/alert list...and i coudln't remeber the name...so imagine how overjoyed I was when i checked under most recent and there it was!!! YAY!!! LOVE IT!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks.

Reviewer: twilightlover96 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 11:58 AM · On: It's Downhill from Here

I love how you dubbed him dreamward. Very original. Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Well I love Dreamward :)

Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 11:49 AM · On: It's Downhill from Here

NO,NO, NO, Bella and Alice cannot be seperated! 

If she is taken away, omg, Esmas heart will just break. 

ugh.  I don't want to see them take her.

I have to say, I'm very intrigued by this story.  I'm wondering if Edward and Bella every meet in a conscious world? 

Loving it so far.

Thanks

Reviewer: QuantumMechanic (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 11:43 AM · On: It's Downhill from Here

WHA!?

She won't really be taken away though, will she?

I'm guessing... Esme argues and gets all 'grrr' maternal and whatnot and all is well with the world?

Though I'm usually wrong :P

It's really good so far!

Can't wait to see what happens with Edward... and Charlie... gah! What a bitch.

I don't usually leave reviews but this is trez interesting and unusual.

Love it. :D



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I'm glad to find somebody else who's weird enough to include french in everything. I do that. A lot. At least I have an excuse, though, I am taking french for GCSE (British exams).

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 11:41 AM · On: It's Downhill from Here

well. im not good at making funny reviews, so... sry i cant make those, but this story is really good so far!



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I'm crap at is as well. I just like reading funny things :D I'm a major lover of the crackfic section on here. Especially A Series of Cullenly Events. That's got my name written all over it :D

Reviewer: skg910 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 11:37 AM · On: It's Downhill from Here

Okay so how was all of Bella's pain transfered to Edward? Confusing!?! And they can NOT take Bella away from Esme - I will be so ticked!!!!



Author's Response:

It was.... *wiggles fingers* magic! The whole meadow is magic, you know? And Edward takes the pain from Bella so she doesn't have to feel it when she's asleep in the meadow. I personally thought that it was very sweet, but I have been known to take pictures of all/any couples showing and PDA on the street, so I kinda have the tendancy to find anything sweet, but hey.

Ticked... hehe. I'm going start using that expression...

Reviewer: aai0528 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Early Years

So far so good! I'm interested in reading how Edward will come more into the story.

Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Moving Onward

i like it. its not as juvinile as some of the abuse stories ive read. it seems  very real but the meadow ads the slightest bit of sureality. i try not to rush amazing authors but i"m anxious for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I know what you mean about not rushing authors. If anything, it sometimes slows them down a little. Especially if the review just says 'update soon!' or something like that, with no other feedback. Sadly, like I said in the review down there>>

I need to get EVERYTHING Betad and my Beta is pretty busy at the moment and is catching a load of planes as far as I can make out, so I don't know how long it might be, or it might be tomorrow. You'll never know OoOoOoOoOo.

Thanks for your review :)

~Char

Reviewer: beetlejuicelover (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Moving Onward

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: ImprintedForever (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Moving Onward

I love this story, I wish it was possible for you to update faster.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, but I'm afraid it isn't. I have to get everything thouroughly Betad because of my appalling grammar and spelling and then it has to get submitted :( But, just so you know, I'm going as fast as I possibly can and I'm about 800 words in to chapter 4, so it isn't because I haven't written it!

~Char

Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Moving Onward

Yep, still good.

No hate mail from me, I like that you make the characters real. There are real people in the world that are just like your version of Charlie, it's crappy, but it's fact. Inside they are people, even if they're monsters on the outside. You don't have to make excuses for writing the truth.

You're awesome. You're awesome for writing this, you're awesome for being my beta, you're awesome for liking Emporer's New Groove, you're awesome for putting up with me, and you're awesome for being wonderfully weird. I mean that in the best possible way of course.

Look at all your reviews!!! Whoo-hoo!

Please note that the beginning of each sentence of the above is single spaced. :)

Keep it up!

Jax



Author's Response:

I know that you're right about the whole 'real people out there like that' thing, but there are some people, you know, the people who just go around on stories and insult the author for anything they can pick up on to insult on... if that makes sense. And because I'm a lazy ass I copy and paste my author's note :D

I personally think that nobody can be awesome if they DON'T like Emperor's New Groove, it is one of the most awesome movies I think I have ever seen. How could people NOT like it?! You are seriously giving me a Emperor's New Groove fetish, I will now go raid my parents' DVD collection and search for it, and if we don't own it, I AM GOING ON AMAZON!

Thumbs up for the double spacing :) and thanks for reviewing!

~Char

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Moving Onward

I look forward to the rest of your story!

Reviewer: Miramac (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Moving Onward

This plot has awesome potential! Edward's so sweet! Usually nine year old boys are evil incarnate. Poor Charlie... losing everything and dying alone in an unkempt bathroom while higher than a kite.



Author's Response:

Haha. Yes, I understand what you mean about usual nine year old boys. I have a younger brother myself. But this is EDWARD, of course he's going to be perfect!

I think I might quote that last bit on my blog, it really made me laugh :D

Reviewer: EverlongYou (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Moving Onward

love it :)

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Moving Onward

I'm guessing both E and B go to the meadow when they sleep, but they way you've writen it, it seems like E is just a fixture of the meadow and never leaves... which is right? Or do I just have to keep reaing to find out? :)



Author's Response:

In the next chapter it hints at the fact that Edward is from the real world a little more, but Bella thinks that he is a fixture of the meadow, which is why it seems like that in the scenes set in the meadow, because in these last two chapters the meadow scenes have been in Bella's point of view for the most part, or neither of their's. But, in the third chapter theres a bit of a meadow scene that's in Edward's perspective so it become clearer.

~Char

Reviewer: Earth Sorceress (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Moving Onward

I'm really enjoying this so far.  Dream Edward is so sweet!



Author's Response:

I am in love with Dream Edward. Hands off! :P

~Char

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